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Se7eN 02-17-04 06:10 PM

Se7eN v.s LongBeachesfinest
 
iight here is our verses, come on people vote, and check in longbeach so they know it is your verse

(Se7eN's Verse)

(verse)

Ayo,

I’m closin’, this posin’ herb, that is bitched up and soft spoken
Look at his raps, you can tell that 100 percent of his brain is broken
Kid’s so over rated, like the next Eminem star, that’s still debated
He’s the biggest herb, since Fred Durst claimed he was hated
I pop more shit, than you can spit, and that’s over and done wit
Your style is as wack, as the shitty ass rhyme you put in your sig
Juss because your from Long Beach, doesn’t mean your pure street
Have your skills more spaced out, than 50 cen’t’s crooked teeth (lol)
If ya blink, you’ll lose me, next time my advice is don’t choose me
I have you broken up into pieces, like the “Friday the 13th” movies
So this battle is over, get your rabbits foot or grab ya five-leaf clover
Still ya chances of winning this battle, is like a drunky being sober

it's an ok verse not my best but good,

Se7eN 02-17-04 06:12 PM

here is Long Beach's verse

---get Outta Here Wit That Wack Shit---
--yo....--
The Time Is Now..shit Im Bout To Show Ya Fate...
How U A Dynatsy... Ya Pic?... Scared To Show Ya Face...
This My First Battle... Im Takin It All...
Desert Eagle... 4 Shots The Only Way Ima Fall...
And Yeah... I Got What It Takes To Expose Ya Team...
Put Seven Shots To Yo Chest... Ill Expose Ya Spleen...
You Aint Shit... Ima Tydle Wave Washin You Up...
You Wack As Fuck... Idont Know Why They Aint Lockin You Up...
Make Way For Dr. Jeckle... Ill Freckle Yo Face...
If Yall Puck Pussies Keep Disrespectin My Space

Se7eN 02-17-04 06:18 PM

uppin on this battle x1, if ya view this please vote on this battle please VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE

LongBeach Finest 02-17-04 06:20 PM

I Cant Lose
 
Yo------CHECKIN IN!!!
The Time Is Now... Shit Im Bout To Show Your Fate...
How U A Dynasty.. Yo Pic?.. Scared To Show Ya Face...
This Is My First Battle... You Can See Me Takin It All...
Desert Eagle... 4 Shots The Only Way Ima Fall...
And Yeah.. I Got What It Takes To Expose Your Team..
Put Seven Shots To Yo Chest.. Ill Expose Yo Spleen...
You Aint Shit... Ima Tydle Wave Washin You Up ...
You Wack As Fuck... I Dont Know Why They Aint Lockin You Up...
Make Way For Dr. Jeckle... Ill Freckle Yo Face...
If Yall Punk Pussies Keep Disrespectin My Space :nono:

LongBeach Finest 02-17-04 06:57 PM

Im Uppin...
Yall Need To Read This Heat...
And Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote

Se7eN 02-17-04 07:19 PM

uppin on this battle x2, if ya view this please vote on this battle please VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE

Daz 02-17-04 07:35 PM

lmao...why do herbs battle...nowadayz..

se7en completely merked this kid...anyonereading this will clearly ee..however 7drop was in now way good....no way...therefore i advise him not to do this type of verse anymore or someone will eventually get him....long beach is just plain wack...no good punches...

v/7

LongBeach Finest 02-17-04 07:35 PM

Uppen On This One Yall Please Vote The Favor Will Be Returned

LongBeach Finest 02-17-04 08:11 PM

Gotta Be Kiddin Me
 
You Sick For That Shit...
My Shit... Way Vicious...
Fuck U... U Battle Me

Se7eN 02-18-04 07:36 AM

lol uppin on this battle x3, if ya view this please vote on this battle please VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE

MichaelCorleone 02-18-04 10:31 AM

seven got this on hands down. punches and everything else where just way better. long beach was repititive with guns and did self glorification. that's a no no in these battles. rhyme scheme was not good either vote to se7en.

MichaelCorleone 02-18-04 11:19 AM

vote on this battle for me please
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115158

ill bing aka U.G 08-03-04 03:20 AM

for even----
seven you shit was tight i dint like your punes your struchure was tight your flow was a little bit off your multis were coo but i dont think it as hot

for longbeach

look yu barrly had punch lines there where acouple you was talkin more about what yall do instead of the punches but what you said was tight the flow was all good strucher off mutis off

but i give it to ---- long beach

DRAG~ON 08-04-04 12:34 AM

i give diss battle 2 Se7eN
cuz atleast his flow had sum
hittin punches n metas
dough LBfinest structure was
a lil better i like Se7eN's flow better
v/Se7eN
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thanx
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D-ICED 08-04-04 04:40 PM

seven good verse but your puches aint really connect how they should but you had good flow and struture.long to me got this with better punches and personals 'you scared to show yo pic'.long also had a good flow and neither of you had good vocab.
v-long with better punches and personals


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