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Direkt-Threat 07-06-02 01:41 AM

Blah Freestyle, I was bored, can I get feedback still!
 
Listening to that Styles nd Pharoe...My life beat...please Relate...

Frantically on the mic, I shake emcee's out of there Epidermis...
Cat's come with weak rap's and I send em' back to 'Customer Service'...
Just because they spit Worthless, or Unworthy...
With fork's and spoons Emcee's can't Serve Me...
Trappin' thoughts that once existed in the minds of Characters...
It's a shame to see me rend Emcee's, and Jeer at thier weak Laughters...
Displaying the Raw Talent, Sweep feet from under you befor you Caught ya Balance...
As I listen to Hip-Hop, rap's just become a Part of Me...
I'll rip out your heart and smoke a joint out of your Arteries...
It's unknown freestyle, no need to challenge my Supreme Authorities...
Reprogrm your mainfraim, and it's known I don't need points to Score B...
Direkt Threat left...now I came back...There asking Who's Dead...
I write knowledge on bullets, that's the only way I get inofrmation Threw Heads...
Spitting with big bands, ya'll amatuers are just the Little Singers...
I'm the type of cat to flick your preacher off with out a Middle Finger...

That's all for now kiddi's, one...

biggdz40cal 07-06-02 02:05 AM

FUCC PIMP!!!!!!!!!
 
YOU SHOULD'VE SAVED THAT SHIT FOR BATTLE PIMP!!!

GLAD I DIDNT HAVE TO FACE THAT VERSE....(CHEATER BUSTIN TO TIGHT ASS BEATS!!!)......................................... ........................................NOT REALLY PIMP!!!! I DO THE SAME THING!!!

THATS ELEVATIN'(KEEP WUT YOU DOIN)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !HOTLINES

Direkt-Threat 07-06-02 03:46 AM

Uppin...

Messiah 07-06-02 05:03 AM

Damn man, this was nicely done...great flow and real nice punches...

Enjoyable to read...

Keep it comen...

Peace n god bless.

Direkt-Threat 07-06-02 12:31 PM

Uppin...

Direkt-Threat 07-07-02 12:04 AM

Uppin!

•madd•Professor• 07-07-02 01:44 AM

this was aiight, nothing really special... had some tight rhymes, some of your end rhymes didn't flow with the others, but its koo, freestyles are ill sometimes, i liked this, peace 'n' keep spitting


signed,
~madd

LACK OF LOGIC 07-07-02 01:47 AM

PROPS YO THIS WAS COOL SOME MINBOR IMPROVEN NEEDE BUT ITS HOT


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