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willnova vs ATMOSPHERE
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UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting topic: Runnin from cops Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-04-04 at 03:37 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
ATMOSPHERE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 03:07 AM.
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WillNova has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 03:08 AM.
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Topic: Chased from the cops Shyt, Cop tellin me to pull over, but lost my lisence n hasn't been found... So i stepped to the pedal, n now hear loud siren sounds from all around... N now mah hearts beat'n, by a dozen 5-0's im bein followed... Thinkin mah futures empty now, there's nothin, it's all hallow... Da radio says they got cops wait'n at da end of dis street... So I turn left, drift right, but still got a flyin 5-0 followin me... Thinkin smart like always, drove to Golden gate parkin lot... Jump out, take out my glock n jst take my couple shots... 2 cops now down, n shot mah gas tank for no evidence... Killed 2 innocet residents, seen by mah relatives, they call my cell sayin it looks like im chased as if i killed the U.S. President... But luckily i saw dis look alike civilian n i jst killed him... Then I took mah glock n had only a couple more bullets fill em... I took his clothes, dressed white all so i jst won't get caught... Shyt im now thinkin if i could get away? neone could escape the cops... |
pull up on the curb, jump out the black excursion//
hop the gate, knock down the trash can fo diversion// 5-0 began mergin, now theres four jakes in the chase// plus I'm holdin weight, only fate decides escape// can't hesitated, pass the eight to next nigga I see// warrant fo ID, damn, scuffed the fresh Huaraches// they try to stop me, thru backyards makin shortcuts// fuck that, i get off probation in four short months// newport butts cover the ground of the alley way// stash weed in a hidaway, lose weight Bally's way// runnin this escapade, the sirens start to dim// on my last limb, catch my breath, part the realm// hear a few barks and a gaurd dog advances grim// I'm exposed in a dark place like photographic film// my chances slim, so I surrender wit my hands up// white flag, fuckin fags slap on the tight handcuffs// can't stand up, my legs lock, my heart 'bout to stop// now I'm flock in a cage fo 15, cause I ran from the cops// |
good verse man...uppin dis shiznit
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uppin
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uppin dis shyt
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Voted For: WillNova
both had deent drops but i was definately feelin novas more from the wordplay through ta the vocab n rhyme scheme all the way to the closer nova took this cause he came solid from start ta finish nice job dawg... atmos:good idea n not a bad drop but your rhyme scheme killed ya flow n pretty much ruined ya verse...still good jus not good enough.. vote on these.. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139794 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139167 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
good look fam.... and Atmosphere, nice drop..... now lets get sum more votes in on the request line.... uppin
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aight uppin fo votes again.... and why did my last vote dissapear, Oh well
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uppin
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come on ppl...2 days already..don't sleep on us...
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damn ppl...jst vote in dis shyt...its been slept on for a long ass time
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fo real.... as always I be uppin fo sumthing but get nuttin... stop frontin and vote fo i start ruckus
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