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Kwell .vs. Vango
 ^4 votes...remember to vote clearly^
Rules. Read & Good Luck Check Ins Are Due Tuesday By 12 Midnight Eastern Verses Are Due Fridays By 12 Midnight Eastern Voting Ends Sunday At 12 Midnight Eastern |
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12 is cool check
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Dude names himself after Vincent, for art he ditches his cause
he illustrates dogs...jus so he can say he's ever had a bitch in his draws pitiful...and if ya wackness dont leave u down, i'll leave u truly saddened i'ma bury ya face in the gutter bitch, jus to curb your enthusiasm i notice that u aint smart at all, when i come thru and strike skulls it's funny how jokes go over ya head, but never the light bulb i try and merk this hoe quick, but he runs till his lungs are aching that's why takin Vango dead serious....is such a huge undertaking i should even try on this dude...no need for ferocious lines or a tight form cuz he blows, ...........and by doin that, he thinks he can take the world by storm Vango ya scriptures are weak, too easy for my verse ta' shake, clown and wit lines so fragile.....u leave voters wit nervous break downs |
I'll start with your Proper Kwallifications, kid you don't even own a rap degree
I got freestyle raps that'll make your lungs collapse like you were O.D.B I peeped some of your battles Kwell, half your shit don't even rhyme Your sig says "Dopeness speaks for itself", I guess that your a mime Your like Roy Jones in a heavyweight match, underweight and outclassed How can you be in "Mind above Body", when your heads stuck in your ass Is it Kwell or Kwali, I've since your battles so I know it aint Mos Def This kid wouldn't be dope even if I changed your name to Crystal Meth All your punches are catchin air Kwell while Vango is checking chins You could create 7 aliases, vote for yourself, and still not even win Changed the name of this league so much that it's got confusing Oh now I get why they changed the name, it's cuz Kwell Loves Losing |
Line 7 should read- Is it Kwell or Kwali, I seen your battles so I know it aint Mos Def
Good luck. |
just so everyone knows, i changed my title from "Proper Kwalifications" yesterday...before anyone thinks otherwise...
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vote from the mod man......
Kwell....aight verse...you should have put in some harder punches yours were like blah...hit but slide off vango, your struc was ok personals were the same as your punches, could of been better, overall you should of came harder cuz your closer was weak-Revoke Vango.....pretty nice verse, like some of those punches and they made me laugh like the mime line and him having his head stuck in his ass, pretty nice ish def hit harder than K's verse thats why you got this V/Vango |
Kwell:
Dude names himself after Vincent, for art he ditches his cause he illustrates dogs...jus so he can say he's ever had a bitch in his draws ^^^lmao, nice opener pitiful...and if ya wackness dont leave u down, i'll leave u truly saddened i'ma bury ya face in the gutter bitch, jus to curb your enthusiasm ^^^didn't jump out at me...decent punch i notice that u aint smart at all, when i come thru and strike skulls it's funny how jokes go over ya head, but never the light bulb ^^^aight punch i try and merk this hoe quick, but he runs till his lungs are aching that's why takin Vango dead serious....is such a huge undertaking ^^^played i should even try on this dude...no need for ferocious lines or a tight form cuz he blows, ...........and by doin that, he thinks he can take the world by storm ^^^lines too stretched, decent Vango ya scriptures are weak, too easy for my verse ta' shake, clown and wit lines so fragile.....u leave voters wit nervous break downs ^^^first line too stretched, aight closer overall a aight verse, you got potential kid 7/10 I'll start with your Proper Kwallifications, kid you don't even own a rap degree I got freestyle raps that'll make your lungs collapse like you were O.D.B ^^^little stretched for a opener...self glorifying I peeped some of your battles Kwell, half your shit don't even rhyme Your sig says "Dopeness speaks for itself", I guess that your a mime ^^^ha, nice Your like Roy Jones in a heavyweight match, underweight and outclassed How can you be in "Mind above Body", when your heads stuck in your ass ^^^lmao, nice punch on the crew Is it Kwell or Kwali, I've since your battles so I know it aint Mos Def This kid wouldn't be dope even if I changed your name to Crystal Meth ^^^aight punch here, good nameplay on first line All your punches are catchin air Kwell while Vango is checking chins You could create 7 aliases, vote for yourself, and still not even win ^^^good punch here Changed the name of this league so much that it's got confusing Oh now I get why they changed the name, it's cuz Kwell Loves Losing ^^^best bar of the match :thumbup: overall a nice verse 8/10 this was a close battle, Vango edged kwell in this by a bit in this, with nice personals, and that closer was ill...both verses flows fine, both verses structures are decent, vango took this for harder hitting punches, and better vocab voted for: Vango |
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Vote: Kwell
Wittier... I liked lighhtbulb line How could u use ODB lines, Vango... :nono: |
I liked both......I thought each came out pretty strong in this one and each had a line that actually made me chuckle a bit, but Vango seemed to have a couple played lines in his verse that brought it down a bit. If he could have stayed a little more consistant he might have pulled it out......but that head out of your ass line had me dying :thumbup:
Vote - Kwell |
Dude names himself after Vincent, for art he ditches his cause
he illustrates dogs...jus so he can say he's ever had a bitch in his draws lol! liked it pitiful...and if ya wackness dont leave u down, i'll leave u truly saddened i'ma bury ya face in the gutter bitch, jus to curb your enthusiasm old concept.. fresh angle on it i notice that u aint smart at all, when i come thru and strike skulls it's funny how jokes go over ya head, but never the light bulb quality i try and merk this hoe quick, but he runs till his lungs are aching that's why takin Vango dead serious....is such a huge undertaking still good i should even try on this dude...no need for ferocious lines or a tight form cuz he blows, ...........and by doin that, he thinks he can take the world by storm meh.. average sorta wordplay Vango ya scriptures are weak, too easy for my verse ta' shake, clown and wit lines so fragile.....u leave voters wit nervous break downs coo closer I'll start with your Proper Kwallifications, kid you don't even own a rap degree I got freestyle raps that'll make your lungs collapse like you were O.D.B who the hell owns a rap degree?? I peeped some of your battles Kwell, half your shit don't even rhyme Your sig says "Dopeness speaks for itself", I guess that your a mime worded really bad.. good idea but not as effective as it coulda been Your like Roy Jones in a heavyweight match, underweight and outclassed How can you be in "Mind above Body", when your heads stuck in your ass decent personal i suppose Is it Kwell or Kwali, I've since your battles so I know it aint Mos Def This kid wouldn't be dope even if I changed your name to Crystal Meth 'dope' lines = a no no All your punches are catchin air Kwell while Vango is checking chins You could create 7 aliases, vote for yourself, and still not even win very played Changed the name of this league so much that it's got confusing Oh now I get why they changed the name, it's cuz Kwell Loves Losing didn't get it first time.. re-read it.. not bad v/ kwell only one bar i didn't particularly like.. rest was solid. |
wow, you gotta be kidding me.
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Kwell
Nice verse.. I think every punch was solid and original.. the thing that was good about your verse is that it was consistent line after line.. I thought it was pretty clear you won.. Vango ODB line was aight... nothing really difficult, saw a lot of nameplay on kwell and that was ok.. nothing stood out in your verse, the 'head stcuk in ya ass' is a real played concept.. Vote: Kwell |
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