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Da Problem Child 05-02-09 10:25 PM

Da Problem Child vs Young Kidd (LM)
 
Battle Rules:
10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-05-09 at 10:25 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 05-02-09 10:25 PM

Da Problem Child has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-02-09 10:25 PM.

Da Problem Child 05-02-09 11:01 PM

this flaw is cheap, i'll crush him like jaws and teeth
he only thinks he's out of control, only cause i lost his leash
ill spark the beef, losing's imposible like a clock stop
his girl holds it in her mouth until i buss like pop rocks
Young kidd should be somewhere playin hop scotch,cuz your wack man
the dots on your head can kill you and eat you ghost like pacman
i spit the coldest b, you wont just shiver,...you'll break
really,other then your birth, battling me was you biggest mistake
were different because you suck....while my lines are heaven
understand you could blow up if you were a vitctim of 9-11

Da Problem Child 05-02-09 11:02 PM

blah verse just wanted to get a quick battle poppin.......

System 05-02-09 11:53 PM

Young Kidd (LM) has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-02-09 11:53 PM.

Young Kidd (LM) 05-05-09 11:53 PM

BWHAHA i have less than 7 minutes to drop this...jgsalfdjlwkdjfdwkla Keystyleeee

I've Got 7 Minutes To Drop. Shit..You sLow Anyway..I'm Just Gonna Bull Shit It.
I'm To Fast For You..You Sent Me A PM Asking Me To Not Go "Over The Limit."

Ha. Kidd's Really A Infant..So Be Careful An Listen...Carefree When I'm Dissin..
So Give A Fuck About A Problem? I'm Still Too Young To Even Pay Attention...

Or Even Really Care About The Structure Of Verses...But If I Dump One Your Nervous..
The Real Problem Here Is You'll be Wacker Than Me..And I Dropped This Weak On Purpose..

You Can Have The Win...Your The Sickest Nigga Alive? and You Been A Vet..At Spittin Text?
Thats a Big Accomplisment..Next You'll Be Braggin About Your G'd Up Gang On the Internet...

lsadfjowdfjmdwlfkjwda wackk sauce

Young Kidd (LM) 05-05-09 11:54 PM

BWHA i made it with like 30 seconds to spareee soon

Da Problem Child 05-06-09 08:26 AM

people try to throw that "7 minute keystyle" bull shit in to cover up the fact that their verse is wack

LPMNDCTE 05-06-09 10:12 AM

Voted For: Da Problem Child

I've Got 7 Minutes To Drop. Shit..You sLow Anyway..I'm Just Gonna Bull Shit It.
I'm To Fast For You..You Sent Me A PM Asking Me To Not Go "Over The Limit."

Descent opener, but not hard hitting

Ha. Kidd's Really A Infant..So Be Careful An Listen...Carefree When I'm Dissin..
So Give A Fuck About A Problem? I'm Still Too Young To Even Pay Attention...

barely descent


Or Even Really Care About The Structure Of Verses...But If I Dump One Your Nervous..
The Real Problem Here Is You'll be Wacker Than Me..And I Dropped This Weak On Purpose..

Descent

You Can Have The Win...Your The Sickest Nigga Alive? and You Been A Vet..At Spittin Text?
Thats a Big Accomplisment..Next You'll Be Braggin About Your G'd Up Gang On the Internet...

barely descent

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this flaw is cheap, i'll crush him like jaws and teeth
he only thinks he's out of control, only cause i lost his leash

this was a good opener

ill spark the beef, losing's imposible like a clock stop
his girl holds it in her mouth until i buss like pop rocks

barely descent

Young kidd should be somewhere playin hop scotch,cuz your wack man
the dots on your head can kill you and eat you ghost like pacman

Barely descent

i spit the coldest b, you wont just shiver,...you'll break
really,other then your birth, battling me was you biggest mistake

descent

were different because you suck....while my lines are heaven
understand you could blow up if you were a vitctim of 9-11

barely descent


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This was a mediocre battle. I feel that the best lines were:


i spit the coldest b, you wont just shiver,...you'll break
really,other then your birth, battling me was you biggest mistake

this flaw is cheap, i'll crush him like jaws and teeth
he only thinks he's out of control, only cause i lost his leash

verses

I've Got 7 Minutes To Drop. Shit..You sLow Anyway..I'm Just Gonna Bull Shit It.
I'm To Fast For You..You Sent Me A PM Asking Me To Not Go "Over The Limit."
Or Even Really Care About The Structure Of Verses...But If I Dump One Your Nervous..
The Real Problem Here Is You'll be Wacker Than Me..And I Dropped This Weak On Purpose..



