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*Championship*: (3-0) Premanition Vs Hotshh! (3-0)
This is the championship Match.....The winner of this match will get a bye next week...therefore they dont have to battle.......good luck on this battle..... |
gud luck hot lets make this dope....
pz |
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Ravish and Starv.... Ya Savagely Spark Ya... Tragic Departure
Stabbing ya Heart Up....... Permanently like a Magical Marker Replacing ya Face with thee Amazingist Grace Raising the Stakes you Made a Mistake.. Want beef?.... ..Kon. Made You a Plate At the End of the Day, they Tend to Say You Stupendously GAY Suspend the Charades....Kid....We wouldnt be ya Friend for a Day! to tell the TRUTH you Lending Fiction, get Subtracted in Addition Subjected to Demolition......... Premanition End Up Missing........ |
^^^^^Damn i can say that.....uppin for the other verse.......hot battle here no doubt
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desperation for acception, dopes a disease and you dodged infection
healths in ditention, skins under tension, fat?... .....................................u gain pounds like an old persons pention drop u like a bad habit, savage, don't want defeat bitch you have it ur a 'joke', get out my hat u ain't a rabbit, hit twice as hard as daz had it the man with the 'cures' who no-one adores, hard image on rap boards? like a mid-wife im cuttin ya life chord, controllin death, the real life lord only got time for 6 'cures' = look at his note below his name mid-wife = look it up |
well i can say one thing........hotshh got this..........man......his ish was PACKED with multies......Packed.....i mean it was interesting to read....and it fit.......and it had punches.....dont get me wrong prem.......good drop......but hotshh got this one.....~1
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yeh i dropped late any way, forgot all about this so again a quik drop, not my best but still close in my opinion, pz
uppin |
Hotshh!! Took Thiss 1 He Had Hard Ass Punches And His Multies Wass Raw Like Hell........................
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good looks apreciate it.........treid to vote on all the battles but theres only like two....was up with that?
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this week i was mad busy...so i had no time to get peeps to sign up..and next week is a break...so the champion gets to rest for a week
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well, drop a vote, so we can see who the champion is...
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i have to vote hotshh on this. Prem had a good verse, but not as good as last week's whereas hotshh came harder and better in this than i have seen him do in this league. The multis were packed thick and fast and the punches were real good.
Well done hotshh, you deserve to be the champ, no doubt! |
shh took this real easy like.
good stuff |
desperation for acception, dopes a disease and you dodged infection
healths in ditention, skins under tension, fat?... .....................................u gain pounds like an old persons pention first line was hot....jea i was feelin dat..second line was aiight....7/10 drop u like a bad habit, savage, don't want defeat bitch you have it ur a 'joke', get out my hat u ain't a rabbit, hit twice as hard as daz had it lmfao shit was aiight...first line was blah second line was a lil bit better 7/10 the man with the 'cures' who no-one adores, hard image on rap boards? like a mid-wife im cuttin ya life chord, controllin death, the real life lord jea the endin was a lil bit better then the rest....7.5/10 Overall jea this shit was koo naww meanz...i was feelin it....not your best in the league but it was koo...you had good multi's and vvocab.. 21.5/30 hotshh: Ravish and Starv.... Ya Savagely Spark Ya... Tragic Departure Stabbing ya Heart Up....... Permanently like a Magical Marker word this was dope for many reasons..1 because it had good vocab...second because the structure was good and wasnt stretched but you manage to add alot o fmulti's in there..and good wordplay and you had a simile in there 9/10 Replacing ya Face with thee Amazingist Grace Raising the Stakes you Made a Mistake.. Want beef?.... ..Kon. Made You a Plate word..this shit was pretty koo...goood set up and the second line was decent 7/10 At the End of the Day, they Tend to Say You Stupendously GAY Suspend the Charades....Kid....We wouldnt be ya Friend for a Day! word this was hot right here..i was feelin it 8/10 to tell the TRUTH you Lending Fiction, get Subtracted in Addition Subjected to Demolition......... Premanition End Up Missing........ word htis shit was pretty dope 8/10 overall good structure thats what gave you the edge...and you wordeed things better 32/40 my vote: Hotshh! |
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