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Flow Intelligent vs. T.r.oo.P
8 Lines Minimum
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U shouldnt of came BaK!!! Blah.... |
Hmm.. Already Beat You :thumbup: 8 Chekz
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Yea, Troop 'you 5 Minz 4rm my Chik Mouf' But im 1 away from yours Plus a single punch will make you hit the deck.....walls and doors* Ya think youre the best, But name one person that youre better than My verse'll make you feel the beat and dance like youre the Jeffersons* Dont even drop.. Just hit the sack.. Cause everyone's hoping you rest Ill send so many hits to this bitch that you'll be groping ya chest* Pussy You aint hot, Not even one of your lines could harm me Just call me sargeant, I'll troop over you like i joined the Army *= all personals fromg his sig. |
lol..2 bad i took those out my sig...b4 u dropped..so your fault
im droppin later..when i get back |
When i dropped he still had that shit in his sig, thats how i got the ideas for the punches. I havent been on in a couple days so i just keyed it up. DQ him.
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*Let me Welcome u Back Like Mase..Wit a Gun in ya Face... Yo This Scam Artists...tryin His Hardest..But Soc said u Betta LayLo Wheres ya Korv Money Phony..So tony..Tell me wheres ya Yayo? 1st times nice..But beat me Twice..But thats Like Ya Job.....Fake Its no Mistake Bein ya Fathers Father only way you come out Great Yet Word on the Net..is your Vet?..Sheeeeet....Ya cant Whore Me Ya Win Positions Fiction strictly cuz u only WIN.when tellin a Story Mr Topical......winnin twice Is Impossible So stop your frontin Trick Placeing in Marathons in a Mr Hanky Fit..Only time u was Runnin Shit *He has tony yayo in his sig* *He says Epitome of GREATness in his User Title* *He only wins at topicals* *He saiD Now Whos Running Shit in his Sig* and jus so he dont cry...i had george jefferson dancing and a chick rubbin her chest in my sig. Blah Bitch |
Aiight thats fine with me. Vote up
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i explained wha i had in my sig...quit your bitchin
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This Scam Artists...tryin His Hardest..But Soc said u Betta LayLo
Wheres ya Korv Money Phony..So tony..Tell me wheres ya Yayo? ^^OK....not that hot tho...4/10 1st times nice..But beat me Twice..But thats Like Ya Job.....Fake Its no Mistake Bein ya Fathers Father only way you come out Great ^^hated that set-up...punch was ite...5/10 Yet Word on the Net..is your Vet?..Sheeeeet....Ya cant Whore Me Ya Win Positions Fiction strictly cuz u only WIN.when tellin a Story ^^OK....nice flow..8/10 Mr Topical......winnin twice Is Impossible So stop your frontin Trick Placeing in Marathons in a Mr Hanky Fit..Only time u was Runnin Shit ^^good...7/10 OK....personal in every line..so that was good.I liked the internals in that 2nd to last line. I thought you started off really bad..but ended up goin good afterwards. Yea, Troop 'you 5 Minz 4rm my Chik Mouf' But im 1 away from yours Plus a single punch will make you hit the deck.....walls and doors* ^^well...decent....5/10 Ya think youre the best, But name one person that youre better than My verse'll make you feel the beat and dance like youre the Jeffersons* ^^better than/Jeffersons?..even accented it's be hard to work it to rhyme and I though the punch was executed a lil bland..5/10 Dont even drop.. Just hit the sack.. Cause everyone's hoping you rest Ill send so many hits to this bitch that you'll be groping ya chest* ^^good...8/10 Pussy You aint hot, Not even one of your lines could harm me Just call me sargeant, I'll troop over you like i joined the Army ^^I find Troop/military lines are unoriginal..4/10 OK..I thought you had some decent concepts and all.But some wasn't put together well enough.Flow went to troop easily due to his internals n shit..n you had a line that didn't rhyme(jeferrson's one).And that last bar...troop/military lines are unoriginal. Creativity is a must in battles. So my HONEST opinion....is that troop got it for coming more creative and shit Vote-Troop |
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Yea, Troop 'you 5 Minz 4rm my Chik Mouf' But im 1 away from yours Plus a single punch will make you hit the deck.....walls and doors* Eh, bad attempt at flipping his user title. Ya think youre the best, But name one person that youre better than My verse'll make you feel the beat and dance like youre the Jeffersons* Hint of self glorification, ok punch. Dont even drop.. Just hit the sack.. Cause everyone's hoping you rest Ill send so many hits to this bitch that you'll be groping ya chest* Haha, ok punch on his sig. Pussy You aint hot, Not even one of your lines could harm me Just call me sargeant, I'll troop over you like i joined the Army Old wordplay, ok punch Wasn't the best I've seen, not that creative, but some punches hit. Troop This Scam Artists...tryin His Hardest..But Soc said u Betta LayLo Wheres ya Korv Money Phony..So tony..Tell me wheres ya Yayo? Multis were ok, but punch wasn't that hard. 1st times nice..But beat me Twice..But thats Like Ya Job.....Fake Its no Mistake Bein ya Fathers Father only way you come out Great Ok wordplay and punch. Yet Word on the Net..is your Vet?..Sheeeeet....Ya cant Whore Me Ya Win Positions Fiction strictly cuz u only WIN.when tellin a Story Haha, liked this punch. Mr Topical......winnin twice Is Impossible So stop your frontin Trick Placeing in Marathons in a Mr Hanky Fit..Only time u was Runnin Shit Nice personal from his sig. Started off slow, but got a lot better in the end. Some creativity. Vote goes to Troop for harder hitting personals and more creativity. v/ Troop |
2-0.................Smh
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This Scam Artists...tryin His Hardest..But Soc said u Betta LayLo
Wheres ya Korv Money Phony..So tony..Tell me wheres ya Yayo? 1st times nice..But beat me Twice..But thats Like Ya Job.....Fake Its no Mistake Bein ya Fathers Father only way you come out Great Yet Word on the Net..is your Vet?..Sheeeeet....Ya cant Whore Me Ya Win Positions Fiction strictly cuz u only WIN.when tellin a Story Mr Topical......winnin twice Is Impossible So stop your frontin Trick VS Yea, Troop 'you 5 Minz 4rm my Chik Mouf' But im 1 away from yours Plus a single punch will make you hit the deck.....walls and doors* Pussy You aint hot, Not even one of your lines could harm me Just call me sargeant, I'll troop over you like i joined the Army V/TROOP came hard with a nce flow, good vocab, reminiscent of the old days flow came back a lil rusty....... |
You got this one.. But doesnt matter to me its not on the records. So since you won 1 and i won 1 how bout we get a little tiebreaker going.
16 lines ? |
Yea ill take u up on that soon..
but maybe we should do a topical..... |
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