punchline: Soulless -v- D-Tain
 

...due in like 10-20 doesn't really matter.........

all voting rules apply...

this a battle cuz if it is im down set it up and you got yurself me

..... u almost write a punch yet.......................

*every park bench now a days has been made from recycled plastic... and Bumms are always sleeping on um.... --- get the wordplay----


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Ripped-n-tore, Detaining this lame, Got him ‘right-on-the-floor’…
Cuz D’s threads are like a park bench, slept on a ‘recycled-before’!!!
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....Sonned!!!!!!!!!

so this is jus 1 bar ok then

i was gonna diss you bad, but im jus winding you up like a jack in the box....
if this was 8 mile and you was rabbit, id be banned from huntin you like im a fox....

d-train

i was gonna diss you bad, but im jus winding you up like a jack in the box....
if this was 8 mile and you was rabbit, id be banned from huntin you like im a fox....
that was weak none creative and plain and simple and basic and had no effect in me thinking i should of voted for u,


soulless
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Ripped-n-tore, Detaining this lame, Got him ‘right-on-the-floor’…
Cuz D’s threads are like a park bench, slept on a ‘recycled-before’!!!
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haha nice hit hard and was very creative in every aspect... nicely done

my vote: soulless
D-train yea u was offically ....Sonned!!!!!!!!! as soulless said...

try harder next time....

Soulless
flow is good...multis r good...wordplay is tight...punch is decent...

D-Tain
flow fall off a little...u had a multi...wordplay is simple...punch was played, and didnt connect well...

Overall
both had a multi...Soulless had the better flow...better wordplay...and the better punch...so basing off of that...Soulless gets my vote...

VOTE - SOULLESS

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soulless had a better punchline even though not very creative or imaginative

d train ur shit was nasty u need to work on ur punches a lot more it was too stretched, sounded like you couldnt cut it in one breathe so u squeezed it out n e wayz soulless took this

why yall callin my shit played? and wack? maybe i lost this, yea, but my punches would rip all you who voted, go read my other battles, uppin without d/r votes

D-Tain I can see you got some skills but today I just think you came at the wrong dude. Your punch was good but Soulless took it from you.

Soulless shit was hilarious with the whole park bench and shit...thats a tight punchline.

v/Soulless

Souless- Punch Connected And Flowed, Also Wordplay Was There....

D-Tain- Had Potential But Punch Didnt Hit Very Hard, As Well As The Concept Was Played, Flow Was Ok Tho... But In A Punchline Battle The Impact Of The Punch Counts Most, As Well As If You Flowed It Nice... But Souless Got You For Harder Hitting Punch..

Vote- Souless