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Polifick vs Da Magician 7
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check i dunno who spits da lines first? i aint dat good im jus doin dis fo fun...iight go when ya ready i guezz
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yo dis shit aint even supposed 2 be hot here but imma jus say suntin corny ~!I1I!~
shoot u in da back of da head ya nose poked out n' ya head throbbin.... 1 shot in ya breast will red ya chest u'll look like a robin.... |
Ok Dont Have 2 Try 4 This...But o-well
Neva 2 Win A Leauge Times Up On Tha Clock... Tha Day He Makes a Punchline?? .................When Shaq Make 3point Shot.... |
This was a pretty tight one.
Magician, I think you should have dropped better, cuz that punch was really that great. But it flowed alright I guess. But good try. Polifik, lol this was tight shit. Nice job wit the Shaq shootin' 3 shit. I liked this one. You didn't try, but it was still a hot punch. v/Polifik |
blah blah... poor wording on the first one, poor concept on the second. pol still wins though.
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shaq made a 3 polifik no beef but dat was dumb 2 say...shaq made a buzza beater 3 when he was in orlando iight ~!i1i!~
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^^ Wow Once....upp................................
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good shit doe lolz u prolly won so ~!i1i!~
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Da Magician dont forget to vote on 5 battles and edit ur check in with the links....ery link u are missing u get a point deducted from ur points....and the points make up where u r on the rankings...
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polifick nice bar, good flow, concept was wack but it was iight
magician i kno u coulda dropped hotter, it wasnt worded well, good multis but the punch didnt hit, no hate v/pol |
-Damagician7.
shoot u in da back of da head ya nose poked out n' ya head throbbin.... 1 shot in ya breast will red ya chest u'll look like a robin.... coo flow, aight wordplay, aight punch -Polifick. Neva 2 Win A Leauge Times Up On Tha Clock... Tha Day He Makes a Punchline?? .................When Shaq Make 3point Shot.... average flow, coo wordplay, straight punch Overall, I think Pol got this. He had wittier wordplay and a better worded punch. Mag, yu had too much of the same word/idea in your verse that wrecked your creativity, like shot/shoot, head and basically made another gun line extrememly obvious. Pol, your structure's really annoying, but I can live with it haha. Maybe add a more complex flow next time mayne. Ya still did aight though. Vote - Polifick. |
Vote=Polifick
Magician had a ok punch,but Polifick had a nice punch.Nice wordplay on it.Decent punch. |
I gotta say..pol won this punchline....da magician..u used..head to many times..it mad the 2 lines boring and really weak..polifick..had me laughing after hearing ...the shaq...line lol
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