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MaRVJay1009 vs Ill.Bill
Battle Rules:
10...lines No Crew or hate Votes No Recycling No Biting lets go fagget...check da fukk in Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-25-04 at 12:29 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Ill.Bill has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-22-04 12:31 PM.
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Marv, I Need Vaxanation, Coz I Just Put My Foot-In-Ya-Mouth. The Digits On Ya Name Depict Ya Ranking, Ya Not Climbing,Ya Plummetin South! You Fucking Stink, Coz Even Ya Own verse Needs Deodorant. Marv Cant Hold Out, Hes a Sentimental Fool, Thats y He 'sang 4 the moment'. Face It Noone Likes You, Your Mom Shoulda Just Abort. You Still Think You Ill? Just Coz Of The Ass Crack You Snort? New To Rv...Well Imma Flush Your Career Down The Drain. Quicker Than Martin Bashir, Demoralised MJ's Fuckin Fame. Now That May Be Played^.But Ya Verse Is Bound To Be Trash. Marvs The Opposite Of Rain Man = Incapable Of Doing The Math. Last Line means look at his name and ull understand.if u dont get the votes then dont vote. will rtf.i didnt even try. |
MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-22-04 08:46 PM.
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look....
da name jay n im so sick,ill.bill's trash dis lame i just dont get he madd cuzz i meet his "half" sista n gave her my "whole" dick no girls know how ya penis taste,so u dont shit bout bein str8 "ill.bill" datz whut all da bitches say when see ya face.....lol so dont bleieve dis homo when he fukkin say he sick...... he dumb he da only 1 i know dat gota "stand" up da "babi-sit" from now when i throw a pucnh at ya bitch you stay silent... look at ya record lol only "W" u eva got was a "wu tang album" u got guns? punk spray me!,now i see dat son crazee...... rv is ya life fam u keep da "net on ya head" like "lunch lady's" |
........................^. Funny Dude...Lets Get Some Votes.
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Voted For: Ill.Bill
Marv, I Need Vaxanation, Coz I Just Put My Foot-In-Ya-Mouth. The Digits On Ya Name Depict Ya Ranking, Ya Not Climbing,Ya Plummetin South! Not too bad, structure off a little. Punch landed 6/10 You Fucking Stink, Coz Even Ya Own verse Needs Deodorant. Marv Cant Hold Out, Hes a Sentimental Fool, Thats y He 'sang 4 the moment'. Structure off again but there is apttern so your not losing marks for that. Good use of metas and good personal punch that landed 7/10 Face It Noone Likes You, Your Mom Shoulda Just Abort. You Still Think You Ill? Just Coz Of The Ass Crack You Snort? Nice. I liked this, good meta, hard punch, funny as fuck!! 8/10 New To Rv...Well Imma Flush Your Career Down The Drain. Quicker Than Martin Bashir, Demoralised MJ's Fuckin Fame. Pretty good, personal, not bad punch 6/10 Now That May Be Played^.But Ya Verse Is Bound To Be Trash. Marvs The Opposite Of Rain Man = Incapable Of Doing The Math. Very good playing wiv him here. meta use superb 8/10 35/50 70% da name jay n im so sick,ill.bill's trash dis lame i just dont get he madd cuzz i meet his "half" sista n gave her my "whole" dick Good wordplay, hard punch. Good opener 7/10 no girls know how ya penis taste,so u dont shit bout bein str8 "ill.bill" datz whut all da bitches say when see ya face.....lol Good but could av been better. 5/10 so dont bleieve dis homo when he fukkin say he sick...... he dumb he da only 1 i know dat gota "stand" up da "babi-sit" Not very good actually. Maybe i dont get it but this is weak. 4/10 from now when i throw a pucnh at ya bitch you stay silent... look at ya record lol only "W" u eva got was a "wu tang album" Where is the rhyme????? Only reason you get marks for this is cos its quite funny. 4/10 u got guns? punk spray me!,now i see dat son crazee...... rv is ya life fam u keep da "net on ya head" like "lunch lady's" This is much more like it. Fucking quality closer!!! 9/10 29/50 58% Overall you do the maths. Sorry marve. Wasnt bad but lost it in the middle. Well done Ill Bill, good win and good verse. |
Voted For: Ill.Bill
Vote: mask haha :laugh: @ marv --merked by a blatant alias openr: mask closer: mask wordplay: mask originality: mask punches: mask personals: mask vocab: mask lyrics: mask structure: mask multis: neitha flow: mask mask - 8.5/10 marv - 7/10 RETRN THA FAVOUR WIT MY BATTLE EIT REALISTIK - LINK IN SIG Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
i thought this was a tight ass battle nice drop for a noob... well the flow was preety even so i'll say tie... punches i thought marv just edge it out with the last bar which i thought was the best bar in this battle that hit hard... u got guns? punk spray me!,now i see dat son crazee...... rv is ya life fam u keep da "net on ya head" like "lunch lady's" ^^ that was nice creative and hit hard.... creativeness it was preety even but i have to say marv just edge it out as-well... vote: marv not bad for a noob.... |
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No.^. Vote For Me Again yo, on My YoungSoulja Battle ;). <Honest Though,Hoe.
True Merkage Marv. Bitch. Upping For Some More Votes. |
ummm uppin 4 more votes n ppl and pleez explain ya shit
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This was feedback posted for Ill.Bill
checkin pollz .....................
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whut da fukk?^^^^^^ yo can we get dis shit close..vote ppl
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
he get my vote good shit he had better flow and better hits good shit check my open battles out chuck low vs.denied truth chuck low vs. kkkhater chucklow vs. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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