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HW title: Feeble Minded(8-4) vs. Avalon(10-1)
check in's by: wednesday.
verses due: friday, 12 am Eastern Time. Read LLL rules. Read LLL announcement. Agree on line limit in check in. |
Checking In. How Many Av .. 18 ?
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20... this is a HW match...
why are you here..? ^ you can use that in a punch... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...217#post1183217 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...223#post1183223 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...228#post1183228 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...239#post1183239 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113519 |
no personals & ya punches suck, but your flow is the worst
reverse in goes always career ya how symbolizes line this.. your not creative, & u know you'll lose so u damn competing, and Av's a poetic expert, but he still can't stanza beating .. ya blown & dispersed, average at text, its vowed in stone, i'd still read "dope" turned the opposite way, like im a palindrome.. i'll kill you with lyrical dopeness, he's shitty & far from it, & Av'll die quick Aztecs fire, like Indian arsonists, i blow ya away, have to call for someone to git the medic, cuz only way you can split Mind, is if your Schizophrenic, & my chem experiment, shows i'll leave you raped & dead, but ya face has so much acne, it'd turn the Litmus Paper red, there's no repercussions, when i renounce & step on whores, and a vacuum just describes the contents of av's repertoire, your banned under ya other name, you were tested & blew it, & you were nicknamed island cuz you do best in seclusion .. we have mutual enmity, cuz this Brit's fighting is wack, we kicked ya'll out in 1776 & no one fucking invited you back .. |
(Feeble's sig...)
LLL tourney winner. LLL HW title holder. Deja Vu, bitch(es). hiphopscotch420: feeble whored sum one for once (ref. line 6...) Fuck tryin on this kid... he feels at home with the dick, n' his verse was about bad as... all the goals in his sig... Feeb's stop while you're ahead... drop the mouse n jet, cause voters give less care... than project housin gets... when it comes to the belt, Mythsofmind: i dont feel like holding the title anymore anyway hiphopscotch420: he just whored himself... son you ready to test text... n' clash with vet champs, well get ya feet wet... n' they'll fuckin match ya pants... I posted ya dealt wit... really Feeb's cant get with me, ya sister is a winner, only way you'll have a hand on victory... Quote me: Feeble knows talent... but this son's a bum, although he's top of the damn line.. that I hung him from... don't play... stand back... cause... Verb'll add fire to this, n' scare ya fuckin race back out the gas pumpin business... Feeb ya think ya to dope... but uh with ya last appraoch, losings a laughin matter... so now you can take the joke... and if he beats me clearly it's nothing he's written recent, voters stuck to Feebs past, back when you were decent... I'll beat your ass Feeble... n' leave all ya 2 friend n' shock, I just pist'on this square ...........................................like a fuckin engine block... Thanks for holdin my belt... |
Umm...
Feeble came weaker than expected... That first bar was incredibly played as a concept. Had a few other played bars as well. Also a few good quotables Verb came much more consitent... Nice quotables with only 1 or two played concepts.... Vote- Verb |
^Agree....
Feeble had some good lines.....and some old ones....Av. came with better punches, harder personals, and nice wittiness....here's some quotables... QUOTABLES: Quote:
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Punches - Verbal Personals - Verbal Opener - Feeble Closer - Verbal Overall - Verbal wins this with harder hits and more up to date metas....Feeble had niceness in some parts....but others just made it look like he couldnt care less if he won or lost... Vote - Verbal aka Av. peace |
i vote for feeble minded.
he came waaay more original and consistent, av had played lines and concepts that have been soooo overused in the rbl it isn't even funny. but you both did come out with above average verses for an rb battle, so i give you props for that. but yeah... v. feeble minded. |
ima have to go wit av
i mean feeble came deff less dope than he usually does. his first lines were very blah, but he did pick it up torwards the end.. should have had punches in the beginning like the end of your verse was verbal just came off with more consistency. i few blah lines but more good lines than anything. He just hit you harder here feebs. More personals also. v/ Verbal |
Hmm...aight battle...
I was expecting more from feeble though He came a lil lacking in punches Ya repetoire line was good.. But Av had a more solid verse... Better and way more punches Was more consistant with them too Tha closer was nice..same with tha pants, and project line sorry feebs..Av got this v/ Verbal |
I found Feeb just a little too played. I dont
think he came like Feeble this week, Just Feeble this week. Av took this with a more solid verse. Both of you have came better. Thats not even needed to be said. You both know this was sub-par for y'a'll. vote - av |
Feeble wasn't that bad
but it was nothing compared to the last few weeks the stanza and a couple other punches were dope but there was a couple of lame ones in there too Av didnt come as good as last week either but still came nice (the line, the joke and the wet punches were dope) The one I inspired over AIM was dope.....Im hiphopscotch overall, av was wittier, more consistent and all that good stuff Vote - Verbal |
oooooh i didnt really know who to vote for till the third read through and i think feeble was JUST edged out in this one,,, i agree the stanza line was dope but the first bar was a bit played and most of Av's was on point.. i liked the top of the line bar.....
so vote AV |
feeble:
i blow ya away, have to call for someone to git the medic, cuz only way you can split Mind, is if your Schizophrenic, coo, Namix did that Stanza line, bad flip.. Verb guy had all aight lines so, vote = him for consistency |
Av wins 11-1 and becomes HW Champ
Feeble loses 8-5 |
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