"The man"
 

Today...
On top of my stairs...
I saw the man again...
Who wasn't there...

dude.. something.. makes me wanna say.. that this is a very dope piece..

When I was walking up the stairs...
I met a man that wasn't there...
He wasn't there again today...
I wish I wish he'd go away...

Dope.

......... oh ya, thats where I got the idea from

oh well, I bit a concept..

deep, short, powerful, raw

poetic scripture of june :cool:

wow, though this piece was short it said something...so much emotion packed into this small piece...great drop

RTF on my poem...My First Love...please

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yes thhis showed a great amount of emotion. short but had a HUGE story behind it. man i can think of a thousand ways to say that this is a great great piece. very nicely done.

^^ I'll hit you up with some feed on all your poems too soon

title "the man" haha, fucka man on my stairs, im the man bitches *is saying random shit*