"Birds in the Metal"...Mixtape Track...Leave Links and I'll Return ASAP...
 

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Word...deep track.

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Quality is dope...beat caught my attention and had me turning off the television so I could hear it. The hook is fucking awesome...listening right now, deep lyrics, the woman is coming on, and it seems like a good addition to the track...weird thing about your line about your town...since you were saying you wanted to stay in your roots. Best yet bro, it's going on the IPod...

hmm...ehhh @ the beat

bad quality to on the beat..........u come in nice....emotion is great....queality is still ehhh
lyrics r hot.....nice multis n shit....a bit hard to understand em tho....deep shit man....

hooks nice...2nd verse is pritty much the same

tight shit man..idk about the beat tho

Thanks for the feed...

Here are my links:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225897
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225569

I happen to love the beat...


sounds like u messed up at one part of the hook...but it's nice


dubs don't match up that nicely

good flow wit the beat tho...

lyrics are good


nice track


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Beat is nice, nice guitars...hook is nice...decent...not my style but its nice..ure flow is real nice dope...but yea dubbs are a lil off...lyrics are dope mayne...hook is growin on me..im likin the concept...delivery is nice too, ure style fits this beat..i like the sample

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Sleepers...

Hook is dope, Buuuuuuttt.. Your delivery of it needs more tone and you sounded a bit shaky on it... You really gotta use a more husky and solid voice on that..

Lyrics are deep.. Inspiring even.. Could use some work on ya rhyme schemes and delivery.. But I feel the message ya gettin accross..

The beat was tight, dont really know about the singing parts.. Sounds a bit too country...

Overall, this is a mad big improvement on the last shit I heard of yours.. Jus a few minor problems that'll fix themselves up through experience.

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can you rtf..to my joint "Now Ride" wit UNF, it shud be jus below this

yo.... beat is pretty gay at first.. but the song is over and i like the beat now....

like cho said quality is ehh...

hook is very monotone... but gets the point across

i dont really like theese kinda tracks.. but shit sounds like my life....i really liked this track man... dope lyrics flow was simplistic but it gave this song a laid back kinda feel...nice shit for real.. third verse was the best ..... 8/10

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Still Get My Grind On
good feedback

Thanks man...uppin'.