"DEBUT" chew freestyle187 it's Phat check it out
 

2 defeat you on the mic I dont need to use the violence
no boots.. no gloves.. show love. portray silence
delivery of my flow combined with pure science
leaves emcee's breathless.... trying but they restless
Chew will surely do you in if you want to rap at lunchtime
food to chew up, I grew up so save your punchline
I threw up cuz you tried to touch my credit
you'll never get it so dummy just forget it
I know these rhymes are lame but I really don't sweat it
Crime doesn't pay but I bet it does 4 me
either way i'll be dead by 22 the way the red and blue always sweatin me
I guess it wasn't meant to be, U better find a new weapon of choice Times costly and you lost your voice
He stiffly agreed as he gave up his ghost
today i make a toast, replay & reload
foremost my rhymes R lame but they're the best; don't mean to boast
I concentrate to write this but I have an itchy nose
this goes out to those I admire most
heavens only daughter God only knows
versatility like mine keeps tricks on their toes
I'm in the zone but prone to low-blows
From the streets to the bedsheets baby anything goes
I can smell this jealous kat trying to stop my cyber flow
pass the relish chew will eat him like a big mac
this is the battle of witts, I'm legit & with a big stack
so you best back off to soften this attack
I came I saw & I want my money back
tell me player what you say to that
When i'm mayor i'll say to hell with tax
but i'll still be spittin rhymes so you better say your prayers
I'm mad so there's no more doing favors


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I'm new to this site . & im looking for a good crew who takes their rhyming seriously. If your good n you think i'm decent get back to me so we can start making things happen. Also i'm going to recommend my friend to this; he's a half-witted pothead like me but he can spit with the best of 'em.. we've been freestyling for about 2 1/2 years at least and are ready to try to go for the next level. Everybody wants a piece of the pie!! PEACE

yo this is dope.
copy and paste it into open mic if you wont more more people to see it and comment on it.
my advice. cut down a few bar's a couple seemed a little stretched. Flow was nice. Structure's a bit off. It was hard to find the flow while spitting it.. but i actually liked this alot.
take it to the open mic forum and you wil recieve feed on it as long as you give decent feed to other's ish.
I also like the topic's thru out it.
the line's.
I concentrate to write this but I have an itchy nose
this goes out to those I admire most
heavens only daughter God only knows..
versatility like mine keeps tricks on their toes..
I'm in the zone but prone to low-blows..
From the streets to the bedsheets baby anything goes..
I can smell this jealous kat trying to stop my cyber flow..
when i spat this i stoped at spat these line's again because they appealed to me as some dope line's.

take it to open mic...

keep dropping ,stay active.
pz