Pleim vs c.a.l.i
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 350

Check in by: 02-12-05 at 09:45 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Pleim has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-12-05 09:16 PM.

Bitch you don't want none, see you can be pound B
You only named yourself CALI so you can be around me
Plus ^^That is the truth but hold on and let me restate
The reason you're called CALI . .
. . cuz ya fat ass is as big as the state
Plus everything in this battle is personal, listen you gay
I gave you 60 minutes to drop..
...cuz thats how many posts you get in a day
Plus, my punches are complex, but you musta missed it
You're not in our "presence"..
..just the boxes of ones we got for Christmas

Ya poor bitch.

C.A.L.I has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-12-05 09:44 PM.

Of course hell lose where hes from starts with a Los/loss
Ropes around his neck and not them shits slick rick flossed!
His lyrics unelevated his vocab subpar to average
Cuz his verses bars aint war they target practice
In ya 'Twisted Goverment' you the Lewenski text version
Watch me leave this pussy bleeding like sexed virgins;)
3-1 but the battles set in elevated so another wack alais here
This kids drops more watered down then American beer!!
Keeps resetting his shit he wants us to respect him bad:(
But the minutes to drop is the losses his original record had!

Voted For: C.A.L.I

C.A.L.I.
Of course hell lose where hes from starts with a Los/loss
Ropes around his neck and not them shits slick rick flossed!
good persona the 1st line…an okay punch
His lyrics unelevated his vocab subpar to average
Cuz his verses bars aint war they target practice
uhh…decent punch
In ya 'Twisted Goverment' you the Lewenski text version
Watch me leave this pussy bleeding like sexed virgins
blah…weak punch
3-1 but the battles set in elevated so another wack alais here
This kids drops more watered down then American beer!!
1st line good persona, overall decent punch
Keeps resetting his shit he wants us to respect him bad
But the minutes to drop is the losses his original record had!
don’t know if its true, but pretty decent punch

Pleim
Bitch you don't want none, see you can be pound B
You only named yourself CALI so you can be around me
weak opener, punch wasn’t really there
Plus ^^That is the truth but hold on and let me restate
The reason you're called CALI . .
. . cuz ya fat ass is as big as the state
uhh…an okay punch
Plus everything in this battle is personal, listen you gay
I gave you 60 minutes to drop..
...cuz thats how many posts you get in a day
good punch…ur best anyway
Plus, my punches are complex, but you musta missed it
You're not in our "presence"..
..just the boxes of ones we got for Christmas
weak closer

Overall, to me CALI took this one, kept hit with the punches
And a couple of personas up in there also, Pleim, ur drop was okay
Only had 1 good punch, but the rest were weak though…
No hate

Voted For: C.A.L.I

i think cali took this one with harder punches, and wayy better personals. he came more consistent in this one too. he started off coo, and ended tha same way. i was feelin tha whole structure thing, and that few mettas u had in this one. flawless verse to me. good drop
pleim-i think u had an okay vese, but u came wayy too soft for this one. ur verse wasnt consistent. u had some good wordplay and punches in there, but then tha next line would be wack. i think u should elevate on that, and come harder when u battlin. ur whole structure was off. i wasnt feelin tha all around flow, NO HATE THO...just come harder next time.
overall-i think cali took this one. he came out on top, and his verse was more interesting...

PLZ RTF ON BATTLE LINK.....

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...960547&posted=1

THATS A CREW BATTLE THAT NEEDS VOTES..

Voted For: C.A.L.I

Vote: CALI

breakdowns..
Of course hell lose where hes from starts with a Los/loss
Ropes around his neck and not them shits slick rick flossed!
nice opener, personal, nice flow, solid -8.5/10
His lyrics unelevated his vocab subpar to average
Cuz his verses bars aint war they target practice
nice diss, flows well, gd concept - 8/10/B]
In ya 'Twisted Goverment' you the Lewenski text version
Watch me leave this pussy bleeding like sexed virgins
[B]played virgin type line..not feeling this -7.5/10
3-1 but the battles set in elevated so another wack alais here
This kids drops more watered down then American beer!!
lol, original concept, gd personal - 8.5/10
Keeps resetting his shit he wants us to respect him bad
But the minutes to drop is the losses his original record had
tight closer, gd flow, tight concept use, punch hits hard - 9/10

Pleim........
Bitch you don't want none, see you can be pound B
You only named yourself CALI so you can be around me
self-gloryifying opener :nono: - 7/10
Plus ^^That is the truth but hold on and let me restate
The reason you're called CALI . .
. . cuz ya fat ass is as big as the state
played fat jokes against CALI, gets no love from AC (still funny tho) - 7/10
Plus everything in this battle is personal, listen you gay
I gave you 60 minutes to drop..
...cuz thats how many posts you get in a day
gd personal, best bar so far..decent concept aswell - 8/10
Plus, my punches are complex, but you musta missed it
You're not in our "presence"..
..just the boxes of ones we got for Christmas
errr...i must b thick, cos 2 me that shit definently aint wordplay and it sure as hell doesn't work..no h8 - 7/10

RTF links in sig...

This was feedback posted for C.A.L.I
 

o cant vote so im just upping this bitch

and checking polls........

Voted For: Pleim

vote here becuase cali is a fag for battleing a cock smooch like this who actually found a way to drop weaker than what you did

This was feedback posted for C.A.L.I
 

Am I still blacklisted? ROFL......................

^youve never been on my blacklist foo i know you dont hate vote stop being dumb and picture wow all i can say is wow you are defintaly blacklisted now

This was feedback posted for Pleim
 

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Voted For: C.A.L.I

Blah, hate ta say this but you easily merked this kid, dunno how fatty, but you did, decent wordplay an personals, punches wernt reaslly hard hittin, but the complexity of ya personals merked pleim

Pliem, ya verse just wasnt creative, step ya game up kid, no hate, just elevate, nah mean....Peace

^lol i dont know if i should be mad or happy hahaha lol