thing vs. bonezcollecterr
 

10 lines
blindspit
30 min due time
if you dont drop in 30 you lose i win
no hate d/r votes
no krew votes
no bull shit.. ../votes
no feeding
no biting
no recycling
no anything thats gay or breaks the rules,if ya gonna respond
its either to accept or tell me to make it or w/e.. ..check in too

checking in.. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..

iight herr we go ima drop ina couple of minutes

i wan say 2 thangs, first of i aint losing, like i said... -2 thangs-//
second the only time you get THE W is when u listening to -WU TANG-//

you probly just a ugly ass nigga, and if you dont agree, you know damn well you be in -de-nial-//
if you was FUCKING wit FREE.. and got 2 more STYLES.. you could'nt fuck wit -FREE(three)STYLES-//

imma spit 16 bars, fuck the rules -you declared-//
great exaple this nigga is, fucking :::it::: STAY ON MY NUTS like -PUBIC HAIR-//

you go to work to get PAID, but soon as ya get to da ATM, i -snach yo PAY-//
look at you with your CHEESEY rhymes, hate to bust your bubble.. but today -NATCHO day-//

c'mon, you not popping shit, holla at me when you find out actually -who spray thangs-//
im not finna LOSE, cause lets face it, only "L's" bone ever see are da one in -COOL J's name-//
holla at ya boy bone 0n3

wow, i must say that was sum pretty wacked up shyt, lolol, well lets c wat ur oppenent can dish out at the table, u betta hope he sucks more then u or just cna rap at all

this muthafucka is trash LOL!!!!!!!!
Try again nigga!!!!!

haha u wish u just on things dick son
and remember no dick ridin votes
so i aint gonna let ya mofo'z vote

yo son u got next cuz this aint my best spit
u got apeice of me lets go

nah nigga u's ass..
4real no Bull
and i dont kno dis nigaa 2 dick ryde either1

this aint what u want up ya game fam b4 we go at it

Bone you faggot biter, he bit in my verse too... I'm reading the verse right now

http://www.forums.hiphopgame.com/sh...=&threadid=4430

....What to say....
Some very played lines....
punches were.. blah... weak
wordplay was... never seen
Personals... were unknown
He tried to glorify himself to much
structure.......wtf does he kno what it means?
Overall... needs elevation... 8/20





Eh.. decent
Punches were... soft but ok
Personals were... blah.. not really
Structure was better than bonez
Wordplay was original.. not great
Flow was good... ... ...
Overall.. decent... 12/20


V/Thing

For everyone to be talking shit..Bone'z pulled out ontop with this one..his verse was weak, but it was mad funny..played lines..but some of them was creative..need to fix your structure..and Bretern..he didnt bite you ass..cant you see it's the same name...he recycled..but he still got the win..had some wordplay..that natcho line was funny as fuck..I will give your verse a 5/20

Thing..too laid back..underestimated him..punches was weak..a very sad attempt at multis..no real hard hitting punches..vocab was.."ewww'..you dont use the word "ewww' in your damn verse..not a good idea..no wordplay..or none was evident..anyway..I will give your verse a 4/10..
yep..my vote goes to bonez..too bad I cant vote..but Im stating my opinion..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112962

i hate when my struc is off.. ..w/e.. ..

BoNe'zCoLlEcTeRr.. ..< exactly like that.. ..please kill ya self
i didnt no capital 2 lower case was still da thing 2 do.. ..u need help
& ya wanabe pistol thing.. ..i will say hello.. ..cuz u have no power
i mean u spent a week to make that.. ..get a clue.. ..it doesnt tower
from DiRtY~sOuTh.. ..shut ya mouth.. ..cuz i'll rip ya snout.. ..da fuck?
u not nas.. ..look then pause.. ..realize u a fraud.. ..kinda odd.. ..huh?
how u gona say u collect bones..means how many times fucked in ass
how u gona stay n erect zones..impadent haunts ya rhymes..next, pass
so jus stfu u stupid mother fucker i hate u.. ..every1 will rape u,eat u
ya diseatful.. ..full of the wrong produce,ya brand doesnt make it,eww