killaconcepz v.s wordplay
 

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checkin' in
good luck kid

forget it i'll go first

listen up, u not ready for the rymes that ur facin'
wordplay get ready for ur third disqualifacation{check sig}
don't got no business battlin' this herb
this dudes penis is so small he had to play wit' his words
only way he could beat me is if he bit off rymes
right afta i posted the battle he immediatly went offline
battlin' me u could hurt ur reputation
had to rip just to crush the speculation
if u wasn't bbefore u batta get bold
i've been known to battle cats in my backyard and leave em' to dry wit the clothes
cuz i walk into beef
walk in a club without no heat turn ya face into tenderized meat
when i stomp nu wit' cleats
my hands could speak sign language but i let my fist talk in ya sleep
and leave a slash across ya cheek like it was part of ya speech
in this battle there's no goal your'e achevin'
you battled me in the aftanoon and bet u won't advance to the evenin'

check your e-mail, i sent you rope, to suspend you from home/
killa swing, until you extend and splinter your bones/

you got no wins, and I doubt you can even scrap /
your last verse had less punch, than an amputee boxing match /

I'll enter your dreams..and choke you with freddy's sweater/
you couldn't win this battle..if you were the only one that entered/

I refract your future punches, like fragments of light/
to throw a limp fist, speeding back to your eye/

you should change your name to "why can't I win"?/
you better recycle your dopest verse, and add my name in/

make them all believe you typed that whole thing/
and don't forget to say you did it quick, so you couldn't bring/

your full potential, you aint a rapper, your screen name is a rental/
when the mods find you out, your gonna disappear, like florence henderson's dentals/

sorry I took so long..there ya go

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uppin' 1

uppin' 2 c'mon vote pleaze

KillaConcepz- Your verse was alright, the flow was really weak I mean the syllable counts were like polar opposites..liked your punches, especially the penis one and your closer, I didn't see any multis but thats cool, I see you put some personals in there um the verse wasn't too original just sounded typical but overall 7/10

Wordplay- Your flow was MUCH smoother, however your punches weren't quite as powerful, still saw no multis, the personals werent all that personal..and this doesn't weaken your verse or anything but puttin your bars like that with // at the end is lame as fuck...5/10

Vote- KillaConcepz by a long shot

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uppin' 3 pleaze vote on this ya'll and be truthful

back to the top...I wont let this get ignored.
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c'mon uppin' 4 and f!@#in vote damn

it was a close battle guys but i think wordplay took this one....
killaconcepz, i liked your verse, ok punches, nice metas, punches just didnt hit as hard
wordplay got the vote for the creative humuor....keep at it
vote:wordplay
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uppin for votes....this shit is getting redonkulous!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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