This Is My Life - DOPE TRACK!!
 

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220181
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220187

beanie Siegel on the beat, i was feelin it in tha air so you know i had to do the remix!

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(soundclick aint workin so i cant upload)

ahem


PSA bro






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lol IIIIGHT! im in just holla at me iight?

aim: ShawnPhillips905

AND LEAVE SOME REAL FEED :)

I used this beat before...I liked it



ur flow is good here...but dub more of the rhyming words or phrases to increase your presence


delivery is adequate for this type of track, but you could have been more expressive

lyrics are good....could benefit from some concrete imagery (more metas/creative similies, etc)


I liked this...the beat had alot to do with that, but you delivered a presentable track.


good 1

thx man, UPPIN!

hmm not bad, quaity is pretty decent. your flow is very good and so is your delivery and emotion. your vocal level could be turned up a bit though man. your lyrics are pretty straight forward and to the point. overall I thouhgt you hit the beat nice and you kept it goin solid. I like your voice as well. nice drop man keep it up.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...741#post2629741

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Feed used 1/23/06 "Real Talk ft. Snypa and Prozak"

werd^ apprecitate the feed ima hit uretrack up in a minute

UPPIN! cmon lets get some feed right here!

beat is cool real laid back i wish there was more to it but i bet u can't help that...ridin the beat nice...ur style is on point...u should do a hook or put some other music or some movie quote for the hook just a suggestion...i did like how it faded out though...overall good job!!

return favor: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220467

thx^

UPPIN!!!!