^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

I believe that Da problem child inched this battle out do to the opener punch, but Young Kidd was close with his two punches.


Vote - Da Problem Child

Da Problem Child 05-06-09 01:40 PM

nice fair vote......big ups_____________________

Young Kidd (LM) 05-06-09 06:09 PM

yea except for...i did only have seven minutes to drop that.
lol...

i'm not using an excuse or anything..i expect to lose this...
the time i dropped, the structure, the unfinished thoughts/sketchy punches.

thats not my forte son. lol
you can tell it was a keystyle.

NoCkTerNuL 05-07-09 07:01 AM

Voted For: Da Problem Child

Good Battle, but da problem child got this...
His punches were stronger and he actually had a flow to it

The lines that won it for me...
"he only thinks he's out of control, only cause i lost his leash"
"really,other then your birth, battling me was you biggest mistake"

Young Kidd pretty much pointed out everything that was wrong with his verse. no structure, no flow, weak punches. I didn't even understand a lot of it.

no hate... good battle... peace...

Da Problem Child 05-07-09 03:10 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Young Kidd (LM)
yea except for...i did only have seven minutes to drop that.
lol...

i'm not using an excuse or anything..i expect to lose this...
the time i dropped, the structure, the unfinished thoughts/sketchy punches.

thats not my forte son. lol
you can tell it was a keystyle.

thats bullshit.......why the fuck would you try to loose a battle on purpose,ecpecially when you are undefeated, stop frontin!

Young Kidd (LM) 05-07-09 04:02 PM

lol your an IDIOT if you think i'm frontin.
point (1) its prom week and i've had two finals this week.
point (2) my grandma is in the hospital
point (3) i'm a senior which means crunch time

so i had no time to write out a verse, search for personals.

I'm not trying to LOSE but since mine was a Keystyle. and I doubt yours was..I expect that you'll win.

thats just what im saying.

NoCkTerNuL 05-08-09 01:38 AM

dang, if you that busy, maybe you should hold off on the battling??

Da Problem Child 05-08-09 08:26 AM

thank you!........................................

Young Kidd (LM) 05-08-09 09:21 AM

haha. I am. hence why this is the only one I did, if i couldn't of keystyled it i would of asked for an extention or taken the no show.

or for a rematch.

come after Sunday I shouldn't be so busy. lol.


But i figured what the hell why not throw down something so its not a no show.
shittt i dont care if i win or lose.
big ups if you win anyway. lol

i was just explainin why i keystyled it.

Da Problem Child 05-08-09 02:46 PM

so did i,....big deal_____________________________

JTR 05-09-09 04:08 PM

Voted For: Young Kidd (LM)

I've Got 7 Minutes To Drop. Shit..You sLow Anyway..I'm Just Gonna Bull Shit It.
I'm To Fast For You..You Sent Me A PM Asking Me To Not Go "Over The Limit."
clever wordplay but not too hard
Ha. Kidd's Really A Infant..So Be Careful An Listen...Carefree When I'm Dissin..
So Give A Fuck About A Problem? I'm Still Too Young To Even Pay Attention...
this was an ok punch
Or Even Really Care About The Structure Of Verses...But If I Dump One Your Nervous..
The Real Problem Here Is You'll be Wacker Than Me..And I Dropped This Weak On Purpose..
lmao this was funny
You Can Have The Win...Your The Sickest Nigga Alive? and You Been A Vet..At Spittin Text?
Thats a Big Accomplisment..Next You'll Be Braggin About Your G'd Up Gang On the Internet...
nah

vs.

