Hoops vs. Miss. Lyricist
 

Since I'm making the thread, these are the rules:

10-15 lines.
No D/R
No crew votes
No hatin votes
No recycling
No feeding

Check in 20 mins or DQ
You spit first, shauty

C'mon Hoops! Where is yah man? When you log back on, you better have some tight shit worth me waiting for... :gfy:

iight my bad.. had to go get breakfast wit my girl..didnt think ud respind this fast lol.. here it is


heavly-enchanted, plunge you in ceptic-tank, ya thougths transmit/
impale forks in ya throat, so they look like you were born-implanted/
like the hulk in jail, i will internally destroy ya bars/
like you a jap in the U.S, ima new threat, like instant sars/
3-0, missy how you feel being my first win/
like a record, all you do to ya rhymes is flip,scratch and spinn/
treat you like a bad skateboarder, have ya face-planted/
this bitch so ugly she need a half-mask liek the phantom/
im bout to leave you disabled like a soldier with no arms/
and like a dog wit no teeth, ya *bites* do-me no harm/
kissin you is prolly a story id like untold/
kinda like stickin ya tounge in opra-winfreys asshole/
girl you aint got no verbal sawed-off, ammunition is long lost/
heres a remedy for that small *cough*, get ya claws mauled off/

14 lines... Had to size the original down to fit my limit. lol Here I go, let's spin this shit.

You couldn’t knit some tight shit that was worth me reading it if I gave you the sewing kit//
It seems as if bit by bit as you hawk and spit, yah shit get’s drier by the second, not the minute//
I multi-task, typing this shit really fast, so I can go get my hurr done and come back to lambaste yah//
And if you don’t understand that word man, it means beat the hell out yo ass and remove your vocal bands, suh//
Go to dictionary.com while I take that A grade mess you call a “pslam” and flush it//
Whatever the fuck you’ve been eating- you sho need to lay off it//
Where’s the Glade- get some spray- you didn’t care what you dropped, just said bombs away//
Don’t light a match or you’ll send us all to doomsday!//
If I give him a discount to Hoes-to-Go (cause he can’t seem to get laid by anyone he know)//
Maybe he’ll stop spittin’ shit like sloppy joes, and if every nigga’s like you, I DON’T WANNA RAP NO MO!!!//
This dawg has delivered and I WANT MY MONEY BACK//
He’s got me taken aback, he couldn’t be more cracked than an egg dripping the yolk sac//
The guarantee promised me a rapper of high degree, but I’m gonna disagree and file a complaint with RB//
Just another fool added to my signature marquee...//

ay guys, if i vote on this battle, will u guys return tha favor and vote on tha battle in my sig against Smokey joe?

Alright... vote folks! Please. *batts eyelashes*

My votes is love'n miss, for tha face, her punchlines hit harder, most of tha lines i seen in hoops rhymes was used, especailly this one,"3-0, missy how you feel being my first win/
like a record, all you do to ya rhymes is flip,scratch and spinn/"
I see it a lil oto much, Miss was more origninal, she was use'n her own stuff, so she gets my vote. Miss return tha favor, on tha battle in my sig against smokey plz! ;)

PeaCE.

you say'n i bite... ? ok lol... up'n.. seemed like a riding vote to me, but iis all good.. holla back... UP

Lil scrappy, if you were dick riding, please allow me to disqualify yah vote. But I truly think I deserved it, even though Hoops did his thang.

naw forreal, i wasnt feeln it, im not sayn u bite'n but them linez is just used way to much. ive seen that one i posted up in like 5 rhymes.

Ok, Ima keep it brief, but direct

Hoops: your opener was wack, but you made up for it later. Your best line to me was the SARs bit, but you could have wrote that better to have more punch. You spent most of you time talking about yourself, and not enough focusing on Miss L. Your style was o'kay, but some of your thoughts seemed too random. Alot of your bars seem too stretched...you either put too much or no thought into em.

Miss L: You had nice structure, and you improved each line, hittin' harder and harder. You were creative wit your rime and you pulled the audience in with your mild humor. Your punches were on point, and personals tight. You were just better overall.

Vote: Miss L.

As far as the cypher goes, if it were just that ( a cypher), then i'd go with hoops. but since disses were involved, i think that mayber hoops should of spit a longer verse, or try harder to damage her. she insulted him kinda bad, so i have to barley go with miss lyricist.

though i liked hoops word play more, but she was dissin you cuz...

damn yo... i might get ko'd.. 0-3 so far... i guess you right i wasent really spittin at her, was focused on flo more.. aight uppin

still uppin'

Upin' for more votes, y'all.

Hoops, you intimidated me, well, not really, but enough to hit you with a verse more complex than what I originally wanted to hit you with.