Lost Gone and Dead
 

Sometimes i don't know how to feel-sad,happy,or lustful ways,
When you change personalities through out the days,
When you pounce your body over mine and i began to shed tears
I try to figure what your thinking or have been throughout the years
When you touch my face so gentle and chills run through my spine
Why does it go that way will you forever be mine
When you grab me by the hips and kiss my neck in such lust
I wonder if you love me or am i just what you touch
You speak those names babe,boo,baby and my favorite mami
And when i cry myself to death you always somehow stop me
Your forever there you fulfill my fantasies with the best intension
And never failed to say you love me should i mention
We walk talk and plan futures for the young ones to grow
But everystep of the way i feel as if i lose you in my soul
Im the one you'd rather take to your mother and not just the bed
Then why baby,was our love lost gone and dead

pretty good
the rhyme sheme was alright
good for a love poem

nice
 

i liked it alot. it was an emotional. i really understand what you want to get across. you make your point very clear. and i like yhe way you ended it with your title. you must be real pretty. :evilgrin: :hump:

Thanks a lot.

Holla at ya girl