optimized vs granmastr chi
 

Battle Rules:

3-5 bars

No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 80

Check in by: 10-03-04 at 02:07 AM

Must drop verse in 230 minutes after check in.


DQed for going over line limit

granmastr chi has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-03-04 01:39 AM.

optimized has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-03-04 01:44 AM.

why must we wait that long for a quick freestyle battle??

lets drop in 20 min tops i will

i put the gun to ya lip, that "auto" make u talk faster
bulk basterd, I'LL leave u stumbling outta this ring like a shaolIN DRUNK MASTER
watch how these punches be deliever, plus it dont own a mail-box
so lets take it to the gun, cuz dog im nicer with the hands then a chines nail-shop
shit my gun got no relastion to the sun but bet it'll make ya tan-faster
think u a boss basterd?, i'll have u chop'ed up in inches samller then a "gram...master" *grandmaster*
it the k9 thought that got ya liver in the open plus i beuried bone
pitch bigger rock then baseball cuz my lines a "straight hit" like barry-bonds
why u take forever to think, bullets i'll swim in ya chest like a life-guard
plus i just thought it was legal to hurry up a retard
i aint got no personal but this beef between us
cuz if it ever got outta hand, there go along ya fingers

realize I'm what Optimized fantasizes to be,
Guy's come'n up short like he was circusized lyrically
Names Chi, Sodamized ya with my bars, 'n' jist a quick key
I asin't a pshyic ...nor do I pretend to be, but your loss is plain to see
When I could be an amputee...still you couldn't be defeet'n me
What more these peeps need to see? A Multi? Better give em 2 or 3,
Cause lord knows, ya flows a shit show so they rather go and vote for me
Let me finish this line real quick with 38 keys and one click
Kid spits hot shyt like a chick with a dick no there no need to nitpick

Do you know what 3-5 bars is ??????

Idiot you droped 6.5 bars.

Voted For: granmastr chi

lol vote goes to granmaster chi.....

Intro:Optimized...
i put the gun to ya lip, that "auto" make u talk faster
bulk basterd, I'LL leave u stumbling outta this ring like a shaolIN DRUNK MASTER, lol pretty good intro man pretty good.....

realize I'm what Optimized fantasizes to be,
Guy's come'n up short like he was circusized lyrically
but shit man this is one of the best intros i have seen, hahahahaha so funnyy!!

Um the rest of both your raps were a bit nebie but quite funny, Punches is equal, becuase there wernt realy any good punches besides the intro and they wereboth awesomoe, well done both of you keep it up...

please return favour and vote on these, thx

Up'n this shyt, I'll return the favour .

aight can ya drop seom more feed back on this i will drop a honest vote in one of your battles

come on come one upp'in this battle for more votes

This was feedback posted for granmastr chi
 

Although I could vote on this, I'll let you guys get some other feedback I can tell you what I think in the forums Chi, But Chi takes this with overall more complexity, and better punches.

upn upn upn for votes......................................

Up'n this mutha fuka.... watch me work and merk. .

upn upn............................................... ..