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KnightShade 03-27-03 03:55 PM

KnightShade VS Mr Spit
 
25 bar max 2 lines = 1 bar in my book's.

highest poll vote wins, if poll vote is tied, we use text votes.

new option, mr spit must agree.

whoever wins the battle we can have alldig set the other persons Title as : if i won, KnightShade's Bitch

if you won, Mr Spit's Bitch, this would last for only 1 week, then titles reset. if you agree cool if not still cool.

good luck.

KnightShade 03-27-03 04:28 PM

first off...
 
your opponents are weak, it's been said before, i think i'll use a metaphor/
against the feeble you play shuffleboard, at bingo you're a predator!/
but now you're headin' for...a man skilled at strategic war/
i stay above rim, you never 'touch glass' like pink squeegies at a car store/
i'm far more- than you expected, can't copy what's on point and perfected/
with punches like jurassic park sequels, come on, they never connected/
the water's tepid, so get your ass in, i'm ready to start thrashin'/
i put mr.spit through loops...in a 60's gremlin with the seatbelt unfastened/
knightshade is the shining star, shining far...beyond the maxim/
you're no supernova, you're just two chevy novas crashin'/
so who's askin' for the axe throw, you can't headline in the last row/
not a front man, mr.spit's 'back up' like my 6 o'clock shadow/
and you act as though, you're not really wack and it's just what folks say/
scottyC was icing on the cake? you only winnin it 'cause it was your birthday!
thought the bet was mild, ok, i've got two fangs that say you transpire/
time to aim higher, as i raise the stakes like a vampire/
enough hellfire, already called the beast, and released the last seal/
what's your angle anyway? with that small frame like a 1920's film reel/
thug appeal? that's no deal, what kind of a hoodlum...
gets on his knees 5 times a day, and isn't even a muslim?/
the feud's done, so even if you amaze me, drop a few punches on top/
i'm the big fish in the sea, you don't really wanna watch my jaw drop/
so just stop- being so sensitive...
mr.spit i don't care about winnin, i'm an angry man and it's evident/
i'm kickin' ass like a frustrated himalayan resident...
who could have got a cheap benz a month ago,
and now he's knee deep in the snow wishing he wasn't so hesitant/
so don't just stand there, with this rope and white hoody i stir fear...
damn, if i wasn't white i'd be every herb's nightmare!

KnightShade 03-27-03 09:49 PM

uppin for this fuckin herb

X Ecution 03-27-03 11:04 PM

good shyt knight re the productions 1

mr.spit 03-28-03 08:57 AM

checkin in

mr.spit 03-28-03 10:23 AM

yes i agree wit dat rule aight holla

aight look

dude your wack im just gonna give you a brief demonstration,
next time you decide to battle me only thing in ya mind will be hesitation//
you couldnt get lively rhymes if you were equiped wit gene mutation,
cause you rhymes always make me sleepy just like a bear in hibernation//
your shits like soap in my eyes a fucken irritation,
i doesnt only come from me its everyonez speculation//
imma make ya shit sound old cause im da new edition,
the only way you could argue your way to win is if you were a fucken politician//
ima mathmatikal statistician...thats equal to me beatin you,
it could be 1,000,000 to me...and id still defeat you//
this is da middle of da battle da fucken intermission,
you wont be able to come for da second half you wont be in fighting condition//
you couldnt get commission(money) if you were in a military position,
cause im huntin you before you get it wit infared on a rifle and i aint missin//
kid listen my words are golden like da atomic energy commission,
they decinigrate your surrondings like diseases wipped out by ya pediatrition//
i put ya outta commission wit dis nuclear fission,
i cut you out and fill you like a cavity done by a dental technician//
this aint even a battle this a fucken open mic,
and im still rippin you wit this shit right, dyke!//
your biggest words bout 8 letters is that as far as it goes,
i still dont call this a battle i consider it a no-show//
so which is it bitch night or shade,
your losses column is "virgin" but bout to "get laid"//
you say you raise da stakes just lika a vampire,
well im puttin in ya chest ima make ya life expire//
bitch you aint no nightmare dont no herb fear you ,
you could saddam and ya soulja still wouldnt follow you//
you just angry you say its all relevant,
ima lyrikally murder you and walk away leavin da evidence//
yeah i am in da front row smashin your face dodgin your axe throw,
you graze my skin and my gun blazes cause my skin has been broke//
your not what i expected i expected a lil better,
i could do more damage than ya punches wit a dull knife used to open letters//
i make ya bleed in possibly way shape or form,
dont even need a weapon my lyriks leave ya skin torn//
i dont drop just a few punches all of em land on top,
you should forfeit now back out just fucken stop//
(closer)
you have only wun unit of ammuntion in a hostile expedition,
ima shut you up for good so your will to battl is what you missin//

mr.spit 03-28-03 10:24 AM

uppin ofr votes

Shadow God 03-28-03 10:30 AM

This battle was raw.
I am not gonna vote though for various reasons.
Nice to see you again, KnightShade.
I guess that break up in O.N.E. made you better.
Keep ya head up, dun.
That's peace.
Yall did good.

One Hundred...

Deception 03-28-03 11:03 AM

I'm not votin either, for the same reasons. I'd just like to mention 2 things....

First, the bitch that voted should really explain WHY

Second, 'cause you rhymes always make me sleepy just like a bear in hibernation'.... uhhh remember how this is RAPBATTLES not the fuckin discovery channel? Super, now I know that bears hibernate when they get sleepy. What I don't know is why the fuck someone would vote for you with punchlines like that.... DAMN

KnightShade 03-28-03 11:31 AM

I LOVE FEEDERS


votes will come my way trust me, and i wont need my crew to vote for me to win this, it was probly his own crew member votin for him, we can get alldig to check for us.

mr.spit 03-28-03 11:45 AM

yes voters will come

KnightShade 03-28-03 01:10 PM

uppin

AMEND 03-28-03 01:29 PM

:(
Ok, KnightShade Got This With Better Expeirence ANd Vocab, Mr.Spit, U Need To Learn How To Flow On Text, It Might Sound Good A Certain Way In Your Head But How Do VOTERS Know How To Recite It? Exactly, So Work On Your Bar Structure And Re-Word Yaself So It Leaves People Guessin Almost In What Your Gonna Say Next, KnightShade, I See Your Elevatin But U Need To Work On Punches And Originality, Sometimes U Might Think Its Good To Use A Used Concept And To Add Your Own Style To It But Its Still What It Was, A Used Concept.........Both Of Yall Can Elevate And Its Expected, So Keep Battlin And Take Your Time With Ya Verse, Best Thing I Learned Is To Slow Down On Battles, If U Battle 3 Times A Week Then Thats That Many Punches U Already Used And Then Your Settin Your Own Standards Low Cause U Cant Think So U Just Make A Verse Thats Played Or Not ILL......Cut Back On Battles And Take Your Time On The Ones U End Up Doin, You'll Definitley See A Change In All Of Your Work.......Thats How i Learned.....so stay up

KnightShade 03-28-03 02:20 PM

uppin 1-1 on poll votes, amend please post your poll vote.

~RuThLEss~ 03-28-03 02:33 PM

AIght to be real....i think Mr spit took this by a bit....that was close but overall verse Mr spit was better...but knightshade was close....

I'm a ghost.........


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