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L.X. Vs Potential
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Give ya this Becuz Verses go out in a zoom.... Becuz Ya verses are more Used then an aol chat room.... Play wit kids ya age...Oops my bad tatle tellin Wit ya snitches... Becuz Ya Sub TItle dont mean new to Rb It means New to RIckle bitches.. Notice He dont get into Crews..They leave this nigga Sad and mad on the bench.. Mad becuz He poor So he still Presents Like If he was the Grech...... I give it to him...He gettin up there But ya have to be taller.... Hes lyin so much like Ponocio But instead of His Nose growin His dick is gettin smaller This man Cant protect his self for nothing on Rb...What If he got into a fight.. Becuz they twice ya height, Or its becuz they leave ya in Africa wit ya pee Hole tight |
aiight good verse......here's mine.....
Call ya brain "wackness" cuz all ya rhymes "revolve" around it lyke a spinning "axle"/ He "predicted this battle" so he decided to "take" the L and leave his barz canceled* All ya rhymes "psychological" but due to the "problems" it'll never "break-through"/ Your drop wuz "premature" so in this battle of "lessons" its easy to take out "virtue"/** You say ya intellect's "authentik" then gettin a "metal brain" to help you "spit hard's" an "upgrade"/ If "actions speak louder then words" then your "impression of a rapper" couldn't be guessed in "charades"*** His pro "desires" could never come true, so his "vulgar" style deserves no "pro-fane"(profane)/ He neva "kills humans" cuz he "butchers lyrics" so bad he makes the mic feel pain**** Need to "get back to the basics" cuz "a rookie startin off rite" is essential/ Your rhymes show your "talent-less" which "leads" to you neva havin PoTeNtIaL.... *he left the x n took out tha l in his previos name L.X. ....two lines across canceled.....wackness cancels wackness n tha lines are in his name....(u kan get it) **patience is in his title....and patience is a virtue.....impatience takes out patience.. ***actions speak louder.....if he kant act lyke a rapper...den he kant rhyme like one ****profance is bad language, pro desires, the mics bleeding if you dont get it don't vote.......good luck homie...... |
Ummm Ok You Dqed for having too many lines...LOL But thats if its up to M section..Becuz you Went over the 10 lines limit..Somone went way over and Some was stretched..Nice spit though But its not fair if its counted becuz thats too many lines
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No he had 10 lines.
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stretched??iono about that......but i didn't go over 10 lines, the stars are explanations if thats what your talking about.....
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No he didnt have 10 lines so Stop postin that..hes lines is like 28 or 29..I understand if some of them went over but this man went completely over..Dont post that bull ish in here
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oh aight I see......OKs
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1.Call ya brain "wackness" cuz all ya rhymes "revolve" around it lyke a spinning "axle"/
2.He "predicted this battle" so he decided to "take" the L and leave his barz canceled* 3.All ya rhymes "psychological" but due to the "problems" it'll never "break-through"/ 4.Your drop wuz "premature" so in this battle of "lessons" its easy to take out "virtue"/** 5.You say ya intellect's "authentik" then gettin a "metal brain" to help you "spit hard's" an "upgrade"/ 6.If "actions speak louder then words" then your "impression of a rapper" couldn't be guessed in "charades"*** 7.His pro "desires" could never come true, so his "vulgar" style deserves no "pro-fane"(profane)/ 8.He neva "kills humans" cuz he "butchers lyrics" so bad he makes the mic feel pain**** 9.Need to "get back to the basics" cuz "a rookie startin off rite" is essential/ 10.Your rhymes show your "talent-less" which "leads" to you neva havin PoTeNtIaL.... Hmm maybe u cant count? |
*he left the x n took out tha l in his previos name L.X. ....two lines across canceled.....wackness cancels wackness n tha lines are in his name....(u kan get it)
**patience is in his title....and patience is a virtue.....impatience takes out patience.. ***actions speak louder.....if he kant act lyke a rapper...den he kant rhyme like one ****profance is bad language, pro desires, the mics bleeding if you dont get it don't vote.......good luck homie...... ^^these were all explanations not part of the verse....... if you still believe i went over plez show me how, and number my barz and good luck.......... |
LOL He still said it even after I said oh aight..LOL...I Though those was rhymes but aight..Nice spit..Verses are stretched..LOL
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Wow u say "Lol" notice we posted at the same time.Im not gonna Free post so poeple can vote for him.
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Verses are stretched
^^stop vote swaying please...... |
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