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star 07-10-02 01:41 PM

i cant
 
i cant let what you do destroy me take over me..
i cant let the pain fry my brain having me going insane to the point that i cant remain...
real.. real to myself to you or i but fuck it only the strong survive..
i cant let you make me feel selfless, hopeless, lifeless leaving me breathless.. having to gasp for air with all the fog of misery leaving me in despair..

i cant let you destroy what i amounted to be , the queen the righteous one.. the one that stayed strong through all the beatings,,no matter how many time i fell i got up,,no matter how many times i failed i grew up..

i cant let you take me down under where there is no sunshine but your yells and anger that roar like thunder..


i cant let you take the best of me.. i cant and wont let you kill me..

star 07-11-02 11:24 AM

uppin ^^^

[*¤ÐîMêØñФ* ] 07-11-02 12:00 PM

Tight ish gurl ...
sorrry bout the sleepers!!

Much props

pz xXx DiMe
~1~

DaGyrlRemarqabL 07-11-02 12:32 PM

Re: i cant
 
Quote:
Originally posted by star
no matter how many time i fell i got up,,no matter how many times i failed i grew up..


That line was SoO-sO good Ma..Really summed up the vibe of the whole verse..You just pop up when im least expectin it...its good to see ya back gyrl...you have definately elevated since last i read from you..This verse was mad nice..Ive always been feelin ya shit..im lookin forward to seein more from ya ma....stay up n stick around..
peace.

star 07-11-02 02:50 PM

wrd crazy sleepers....

thanks for tha love yall...

uno

star

varentao 07-11-02 02:57 PM

pure strong emotions...structure was a bit off...but still came very raw....very powerful....i felt it for sure...nice to see you're 'moving on'...stay strong...keep yo head up...(sorry if i sound patronising)...respect....

Kstroyer 07-11-02 02:57 PM

this was deep as whoa!! i like the use of "i cant" nice flow!

deepish on the real!

holla atcha boi!

and check out some of my drops!

star 07-12-02 09:32 AM

no doubt..luv thanks for da points...

respect

uno

papiswifey 07-12-02 01:14 PM

i was feelin dis. i like da internal rhyme. ur styles a bit different from most i seen and i like it. keep it up. one

star 07-13-02 12:07 PM

no doubt ma,,

much respect
uno

SPIRITUAL VIBES 07-13-02 12:20 PM

Yo stay righteous. Stay true sis. Keep God first. Only love.

Much love and God Bless you..

star 07-15-02 07:40 AM

wrd up ^^


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