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Life of the lifeless..
The life of the lifeless,can be perceived as both shallow and great
living out of two carrier bags or owning colossal estates. does this bring happiness? only one man can tell coz to some happiness is a cardboard box ,bottle of J.daniels onlookers see the latter as a stinking No mark that might well be dead. perceive him as a human..hes got 2 arms legs and a head. he might be happier than you in his gleeful contentmunt. it is the person looking on with the deepest resentment.. LOOK AT THIS... |
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UPPINN for some fee dudes..
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This was a good little piece. I would of liked to see a bit more from you on this piece just to see how consistent you verse would have been. The 1st two lines drawed me into this piece and had the most potential..
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The life of the lifeless,can be perceived as both shallow and great
living out of two carrier bags or owning colossal estates. true this life is full of dualities, thsu the confusion does this bring happiness? only one man can tell coz to some happiness is a cardboard box ,bottle of J.daniels happiness or contentment? onlookers see the latter as a stinking No mark that might well be dead. perceive him as a human..hes got 2 arms legs and a head. think you could've developed this concept more he might be happier than you in his gleeful contentmunt. i think you spelled that wrong it is the person looking on with the deepest resentment.. LOOK AT THIS... nice peace non the less i like the different stance on the topic. |
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