don cardy vs. juelz santana
can i compete with the best?
[juelz santana- i am crack] Too dope for this, but you won't admit/ So my tool smoke and spit, make you choke on spit/ You ever seen a man gagged and goggle/ Sound like a newborn tryna ask for bottle/ They like cut it out you slackin, But I bust it out in rappin/ Can you name a nigga better without me bustin out and laughin?/ Nigga you couldn't spit enough to get at me/ I'll stretch you for extracirricular activities/ Forget hollerin for help/ I'll make you wanna pull your lip over your head and just swallow yourself/ You're not on my level, you're not on my shelf/ But you can and you will be just another notch on my belt/ I'm more 'mazing than Grace is when I say shit/ You should say 'Amen' after my name, kid/ Yes, this is that of greatness/ You should say 'Amen' after this statement/ [don cardy- i am crack] can you believe this, fake jesus?, got me goin!/ you aint god but i'll leave you holyer than suday mornin'/ actually, your a casualty, in all reality/ i'm fire, raps on a heat diet, your just another calorie/ gettin' burned off/ ur music's like me watchin' ya girlfriend strip,... gettin' turned off/ but like renovation i'll still break down here walls/ scared to fight, i'll have your dodgin' the ring like you was screenin' calls/ as far as control, if heats all you good at/ than i'm the one who gives you power like the thermastat/ i move cash flow and got cash from the flow/ you need me joe, cuz i produce greens like miracle grow/ i'll get'cha chicken hotter than the kernal/ nuccas mad cuz i got a flow tighter than jim jones' thermals/ and the fact i could get more of you fruits punched than ocean spray/ and make y'all later males than a postal delay/ stamped. |
so far..reading these "battles" seems like wen u battle lil wayne u use his style
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yeah, i'm using there styles against them flowin' to the beat of the song posted. cuz even if i dont measure up yet, i wanted to atleast try and see how close i was to the best so that i can keep on improving.
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word, just seeing if u were doig that on purpose..or if it was just a bad habit...but u should try and create your on style..that way people wont be sayin ur biting there style...cuz that just gives them more ammo towards u...
for instance: lloyd banks stole fabolous style..ya no...just sayin |
oh yeah i know what'chu sayin'. thanks for the advise, i'm about to post a round 2 where i use my own flow and just battle them then if thats what'chall wanna see.
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I like this drop man... keep elevating.. Ya dig?
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good to see you elevatin don... keep it going
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thanks for the feedback. i'm just tryna learn from all of the mistakes i made when i first got here, like when i used to parenthesize everything and flow all unevenly. thanks for the constructive critism y'all gave me back then too that enabled me to step it up.
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