this is me.....
 

i aint with the tuff talking, clip sparking...
fake thugs this is the NET, so quit stairing at ya screen tuff talking :cussing: ...
from my pen n pad to keystyling on the keybored....
my style: FUCK U..
N wont change like a blind-man trying to see whores... :shocked: *repeat twice....*

YO,
con will load a clip, u gettin hit for startin shit...
My guns got more bodies then abortion clinic garbages...
(pause)................Take ya life like larceny...
You'll get cut quicker then a geek goin out fa varsity...
I'm nice wit a weapon, my styles lovely kid...
I'll put the duece duece to u like a pair of ugly chicks...
Eat you like it's lunchtime, u nervous when I bust mine...
My lyrics so sharp, I could shank you with a punchline...
Niggas actin stupid, believe that Ima bust'em...
I'll put the chrome to ya body like Im west coast customs...
And if you know me, you know I'm holdin a gat...
U must be playin for the cards when I 'Poke' ya back...
Clips pop, and I'm known to hit blocks...
I must be a revolver, cuz I'm known to spit sick shots... (6 shots)
Life's a piece of art, and you finished when I rip ya...
I'll put some 'heat to ya frame', nigga and 'take u out the picture'...........EZ

this is con man letting ya know it is not a game EZ with ya tuff talking im a rookie this he aint that nice i just saw him no-show agenist whats hes name...
relack fam the boy is back coming harder then ever so if u aint ryding with me if u aint feeling me if u just hateing then SUCK MY DICK cuz u about to find out why my style CONFINDENTIAL BITCH!!!

i might add a 2ed verse what ya think>?

maybe change the hook??

plez drop some feed back plez...

no need to.....tight shit

^^^^ Exactly what he said...

Dont change shit man, nice drop

Looking forward to some more heat

thanks upp'in for more feed back.........

and another one just in case........
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186284

upp'in this............................