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Troop vs Deception vs Hells Fire
3 Way Match Due to Odd Number of People...
Rules: Battles Go Up Friday Check In Due Sunday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time Verses Due Tuesday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time Voting Ends Thursday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time 20 Lines Minimum 40 Lines Maximum No Biting No Recycling Do Not Go Over The Line Limit Or Under The Line Limit Meaning No Less Than 20 Lines No More Than 40 Lines You Must Vote On 3 Battles Per Week And Edit Them Into Your Check-In.. If You Dont Do So, Youre Banned From The Tourney The Following Week Topic: The Apocolypse |
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checkin in...this is gonna be a sick battle, triple threat goin down...big ups to the kats on the other side of this :spit: :spit:
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Czeck ot my melodie.
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It iz what it iz ..............Nuff Said*
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See the steel giants that hold my soul clients
My corrupted and evil operatives, spread my defiance Creating earth's slayers, draining mother nature Implaing great stakes, in prepare of the devils prayer Rituals siph-ons black blood from it sacrifice Demons survive as they fill their appetites I am the devil that can escape the foundry of time I am the devil that defies the boundry of lines I am the devil that comes unexpectedly I am the devil thats present eternaly Justice is your cause to pause chaos But this causes more chaos, you seem lost Seperation is an illusion I use to spread confusion Lost souls run wild to find a solution Chaos insues, but justice brewed for some order But again seperation insues disorder I am the devil that can escape the foundry of time I am the devil that defies the boundry of lines I am the devil that comes unexpectedly I am the devil thats present eternaly Cities of stone, Pompei come to mind? Desecration of populations, Black Plague midevil times. Opressive Tyrants, Stalin's social crimes Vlad the Impaler was a student of mine Children of a demon, hmmm maybe Columbine Water Demons, the tsunami during Christmas time Flames in the sky? Eleventh day of the ninth I am the devil that can escape the foundry of time I am the devil that defies the boundry of lines I am the devil that comes unexpectedly I am the devil thats present eternaly |
As the Sun Rises and Sets over the Jerusalem Horizen The Ressurection of Jesus Has Been Issued No Denyin Christians and Muslims Intensions Start to --Re-Burn As the Rumors of The Lords Son will---- Finally Return Sinners.Homosexuals and Such will Fall Under Wrath For not Believing in the Lords ..Return or After Math Pierre Jurieu, Declared 1689 as the JudgeMent Days Monarchys stayed Reblious against LovedMens Ways Extremist Theocratics Mathematics finally Calculated The Prophecie in Which Nostradomus was Infatuated numerous astrologers such as ..Harvey Sat.an.Learn As the Progress Decreased Between Jupiter and Saturn Anabaptist prophet Melchior Hoffman Slowly Predicted That the Second Coming could No longer be Restricted The Apocalypse which Still to this day remains Unfinished With UnNutrioned Anti Christs continue 2 be UnPlenished With the Facts and Prophecies with the Turn of Millenium Brung upon Digital Mentals Produceing Millz in Pentiums Fantisized with an Imagenary similiar 2 Where Toons Play Upon our Mental Capacity which Frightens us of Dooms Day Debateing on Whether Heaven even really Exists in the Mist Disguted with those Delivered to Hell would Maybe be Myth? That any Individual Against His very own Word would Burn As the Entire Universe Slowly still waits For..His..........Return |
Apocolypse
Intro Earth is quiet, beauty is silent, matter of man violent army is defiant, osama is tyrant, batter of man giant usa went to war sounds of bombs filled terrorism sore Bush commended then riddiculed for performance war Korea blew up chemical attack by terrorist who blew up thought it was us n enemies shot up fallout who glow up Apocolypse Buttons were pressed, millions were lost, mushroom cloud dust Korea was stressed, shot missle as test, hit china billion bust russia next messed, neighbor acid blest, india's turn nuke game o chess nation left crest, of missiles in terror vest, anthrax dropped shame n mess my legs are shaken, people are beacon, deaths toll not done taken cancer lives taken, pyro hemisphere waken, air is biological quaken cant shuffle thoughts, ace of spade thoughts, skin off like rust cant muffle coughs, priest gave funeral blocks, survival a must devils no love no lust, plagued dueteral flocks, revival set bust My tears enrich soil, deep i depress n boil, cancer blest to toil start was over oil, black gold killed homo, life set back in koil why heaven let it go down, why wasnt peace and bliss found why grim reap sis to ground, why devil kleave and shit round end of earth, crust pealed showin poisoned fruit and all in dirt judgement day came and went no shelter except government starvation, vibration, malnutrition, no vision earth cries radiation magnation, plaguenation, oni set tone cover bodies sedimentation blood and land flow in cement, death grips souls traped in torment emotion desolate non content, poetry spits end to happy lambnent i have two contractions of lung left and no easy way out wit meth i held the frozen baby as he smiled to death and i fell over context epidermal flexed and acid rain cleaned my chest, blood n poison mixt no more pain, no more suffer, i feel last strain n think of my lover she died tame, before canibal buffer and innocent sent styx water cough, cough, i bleed seein life before my eyes cough, cough, i wish someone silence the crys *heart contracts, lungs cave, eyes roll, luckey no one disturbed this mans grave* |
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Drama vs Anxiety |
who the fuck is hell fire kid is dope as fuck he aint no noob whos alais is he?wtf!anyways this was dope this was basically between troop and hell cuz even though deception had a decent drop he aint come on the level.troop good drop flow aint go to well here though imagery was ok emotion was good and vocab for you is always good but let me tell you why hell got this he had a dope ass flow vocab and imagery was crazy like a walk through the plot histroy and all shit was dope as fuck like i was watching shit unfold it played on my mental field like a movie screen purely dope and that got him my vote here
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Deception- Man, i gotta hand it to you... 63 posts and your already pretty fucking good... You had more originality than the other two... I think when you get more experience, you will be fucking dope... You have the potential to be great, no joke kid... It's not really that your verse was really lacking anything, it's more of a need for more experience... You will be at least a lightweight championship winner in this league within a month, props dog.
Troop- Definetly knew what you were talking about here, made sure you had your facts straight... The only thing i think this verse was lacking was emotion... Shit was pretty nice with the imagery, vocab etc... Flow was choppy in some places but for the most part was good... Another good verse... Hells Fire- Shit was off the fuckin hook dog... Props for this one... Earth is quiet, beauty is silent, matter of man violent army is defiant, osama is tyrant, batter of man giant Nice way to start it off... Verse was basically flawless, i did find it strange how some lines rhymed so perfectly, like the one i posted, and some rhymes more like... no more pain, no more suffer, i feel last strain n think of my lover she died tame, before canibal buffer and innocent sent styx water Basically the only thing wrong i saw, some forced rhymes in there, but good job man, you got this one... Best topical battle i have read in my life... V/Hells Fire |
thank you kids i been ellivatin i love writtin and if ya ever wanna do a collabo holla...my allias was B.WallakaILLNESS i guess i needed to find what i was good at and just kept workin got alot of bad rep...thanx ill post on open mic
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Yea 4 sho
propz 2 u for that Drop tho kid i Jus started diz topical shit Propz were propz are due |
yeah Propz fo sho. Fire verse Hell. Lol Needaa get my link. Glad im elevating. Onli been taking this topical shit serious fo like 2 months. Yo Troop a gud word of advice, join as mani fukin topical leagues as u can. I wont tell u where 2 advertsie, but trust me it helps. Pros see u have talent and help u out. And do be afraid 2 ask help urself. ANywyayz thats what i learned.
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yeah this was my 2nd or 3rd month tryin out da topical thing its fun as hell
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