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NOT Messiah Kaeto 02-12-04 12:48 PM

~~The Termination~~
 
~~The Termination~~

Blasphemy ruling...screaming at a lower octave..
Occult movements reach their given occulade..tha grave..
Slaves of power distress by these unobtainable notions..
Devoted to severance within this sick twisted motion..
Cancerous victims deceased with a vengeance..
Caught by tha swing of this disease ridden pendulum..
Prosecution a proselyte...Hellbound for eternity..
Internally seeking to escape this moronic fraternity..
Certainly seeking sanctity within..
These vicious spells burstin with fury...eager to begin..
Eating minds and freezing so many thoughts..
Until a life is unoccupied...its pure blood shall be sought..
Brittle emotions always held with plenipotentiary..
All tha while drinkin from tha humanly penitentiary..
Vasculars weaken as tha exodus gets nearer..
Tha luminesence at tha cessation of the burrow becomes clearer..

Penskills 02-12-04 02:15 PM

For some odd reason..they think I'm you??? very fucking ODD!!! I'm honered that they would think that..but still fucking ODD!!! I guess our IP matches! don't know how and don't know why! but I just wanted to clear that up! I could never write like this! This is fucking ART!

Freeman 02-12-04 03:00 PM

Sarcasm gets you no-where Pen... Lol...

Yea... I'll follow trend...

Brilliant piece... Flawless, SORRY, a meant Flowless...

Only playin... Not that bad really... Try more complex vocabulary though...

Keep trying...

Pz...

MeNTiLL 02-12-04 07:48 PM

^LoL .. more complex vocab. ? This was a dope piece Siah .. Good to see U back man .. Long time no hear or read nuthin from you .. This was a dope piece man .. Flow was sicc .. Some crazy internal rhymes used in there man .. Nicely written piece ..


Prosecution a proselyte...Hellbound for eternity..
Internally seeking to escape this moronic fraternity..


I liked that part of the verse the best for some reason .. Juss hit me in a way I guess .. Dopeness man .. Keep writin' and I hope to see some more stuff from you .. one

Messiah 02-15-04 05:10 AM

it werent me.

oddly ill 02-15-04 05:22 AM

this could have been longer cause i was readin the shit got all into it then bam nothin more this shit was crazy hot gun. keep the illness up

N-Demik 02-15-04 10:34 AM

*Looks at Keezy's sig*

What ever did happen to Savior Allah?!!


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