this flaw is cheap, i'll crush him like jaws and teeth
he only thinks he's out of control, only cause i lost his leash
bad wording, ok punch
ill spark the beef, losing's imposible like a clock stop
his girl holds it in her mouth until i buss like pop rocks
no
Young kidd should be somewhere playin hop scotch,cuz your wack man
the dots on your head can kill you and eat you ghost like pacman
the concept was ok but wording and punch weren't
i spit the coldest b, you wont just shiver,...you'll break
really,other then your birth, battling me was you biggest mistake
played but it was kinda funny
were different because you suck....while my lines are heaven
understand you could blow up if you were a vitctim of 9-11
you mean COULDNT blow up? Bad wording once again. And this shit is played anyways

Da Problem Child, work on your wording, you got a decent rhyme scheme and ok concepts but you word them into crappy punches

Young Kidd, you attempted more personals in this and your wordplay wasnt played, not the best shit but you came harder

v/YK

JTR 05-09-09 04:10 PM

Yo Da Problem Child, you're fucking wack

Do you got a mic or not? I want to rip you apart in an audio battle...

Da Problem Child 05-11-09 08:38 AM

thats funni because with audio, itz a whole different story, are you sure u wanna do this? I'm pretty sure your dickriders would not want to see you loose.....lol

Da Problem Child 05-12-09 08:29 AM

as a matter of fact the reason you have never lost was because you always have five dickrider votes every time

Young Kidd (LM) 05-12-09 07:07 PM

please tell me your talking about him.
and not me.

Da Problem Child 05-13-09 08:30 AM

oh....not hate to you Young Kidd, that was to samarai jack AKA wanna be supper man

Da Problem Child 05-14-09 08:49 AM

uppin.............................................

Da Problem Child 05-18-09 08:26 AM

uppin.........this battle is boring as fuck, everyone is voting on my other battle but not this one ........WHAT THE FUCK

MurDaH187 05-18-09 09:28 AM

Voted For: Young Kidd (LM)

flow: tie
punches: yung
diss: yung
creative: child
multis: none
metas: child
personal: yung
opener: child ( but basic )
closure: yung ( funny shit )

vote: yung

yung was rushed and stil decent with flow and hits and personal...

child you used many played concepts in a reak battle tha shit save it for the cypher were we bullshit at then get serious in the filed of battling...

Da Problem Child 05-18-09 02:07 PM

ok........lol_____________________________________

Reflekt 05-19-09 01:04 AM

Voted For: Da Problem Child

i vote for this dude cause Young Kidd aint even follow the rules and come thru with 10 lines.

Da Problem Child 05-19-09 08:26 AM

ok but can you explain more so ya shit wont get deleted

Young Kidd (LM) 05-19-09 07:02 PM

lol because i did 8 lines?
wow. thats retardedddddd lol
explain it more.

Reflekt 05-19-09 09:06 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Young Kidd (LM)
lol because i did 8 lines?
wow. thats retardedddddd lol
explain it more.



Quote:
Originally Posted by Da Problem Child
Battle Rules:
10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-05-09 at 10:25 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.





There ya go. Clearly stated in the rules that you agreed to that you need to drop 10 lines.

Young Kidd (LM) 05-19-09 10:34 PM

lol. hahahahahahahhahah.
asldfhslakfjsdalkfjsadlkd


ashfldhalfhsdfsda

funny shit.
good looks ha

Brydon 05-20-09 12:17 PM

Voted For: Young Kidd (LM)

Kidd took this and quite a witty responce made up with such little time to drop.
No hate as childs drop was pretty good too but had to bars of trash in that kinda ruined it for him.
Good battle.
vote:kidd

Da Problem Child 05-20-09 02:05 PM

fuck that shyt! no matter what the fuck he says, that a hatter vote but it dont matter

Da Problem Child 05-22-09 08:35 AM

uppin.............................................

Da Problem Child 05-26-09 08:37 AM

uppin............................................. .......

Its CJ 05-29-09 10:36 PM

Voted For: Da Problem Child

you win obviously.i dont know if he would have dropped better if he had more time or what but yea . you win.

technique 06-18-09 08:42 PM

Voted For: Da Problem Child

close battle but i think this one takes it because his lines were stretched the fuck out and it was hard to read... der was some dope lines in both verses but i think this one overtook it by just a fraction..


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