Da Problem Child vs Fly-E
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-21-09 at 10:28 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Da Problem Child has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-18-09 10:28 PM.

Fly-E's sick like a caved disease....sike! he cant win if he prayed and pleased
people mistake him as a midget, because he stays on his knees
I leave faces squinted harshly, in a mad-mean-face
yea you win some but this is nothing like the drag-queen-race
I've studied your battles,How could you say you gunnin' and Pull-it
when the only thing you pull is hamstrings, when runnin from bullets
even if you could...you couldnt, every line of yours is killed-and-slautered
because the only time you spit effective is when you mouth's filled-with-water
he will be runnin'-now, when gunz his size let of a thunder-sound
that will refrain him from being FLY-E when he's six-feet-underground

Fly-E has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-20-09 07:38 PM.

Yo problem child you aint a problem but ya lyrics deffinetly are
The first step is admittin the problem and don't take it to da heart
Or maybe you will and you'll have a cardiac arrest
So before you type ya verse my name will make you struggle wit ery breath
pm'ing me thinkin that my votes is always against you
it aint that i hate you your shit jus really aint good dude
Nothin personal bra you jus need to go another way
Because rap aint ya game so please go, Don't stay
I don't care for you one bit single you out wit a grin
At least my votes i got wasn't from pm'n for da win

Voted For: Da Problem Child

seen better from u before,to wack to break down the battle but i gave it to da problem child for a little more creativity

Voted For: Fly-E

vote fly e for originlity and not making another account to vote for himself fucking dumb ass

why the fuck this niggas not bannd yet??????......................................... .......

Voted For: Fly-E

Vote:fly e

Problem your verse was going no-where considering ur latest drops... There was no consistance'.
Fly elevating sum son well done.You took this one.better verse.

The funny thing is murdah that problem has'nt even responded to any questions of him being the same person as godz chilld.............

^^^ what can he say???

the IP already proved it....

im going to the complaint section word....

Iv already done it but they think its 2 different people in the same house which is bollocks, coz if it was he woulda explained in any of the threads this is in.

This was feedback posted for Fly-E
 

Not voting becuz all dis bullshit about me voting for DPC

are u fucking serious???


YO FOR REAL DA PROBLEM CHILD AKA GODZ CHILD U A BITCH...

so i gotta get rid of one of u...

pink slip one of u bitches the fuck outta here cheating mother fucker... :cussing:

yea u fucking FAG NOTICE U ONLY COME TO HES BATTLES AND NOTICE VOTED FOR HIM IN EVERY BATTLE....

ITS TO FUCKING ODVIOUS AND IF NIGGAS DONT WANNA ACT ON IT I WILL...

PINK SLIP BITCH...

ROFL problem the game is up, so far godz has only voted on your battles, there has been so many battles open yet his only on yours u cock...........

So obvious.

ummm wow alot has happened haha lmao thanks for the votes.. uppinnnnnnnn and godz child pm'ed me yesterday to.... hmmm???

What did he say in his message fly????????????????

He was jus talkin about problem child and shit like that ntohin big really you guys obviously got a better hold on it than me lol.

Uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn...........................

Uppinnnnnnnnnnnnn for votes bump bump................

Uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn votes..

bukk shit ass battle,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Bumppppppppppppppp............................Uppi innn

Uppin this shit bump bump vote fairly i will peep ya'lls battles out to.

Voted For: Da Problem Child

I have to say the first half made me want to vote for the other guy before even reading his. I mean you throw a "sick" meta4 and then an "on yo knee's" line...WTF.
That middle line is what did it for ya....it saved you from coming off as played as shit and maybe even a slight form of a biter. decent flow....a lil strecthed. The other guy just started to get really chopping an short with his lines. Not real close.

I guess its not close you gave more negative feed to him than me unexplain what a herb.

fine. I will further explain my analysis......
Yo problem child you aint a problem but ya lyrics deffinetly are
The first step is admittin the problem and don't take it to da heart
wtf does that mean? It's total filler with a set up for a terrible heart meti4
Or maybe you will and you'll have a cardiac arrest
So before you type ya verse my name will make you struggle wit ery breath
I just see more talk about a heart attack
pm'ing me thinkin that my votes is always against you
it aint that i hate you your shit jus really aint good dude
Are you battling or trying to be his friend?
Nothin personal bra you jus need to go another way
Because rap aint ya game so please go, Don't stay
Don't stay? Damn! Don't be so harsh
I don't care for you one bit single you out wit a grin
At least my votes i got wasn't from pm'n for da win
Do you get what I'm sayin now?
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....man if he didnt explain it o well, stop bitchin

stfu you stupid fuckin godz child bitch. You aint got no say on this site anyways you verse was straight garbage id give a damn anyways you jus aint bought to tell me nuthin chump.

Voted For: Da Problem Child

ive always thought Da Problem Child dropped dope, i like his swag... he took this w/o a doubt his lines were easier to read and he actually took subliminal shots at Fly-e

no hate keep rapping fellas

*fuck JTR* i want to battle you again you got lucky

lmao uppin this too. but i am glad you always like dpc shows the politics in that vote. Anyways uppin.

checkin votes........................boring as fuck!

Uppin............................................. ..........

Voted For: Da Problem Child

Yo problem child you aint a problem but ya lyrics deffinetly are
The first step is admittin the problem and don't take it to da heart
Or maybe you will and you'll have a cardiac arrest
So before you type ya verse my name will make you struggle wit ery breath
pm'ing me thinkin that my votes is always against you
it aint that i hate you your shit jus really aint good dude
Nothin personal bra you jus need to go another way
Because rap aint ya game so please go, Don't stay
I don't care for you one bit single you out wit a grin
At least my votes i got wasn't from pm'n for da win

nothing to great about this verse,try make your punches more effective to your opponent,do some background work before hand!flow aint to bad tho,thats improved!best punch is highlighted.

vs

Fly-E's sick like a caved disease....sike! he cant win if he prayed and pleased
people mistake him as a midget, because he stays on his knees
I leave faces squinted harshly, in a mad-mean-face
yea you win some but this is nothing like the drag-queen-race
I've studied your battles,How could you say you gunnin' and Pull-it
when the only thing you pull is hamstrings, when runnin from bullets
even if you could...you couldnt, every line of yours is killed-and-slautered
because the only time you spit effective is when you mouth's filled-with-water
he will be runnin'-now, when gunz his size let of a thunder-sound
that will refrain him from being FLY-E when he's six-feet-underground

some nice wordplay in here,first thing i noticed.but the punches werent alwats as effective as they could have been.but a good verse none the less.best punch is highlighted.

if you could vote on my battle,that would be sweet.that shit needs closing haha

Voted For: Da Problem Child

overall better verse, no need to break down the WHOLE battle.....i just was not feelin Fly's verse(no hate).

DPC punches were more effective, Fly had a couple decent lines but wasnt enough