9th degree vs K-Trini
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 KO
4-1 win

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-04-05 at 07:27 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

K-Trini has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-04-05 07:18 PM.

Accept this shit 9th..........don't duck......I ain't wastin my time unless I know you gonna show up.

Lol @ you wasting your time...

9th Degree has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-04-05 07:25 PM.

accept this shit......................................

Quack,Quack?Sayin I duck battles?I'll fuck ya up like Cosby's hairline
A LiLsambo with bad hair?nah,more like wannabe rambo with bad rhymes
9th Degree be hating on muther fuckers who go to porn stores**
Cause He stay "broke,"no one listens to him like the school laws
Wanna hate on me causeI'm Trini?But where you from 9th??
Like vampires,you refrain from "sheddin light" with all ur might
Change your name to "clubs",cause you constantly stay minature
&Wat sopposely gangsta puts a Pokemon card in his signature?

Keyed verse........Bring ya fuckin pre-writtens faggot. :shoot:

If ya lost.....here ya go
Lil Sambo with bad hair is wat he put in his avatar

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172835
^^9th hatin on a guy who goes to porn stores

He put nutin in his his profile & Sheddin light is a term meant to let the facts out above urself.Vampires are scared of light.

Pokemon card in sig.
http://tinypic.com/6774mf

He ducked the last battle, so we're callin' him fowl
But I'll just KO-Trini like I bought him a vowel
He said beatin' me will make him the king, well in that case
He might take the belt, 'cuz from me all he deserves is a waste
I'll blow you away, you made a mistake to step into the whirlwind
'Cuz I haven't hit KT this hard since my last girlfriend
Ah fuck it, I make a few jokes and then he'll get pissed
But last time I watched for Trini was when I was six
http://tinypic.com/6qft6r.jpg

Understand everything in both verses or don't vote. G'luck Trin :thumbup:

This was feedback posted for K-Trini
 

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This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 

nice..............................................

Voted For: 9th Degree


Degree
Alright Not Your Best Battle But Let Me Break It Down, Punches In Here We're Some What Played But I Liked How It Was Worded, To Make It Seam Like It Wasn'tYour Vocabulary Was Good Here, Although Some Was Basic, But Came Good, Structure Was Decent Like How You Lined Up The lines, Your Personals In This Battle Was Killer, Wordplay Was Nice, You Had Some Very Good Personals Man

K-Trini
Alright Dawg Pretty Good For A New Guy, You Had Some Nice punches Rhyme Scheme Was Shiotty Though, Personals Was Aiight Not Hitting To Hard Though, Wordplay Was Aiight Nothing Special Man Decent, Structure Okay You Getting Better At It Man, And Also Vocabulary Needs To Change Cause It's Whack Man Seriously

Vote-Degree
Cause His Punches We're Harder Hitting, And His Vocabulary Was Better, Personals Came And Hit Hard, Along With Wordplay So There For Your Drop Came Harder Man, No Hate To None, RTF On My Open Mic In My Sig Dawg
One Vote -Degree
Holla Back

This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 

LMAO! @ USING THE POWER RANGER...OMFG That was Thoughful.

Voted For: 9th Degree

wow.....hahahahahahahhahahahahahhahahahah

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best verse 9th, hahahahahaha, owned him......trini's verse was garbage, lol.....

and lmlo at saying 9th has prewrittens, when trini has been wanting this battle for like a week...:rolleyes:...why would 9th waste his time, lol

good shit.

yeah that power ranger line shoulda got this thread closed
Killa TRINI personal.........

Voted For: 9th Degree

9th Degree
He ducked the last battle, so we're callin' him fowl
But I'll just KO-Trini like I bought him a vowel
Could have been better, but good wordplay.
He said beatin' me will make him the king, well in that case
He might take the belt, 'cuz from me all he deserves is a waste
Should have spelled it the other way. Decent
I'll blow you away, you made a mistake to step into the whirlwind
'Cuz I haven't hit KT this hard since my last girlfriend
Self glorification mostly.
Ah fuck it, I make a few jokes and then he'll get pissed
But last time I watched for Trini was when I was six
Lmao, nice closer.

Overall, this isn't your best verse, but it was pretty good. The closer really won it for you. Work on your wording a tad though, cuz that waist bar confused me and it kind of hindered your punches.

K-Trini
Quack,Quack?Sayin I duck battles?I'll fuck ya up like Cosby's hairline
A LiLsambo with bad hair?nah,more like wannabe rambo with bad rhymes
Bad punch, and you dissed yourself.
9th Degree be hating on muther fuckers who go to porn stores**
Cause He stay "broke,"no one listens to him like the school laws
Weak personal and punch.
Wanna hate on me causeI'm Trini?But where you from 9th??
Like vampires,you refrain from "sheddin light" with all ur might
Bad set up line, personal could have been better.
Change your name to "clubs",cause you constantly stay minature
&Wat sopposely gangsta puts a Pokemon card in his signature?
Bad set up, and weak personal. Where does he say he is gangster?

Your set up lines were really weak along with your personals. You had some decent concepts, but you really didn't word them right. Work on punches and personals.

Overall, 9th just had a better verse overall. His punches and personals hit harder, had some good wordplay, and overall his concepts were better. Both need to work on your wording, however.

No hate, just an honest opinion.

v- 9th Degree