illogicalbeats vs. The Root
 

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Topic: Let It Snow

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/concisebeatzmusic.htm
i had to have cise upload this for me..my dmusic page fucked up for some reason.... tracks titled.."let it snow"

oh yeah by the way i got brian mcknight to do the singin at the end, fools sick! lol

pz out...

listen you fuckin monkeys

ok i spit some wack ass shit ....one take freestyle with no beat ....
weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

peep it here ...didnt even listen to the other guys flwo .. im crazy its called crap..dontlisten unless u are from rapbattles.com

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/i...lbeatsmusic.htm

illogical- not bad for a freestyle lol...but saying 'let it snow' doesnt make it on topic lol (not hatin deliberately) nice idea for a change up of not usin a beat, i like that...but it wasnt on topic...sorry

Root- flipped shit nicely, lyrics are off the hook...beat is dope...i was waiting for more to come in with the beat, but it was dope as fuck either way...verse was a lil monotone, but im still feelin that shit to the fullest

Vote- Root

The root - beats ill, cise do it? your voice is coo, but the flow is mad computerish, like...word-word-word-word-word-....kinda hard to explain on hur'. You hittin snares, but your delivery is BORING as hell. WTF @ the chorus being mad off beat and shit!..lol...ight drop i guess....you got potential but your delivery is so boring, and computer like, i guess thats the main problem here.

illogical - dog, your rappin on the internet, so wtf are you talking about? BOOOOO @ no beat. are you incapable of figuring out how to use software in order to rap over a beat?...thats too much of a netcee thing i guess. lol

Vote - Root, BOOOO @ other kid.

P.S. - CAN YOU TWO MONKEYS STOP BITCHING BACK AND FORTH? I JUST CLEANED THIS THREAD, DONT KEEP THAT SHIT UP.

.pz.

tha root... wasnt feelin the beat to much but I had to comment on that break before the end of the song... that was fuckin ill how the kick drum came through like that. and for the mono tone thing .. i think it sounds tite that way, but seriously dawg... dont take my advise on this cauz people been tellin me lately i need more feeling in my tracks. anyways, overall a nice track.


illogical.... atleast come through wit an instrumental next time ... fa real.. dis is incomplete as fuck... I like tha fact that its a first take freestyle though... respect for that.

my vote goes to tha root

The root won. ill, dont delete your track anymore dawg. u sold yourself short. good luck in week 3 to both of you

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