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.:FiorZ:. 02-17-04 02:34 PM

.:FiorZ:. vs. italy
 
rules are:

u spit first
10 lines max
no hate, crew, dr votes

holla...

italy 02-17-04 03:03 PM

whats that n yo mouth, a blunt, a telescope or a dick
u fuckin faggot, take those queer glasses off, u make me sick
u just another brit tryin 2 act like u black
what u need is another brit 2 go fuck u n the ass
u aint never heard a gun shot, pop, or blast
u aint no thug, u cant learn it from an internet class
this shit's like a race, where im first, and u're last
im like the future and u're like the past
"fiorz, smoke herbs" but u smoke dix instead
what u need is a loaded piece stuck 2 yo head

.:FiorZ:. 02-17-04 03:15 PM

here we go

this fukin newb gettin slapped and sent back through tha door he came in
call me buffy the vampire the way my concepts slayed him
i played his girl sold her ass like a game of monopoly
imma cut through ya face bones like you got cotton cheeks
consistents flows like niagra falls is how i cum your way
ur style is like football pitches, its so fukin played
talkin thug actin ruff, thinkin u ghetto
ur whole verse comes up cheaper than the total cost of NETTO
imma bout to son this dude italy, i've already showed you
call me Carlo Azeglio Ciampi the way ive owned you (Carlo Azeglio Ciampi is president of italy)

.:FiorZ:. 02-17-04 04:16 PM

uppin already
vote mu'fukas vote

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mc aines 02-17-04 04:20 PM

ayo imma hit this up wen ya hit this up fiorz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114960

nice drop

mc aines 02-17-04 04:29 PM

2 this battle well i cant call it a battle........

fiorz murderd this cat wit harder punches better worplay personals da only thing italy got was structure and attempted punches u need 2 elelvate quite alot man try visitin the wackness emergency centre 4 tips and im sure u will elevate n e ways ma vote goes 2 fiorz on this 1

.:FiorZ:. 02-17-04 06:07 PM

uppin no. 2.........................................

.:FiorZ:. 02-17-04 07:42 PM

uppin............................................. ......

Archeologist 02-17-04 08:30 PM

Italy... Your drop was aiight but you didnt realy have any punches, your structure was good but you should concentrate on punches more..you opener was wack (diks get played to much), closer was ok though.....
Fiorz... your drop was better because you had everything such as hard hittin Punches and good wordplay.. your structure was aiight but a lil bit scratchy.......

\/ote.... Fiorz
Hit up the link in my Sig please................

Freeman 02-17-04 08:52 PM

Ergh...

Not a good flow from Fiorz... Its not normally this bad... Good punches... Structure was ok except a couple of stretched lines... Decent verse...

Italy... Completely wack... No punches... Structure and flow were iight... But that dont count for much if the content isnt very good...

Weak battle... But a merking anyway... Lol...

v/ Fiorz

Hit this up...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...020#post1193020

Thanks...

Pz...

Archeologist 02-17-04 09:01 PM

heres my link so you can return the favour........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114757

Idid yours so be fair....

DaNkSta 02-17-04 09:08 PM

Fiorz took it close battle...........1.................

$pitacular 02-17-04 09:17 PM

Ok, here it is:

Italy -

whats that n yo mouth, a blunt, a telescope or a dick
u fuckin faggot, take those queer glasses off, u make me sick
no.
u just another brit tryin 2 act like u black
what u need is another brit 2 go fuck u n the ass
wtf no.
u aint never heard a gun shot, pop, or blast
u aint no thug, u cant learn it from an internet class
ok, still waiting for a punch
this shit's like a race, where im first, and u're last
im like the future and u're like the past
LMFAO at this verse...
"fiorz, smoke herbs" but u smoke dix instead
what u need is a loaded piece stuck 2 yo head
damn man please stop...

and
fiorZ-

this fukin newb gettin slapped and sent back through tha door he came in
call me buffy the vampire the way my concepts slayed him
eh... decent opener
i played his girl sold her ass like a game of monopoly
imma cut through ya face bones like you got cotton cheeks
nah... to much effort to rhyme here and no real punch
consistents flows like niagra falls is how i cum your way
ur style is like football pitches, its so fukin played
no.
talkin thug actin ruff, thinkin u ghetto
ur whole verse comes up cheaper than the total cost of NETTO
didn't get this one...
imma bout to son this dude italy, i've already showed you
call me Carlo Azeglio Ciampi the way ive owned you (Carlo Azeglio Ciampi is president of italy)
ok finsher

vote - fiorZ because of the one punch (closer). really weak battle yall. That is all.

hit this up w/ an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114933


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