'Big'gin up my niggas...OYD, oh my WHY ME
 

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^^Click on "OYD Oh My Why Me!"

Beat: DJJB
Hook: Q
Sound clip from the movie "Going South" taken from www.soundamerica.com
Verses 1 & 2: Q


hatas need not apply


Concept: more venting...it's where I am right now...deal

Holla


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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223362
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223346

you get the best beats for some reason opener works well,verse stops and starts on beat changes ...hook works for the beat ...but damn killa hand one of these over shit

2nd chance...eh lets see how this goes.....

another mixtapeish song.....

laser eye surgery line sounds forced....work on breathin a bit and you could hit it....just sounds like a lil mistake

the hook is pretty good....maybe needs a lil more to it....but i mean its still kinda hot....

different kinda flow to the beat....thats good, keeps it from being boring.....nice multi's but it seems like less meta's, the singing at the end is pretty good....not quite on key, but hey thats why we rap right? haha, you dont need to hear any shit about production you seem to have that down....just listen over and work on ya breathign a lil more on certian parts...not the most intresting of tracks, not the most lyrically gifted of tracks...but none the less a good track....keep it up, and step ya game up a lil bit...your getting there (where as im nowhere close, ha.)

^^Yea...these lil tracks are jus exercises bro...nothing major either way...

Also...I don't have an issue with my breathing...Lemme explain what it is

I try different things with bar lengths and structure of lines...Sometimes, I squeeze so many words in 1 bar, I have to cut off a piece of a word to stay on flow to get in the next Line...So, it appears like I ran outta breath...FAR from it...

That's what I'm working on now...refining my lines to say ALL I wanna say, and still keep the flow butter smooth...i.e., like Biggie did.



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aight.........


oh shit... i like this .... grimey ish right here....


damn nigga... flow is bannanas!!


Im big like Ukon you Kons is rappin for nothing!!!!!!



oh shit!!


this a single right here


damn this beat is one for the senses

and the hook is damn Catchy!!!


Easily one of the dopest joints of 06'

the beat isn't my style but i'll give it a chance.....lyrics are pretty good....flow is impressive....i'm actually startin to like the beat the more the track goes on....overall a great track 8/10 keep droppin that

Well I'm yet to hear anyhtng garbage by you this shit is hot love the beat thinks its possible I can get the instrumental lol

But flow was solid everything was just great good work Q keep doing what you do

love this beat man..

flow is crazy here..big ups to shouting me out here....I DIDDNT GO THO !! thx for the prayers bro....this is jus a happy ass song man..some summertime jam out breezin down the road shit....

hook is sickness and LOLOLOL @ the disses here..thats great...you know who you are bitch !!!

lol

pimp ass song tho homie

^^^no doubt...preciate da feed





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