Conceited.. Had to have a little fun lol
 

iight my homey was tellin me its koo to make the tracks i do for other people but i should show some tru hip hop skills and make a track for fun.. so thats what i did on this.. just had fun wit it basically.. its all me hook and verses.. let me kno what yall think..

willing to remix it if anyone is up for it

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hahah the hook is hella funny...i'm so cute..haha.....funny shit...you pulled it off yo....
the beat is nice...something different...sounds like something i can bump down the street...
your verses are nice...good delivery..........

damn...that hook is funny........

good shit...7/10

lol thanx a lot man appreciate it.. its weird cuz when i was listenin to it more and more its funny how when i dont really try it sounds better than when i do.. but thanx again for the feed homey, post a link if u have any tracks u want me to hear

Since your from miami and nobody showin love ill reply

that hooks hella funny.. lmao

the first verse is cool the lyrics aint real complex but its about having fun..

hooks still funny, im really here smilin like a fagcake

the second verse is funny to.. good delivery like the first one

so yeah ill probly check one of your more serious songs later

btw what part of miami you in

i live in Broward, but i stay in miami mainly on weekends.. Miami Lakes, Bayside, all them chill spots, and thanx for the love man.. yea lyrics aint all that i wrote the lyrics bout less that 15, 20 min?

Uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^

emotion is def their and I'm feelin the delivery. some decent comedy in your lines. hahah flow is consistent as well yup. hooks def catchy too haha, beats pretty slick as well. overall not to bad man, 2nd verse is pretty straight forward like the other verse. overvall not bad duke.

qual is off..i dont know how much i like this kinda sounds like a typical netcee... some good lines that were catchy. pieces to rest,....second verse is better...well it was worth a one time listen come with somethin thats gonna stick in my head and make me wanna hear it again

vocal quality could be crisper...but it isn't bad

ur delivery reminds me of someone on RV...can't put my finger on it tho

beat is unique...

flow works well on it

hook is coo...I like it


7/10 track


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ofcourse its gonna sound like a netcee its just a track for fun wasnt tryin as u can tell..lol and if that hook dont stay on ya mind then shit man.. i kno u riden in ya car wit ya boyz singing "im so cute" boyz like "wtf u just say" lol.. its koo thanx for the feed man appreciate it