J Summers vs Jay 286
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 02-20-06 at 03:14 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Jay 286 has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-17-06 04:11 AM.
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This kid better show, im fuckin itchin for a battle
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J Summers has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-17-06 12:25 PM.
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3517563
thats the track....no special production....nothing im gon take alot of time on, just a simple message.....I CAN't STAND E GANGSTERS!! |
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e. gangsta ha thats funny i was doin dat shit way before i started rappin bro
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click clack bitch?? haha exactly what im talkin' bout
haha....exactly like i said man....e gangster....thinkin hes gon touch me with bulletts via. broadband/cable internet.....man i gave you a whole day to hear my shit and respond...and mr muffin, are you not more creative then that....whatever people just vote.....(word not all hate tho that was a good chorus.....wait chorus on a battle....wow really dog, uhh whatever)
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and i agree with you for the most part on the e gangster thing cept i aint never said i was a gansta.. and my lines dont involve the internet i dont even do shit on here unlike most theese cats i'm real |
Voted For: Jay 286
Gotta go with Jay on this one J Summers - Your Track was aight see your flo was good and your chorus was cool but i wasn't feelin the whole verse. Your best punch was proly the red dot like a japanese flag. That's all that's really memorable for me. Jay 286 - I like your track better though you did get quite annoying. You were talkin about e gangsters but you sounded like an e gangster e killer chasin them. Your flo was a lil akward at times too but your punchlines were slightly better, such as the in the closet punch. I was feelin your verse a lil more but nothing too spectacular here V/ Jay 286 |
Oh by the way, had this been a song track, and you added another verse, j summers proly would've pulled this one off
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Voted For: J Summers
One of the better battles I've heard on here in a while.... Ima go wit summer's on this one. Jay came correct but summer's had the whole package....catchy an shit. Now I know a battle doesn't have to have the hooks an shit....But it's the net, so if u aint battling face to face I believe production comes into play. And thats why I vote the way I vote ;) |
This was feedback posted for Jay 286
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i mean im not one to bitch or anything...but jet....a lil more specific with why you voted witch person....i mean if it is just production then i think you didnt think deeply enough into it....vote says fine with me but more feedback please
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fuck up................................................
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