Illist vs Withersman
 

Battle Rules:

6 lines
15 minutes to drop

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-18-05 at 02:34 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Withersman has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-05 02:08 AM.

Illist has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-05 02:11 AM.

Manly Flow... Son... You're Whining With Your Banging Bitch Spits
Take The Tie From My League Record & Fucking Hang You With It
After This, Dukes Won't Be Standing, This Pussy Needs His Panties
Beauties Only Skin Deep, That's Where My Knives Come In Handy
Gifted In Here, Open Your Mouth ... And I'll Lay Knuckles Upon Dentals
& I've Been A Top Secret, Since I Found Out Your Girl Was Confidential

what... nigga got a 2-6 record who wanna fuck wit me

LMAO...

Nice shit man...

Uppin for votes....

This was feedback posted for Withersman
 

The face that this isn't a league.. and you don't have a tie on your record, makes me confidentally believe that you recycled that line.

I'm not going to vote because you don't like me for some reason.. but whatever.

Good luck to both of you.

LMAO.....


Wow, a fake bar.

Wurd, thx for pointin that out mim.

Voted For: Illist

This fag bags lackin schemes, you the wackest cat i seen
& 'liter ali' dipose 'em so bad....
.......You'd think I was throwin' away boxing magazines
aha nice 6-10
homies in a loss for words, ill be quick to hit 'em w/ a clue..
peep ya girl..
...I'm 'wit her' so much... she fucken forgot about you!
lmaooo nice nameplay 8-10
This kid's pure ho, Can't revive my rhymes, the cures slow
nicknamed me curtain call................
................................Cos after me, It's the end of your show.
real nice close homie 8-10

nothin to complain about in ya verse, ended real strong


Manly Flow... Son... You're Whining With Your Banging Bitch Spits
Take The Tie From My League Record & Fucking Hang You With It
this was aight but blah 4-10
After This, Dukes Won't Be Standing, This Pussy Needs His Panties
Beauties Only Skin Deep, That's Where My Knives Come In Handy
ehh not dat serious 4-10
Gifted In Here, Open Your Mouth ... And I'll Lay Knuckles Upon Dentals
& I've Been A Top Secret, Since I Found Out Your Girl Was Confidential
best line u had 6-10

ya best line wasnt strong enough to overcome illist's shit, but overall he had tha more decent verse

vote: illist

word... thanks for the vote achilles, uppin' this shit.

Voted For: Illist

i don't know what Withersman was thinkin with that trash. creativity was seriously lacking. vocab was basic, and i think the only thing he had goin for him was flow and structure. his punches were not connecting in the least to be quite frank. all three of his bars were threats as opposed to creative and witty punchlines so i wasn't feeling that at all to be honest.
Illest had better punches and came with a whole lot more creativity with his bars, i thought the boxing magazine line was a good punchline.
then he started talkin bout his girl which made it kinda lame but then he brought it back again with a good closer about the curtain call.

thanks for your vote..... I'll gladly return the favor in a bit, unlike other cats in rv who cant retur favors. lol

Voted For: Illist

Withersman-Nice verse man ill give that to you...you had some good attempt at wordplay...and good punches/personals.....they werent that hard hitting and effective but still present....your structure was good, i got good flow off of it....overall 5/10

Illist-Your verse was dope...i like how you structure it...sounds so much better wehn i read it...you had some dope wordplayy to begin your verse and dope at the end...inbetween you added some dope punches and wordplay...not the best/effective but again still appealing...you got this easy overall. 6/10

v/illist

rtf in sig yo

word... thanks for voting, i returned the favor.

lol, you recycled n still losing 0-3, lol @ you withers.

uppin' this.