Redragon vs **~SynText~**
Rules:
1.No crew votes 2.No hate votes 3.No d/r votes 4.5-7 bars 5.dont matter who goes first 6.1 round 7.Explain votes 8.No fresh newbie votes 1 |
Keystyle
Don't feed.......
Picks up mic Your gonna get shot;kid your gonna get tossed// I'll put your eyes in the back of ur head so you can't look FORWARD to this loss/~1~(oh) You must be a geoligist cos you touching me like feeling da equator// He's a chronic masterbater...but the only one you make 'breath hard' is Darth Vador/~2~(oh) Like Hookers not getting paid kid i don't give a fuck// You winning??But you addmitted you sucked!!!/~3~ Any style like bruce lee;face it b;i'll str8 rip ne mc// Battling me is like 'not shaving' you won't bare face me/~4~ crack-and-speak get ready for-this-defeet(defeat)// Kid you must be Sun sensitive cos you cant handel this heat!!/~5~ I “Spit Flames” at “High Temps” Scorch da Brow's and Bars off ya Man, Cremate u with Hot Line's then take ya Ashes and "Charge ya Fam"/~6~(God) "Clinical" the way i "Operate" on "Open Hearts" and such, when ma Biblical Scripture leave ya’ll playin "[b]Harps" at Dusk![b]..../~7~(damn) Drops mic Uppin for you 1 |
its over this kid salivates more wackness then porno girls after a hot date....
Final play like shakespear seeing his last theater when Playing Russian Ruollete~/~ Syn gotta be sickness cause this kids lamer then yahoo kids trying to BEAT the Net..... Desease ya PET syn intellect is spitting on statues like Steven Kawkins Vet~/~ You gotta be kidden to spit writtens its ok cause after the first line they oppose you.... Your scripts ROTTEN on desktop and after 2 months you spit DEcOMPOSING shIT FOOL~/~ your a true sick kid with sickly split skin from trying to battle syllables with SYN.... hahahahahah you wacker then frate party with no girl with you like (time for masterbation~/~ i leave a battle i get ooohhhhhhh and awwwwwwww crowd in a aAPPLAUSE..... you leave this batlle real equiped pussy strapped up with TAPE and GAWWWWWSSS theres ya ten with no fancy shit to try to sway votes hahahahahahahahahahaha uppin |
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Alright 0-2 text votes 0-1 poll votes....plz look at the punches i had more and i thought punches won battles.Whatever uppin
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"I'll put your eyes in the back of ur head so you can't look FORWARD to this loss/~1~(oh)"
that was bitten.. not exactly the same line but the same exact concept. |
aight this is how i see it...................i see a lot of peeps working on thier verses making sure its good to tha eye(dragon)...........theres no need jus gotta have the hardest punches.....(syntex).....also a flow......(both)
so ma vote goes to=syntex.......punches always gets it for me hit this up..............cheers its a shit battle tho http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81869 |
good battle heres my breakdown
wordplay=tie,both had good wordplay, keep it up vocab=syn, win this one, but both had good vocab, syn just had better usage creativity=syn,he didn't use played lines, red your shit was tight but some of your lines i have seen before, you flipped'em nice but lost points for not being creative enuff, my opinion punches=syn=agree with lyrical on this one punches win battles, no need to do anything fancy, that is for newbs, both had nice punches but i think syntex edged you out n punches in this one flow=syn,again cuz red your lines weren't even and kinda choppy ya know, syn had a basic flow and a good ryhme scheme throughout his entire verse multis=neither, had multi's its cool though, both kept a safe flow and focused more on punches favorite line=syn your a true sick kid with sickly split skin from trying to battle syllables with SYN.... hahahahahah you wacker then frate party with no girl with you like (time for masterbation~/ was really feelin his line, nice punch,not too fancy but got the job done personals=neither, no personals in this one, both needs to work on personals, they win battles and shows its not prewritten vote=syntex[b/], nice battle but syn gets my vote, red got skillz just needs to fix a couple of little things to get better honest vote guys [b]please respect it and dont bitch about it good luck to both holla |
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SINCE YOU PM'D THIS NO ONE IS ALLOWED TO VOTE FOR REDRAGON WHO ALREADY VOTED WHO INCLUDES: Tonya~Montana Auspicious C_Drama ALSO MASTA C & AB0MINATION GAVE VERY CRAPPY VOTES SO POLL WILL BE 2-0 IN SYNTEXT'S FAVOR IM RESETTING REDRAGON'S POLL VOTES & CLEARING ALL FREEPOST -BROOKLYN |
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Brooklyn.. Calm Your Shit Down.. Have Sumone
Check My God Damn Pms... Dragon Never Pmed Me.. I've Been Peeping This Kids Shit Since He Started.. Hes Just Underatted And I Haven't Seen Him Battle In A Long WHile.. So Put My Vote Back In There Damnit |
^^^Word...he's just getting votes cause he's mod...and thugwhyte speaks the truth...let the poll back to what it was,i dident know any of those guys that voted for me accept him^^and i diden't Pm him or anything..If you want to leave it that way then do it.If he gets the win outta this,kid you diden't really beat me,cos you got newbie votes
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this is how i see it...styles were kinda whack
i don't like the quotes dragon n i don't like the stretched lines either dragon's verse tho was ight... kinda personal n hit well syn here... started off really strong... hittin hard like whoa...kinda then like afta line 5 or so... it became really whack... like whoa that aaaaaaawwwwww shit n so on didn't float... well it was close... but ya i think dragon has got it... both could improve some n all. |
^^Thanks kid,i wasen't trying he isn't on my level....But anyway upping the hell out of this shit 3-2 him.....
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