Hit_Man ...VS... lyricallyabusive
 

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no bullshit votes
spit within 20 mins of checkin in

chek in................................................ ....

chekkkkk this!!!!!!!

no feedin......crew.........d/r.....n i will give opinion on ur battlez......leave linkz

The battles already over (i won), but yet this battle hasjust began
Your punches aren't hitting......so save the "hits" for ur "man"....
hit_man???....shit man..."leave"....ur shytz all fuked up n' wackk
It's as if this waz actual football...and ur the one "running back"
Yo dis guy says max eight linez..read da rulez....da min. iz ten
now watch as he feeds off my verse...he copyin it..herez a pen!
"hitman???"...change that......cuz this "mans" just been "hit"
mah punches r piling on u..they makin holez in ur verse..bit by bit
b4 u post ur obvious prewritten verse..make sure its better than mine..
Now hez signing a contract with the site...this wannab has jus resigned....

number 1...u didnt call me out anywhere....not even in bitch slapped.....n u juss set it up w.o me knowin......but i still killed u
2) min iz 10 lines.........dumass dick
3)...........upppppppiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 4 ya votez!!!!!!

hmmmmmm......he did not spit yet so i am going to break down urs until he spits....

The battles already over (i won), but yet this battle has just began
Your punches aren't hitting......so save the "hits" for ur "man"....
^^....nicee....
hit_man???....shit man..."leave"....ur shytz all fuked up n' wackk
It's as if this waz actual football...and ur the one "running back"
^^nice wordplay.....first line..u culd work on that a lil'

Yo dis guy says max eight linez..read da rulez....da min. iz ten
now watch as he feeds off my verse...he copyin it..herez a pen!
^^werd at the first line....nice...
hitman???"...change that......cuz this "mans" just been "hit"
mah punches r piling on u..they makin holez in ur verse..bit by bit
^^once again....nice word play....ok 2nd line...

b4 u post ur obvious prewritten ur verse..make sure its better than mine..
Now hez signing a contract with the site...this wannab has jus resigned...
loll.....nice 2nd line.....
overall-- um.......id give u a 8/10 or 7.....nice 4 a newb....

How ya gonna Win, my verse'll be tha only thing Providing ya Game
Aside from ya Brain, 1 hit from me'll have ya body Lyin in Flame
So i advise ya Game Plan ta Stay set on Dodge'n tha Punches
Fuck tryin to hit back, jus focus on Survive'n fo Crunches
Im Violent wit Hunches, n my first Thought is ill Leave ya wit a Broke Back
Ya lose'n ya breath, thas Rap? i thought it was a violent Choke Act
Ill be supprised if u Wrote Back, wut u lookin fo Death?
Leave'n u Shook, fuck u 'Rook's my flow got niggaz mo hooked then tha Meth

number 1...u didnt call me out anywhere....not even in bitch slapped.....n u juss set it up w.o me knowin......but i still killed u
2) min iz 10 lines.........dumass dick
3)...........upppppppiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 4 ya votez!!!!!!
^^u stupid nigga?

number 1... u came to my thread dumb bitch
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113433
2) eat a dick, im new to tha site (u kno all tha rules... uve prolly been around a while.... and u still a newb here??? :laugh: )
3) :thefinger

get to vote'n

How ya gonna Win, my verse'll be tha only thing Providing ya Game
Aside from ya Brain, 1 hit from me'll have ya body Lyin in Flame
^^ok....pretty good
So i advise ya Game Plan ta Stay set on Dodge'n tha Punches
Fuck tryin to hit back, jus focus on Survive'n fo Crunches
^^nice....
Im Violent wit Hunches, n my first Thought is ill Leave ya wit a Broke Back
Ya lose'n ya breath, thas Rap? i thought it was a violent Choke Act
^^ok.....u culd make that better
Ill be supprised if u Wrote Back, wut u lookin fo Death?
Leave'n u Shook, fuck u 'Rook's my flow got niggaz mo hooked then tha Meth
^^he already spit.....

break down:
opener: lyric
closer: tie.....both a lil weak
punches:.....ummmm.........i wuld say lyricallyabusive for the running back line....
wordplay: easily by lyrically abusive
structure: lyric......self-explanatiory
flow: ite......both good
vote: lyricallyabusive........nice for a newb......
ill pm u mah battle.......1

letz c dis battle should go2 lyrically...u newb stop ur trying n go vs. som otha newbs...abusive got dis battle like nottin..so leave rb

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aight easy battle to decide lyrical took dis one in every catergory da other cat had da ill gay flow, punches and had no fuckin structure, dis was a very easy battle to decide lyrical's punches were harder thrown and his structure was off a bit but not as much as da other cat....
very easy battle to decide
vote=lyricallyabbusive no hate
sorry i cant poll

^^ ill gay???? :thefinger fuck u fagget, n u cant poll because U CANT VOTE........ dumbass

0-1 uppin

vote for me peeps ill vote u back

The battles already over (i won), but yet this battle hasjust began
Your punches aren't hitting......so save the "hits" for ur "man"....
^^Not to bad but I think you could come on with a stronger opening.^^^
hit_man???....shit man..."leave"....ur shytz all fuked up n' wackk
It's as if this waz actual football...and ur the one "running back
^^Perrrrrfect! Nice metaphor you did a good job.^^^
Yo dis guy says max eight linez..read da rulez....da min. iz ten
now watch as he feeds off my verse...he copyin it..herez a pen!
^^^ Nice Punch it was well delivered and you it flowed in nicely^^^
"hitman???"...change that......cuz this "mans" just been "hit"
mah punches r piling on u..they makin holez in ur verse..bit by bit
^^^Again nicely done by flowing off the pen giving haha^^^
b4 u post ur obvious prewritten verse..make sure its better than mine..
Now hez signing a contract with the site...this wannab has jus resigned....
^^^Good ending seeing as when someone resigns it ends they're job and you ended your verse^^^ GOOD JOB.


How ya gonna Win, my verse'll be tha only thing Providing ya Game
Aside from ya Brain, 1 hit from me'll have ya body Lyin in Flame
^^^N2bad but again the openings arn't always the easiest to do^^^
So i advise ya Game Plan ta Stay set on Dodge'n tha Punches
Fuck tryin to hit back, jus focus on Survive'n fo Crunches
^^^Good Punch haha (get it?) didn't think so. . ^^^
Im Violent wit Hunches, n my first Thought is ill Leave ya wit a Broke Back
Ya lose'n ya breath, thas Rap? i thought it was a violent Choke Act
^^^Hmm that line seems suspicious but it was good^^^
Ill be supprised if u Wrote Back, wut u lookin fo Death?
Leave'n u Shook, fuck u 'Rook's my flow got niggaz mo hooked then tha Meth
^^^hmm I do not quite get that ending maybe it's just me. . . ^^^ Good job

Overall vote goes to lyricallyabusive

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