round 2 phrantik vs Sand
 

Alright--same rules 10 min 20 max---

Due.. Wed.......
Topic.....
If I could stop ________?

i loved this topic but they never used it and i felt compelled to have it back

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dead;ines changed till saturday.

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yeah i liked this topic.....but they did the no show on this on the last one so i guess thats a nice move for deacon to move this topic to the 2nd round....


ill keep an eye on this...ill be waiting

best of luck with the both of you!

should be dope. what saturday? an entire week?
def. feelin that!

sand is in...
shiznit. if you
talk any more
shit to me,
i swear...you
will regret it...


^that's word....^ lol

errr.......ill pretend i know whatchu talkin bout sand....

The moment, the breeze, the feelings that touch
our most inner-self with such meaning and love,
the lust, the grin, the eyes locked together in place
its such, a sin, because through time it turns to hate,

only breaks come with broken bones and even in broken homes
they're stood a moment when the alone was peaceful and solemn,
the minutes pass as i long to stop em' let them slip through my hands
and turn themselves to mongrols and bring devastation to the lands,
it's the second when your mother survived the car accident, that call
the inner lift up, to the point where you can see beauty on dry walls,
hope, fear, worry, take the hand's of the clock, wind up, slap time
it turns that moment disgusting, the monitor unexpectedly flatlines,
you meet a girl for the first time, beautiful, perfect match, same age
the sex was the most perfect moment, until you find that she has aids,
anger and rage, you beat the shit out of your enemy, jaw= boot through
and you feel victorious, until he's on the ground and he shoots you,
it is not going to be alright, if it was perfection would exist in life...
and i believe in moving on...the only thing that i want to stop...is time...

i had to work last night.. sorta a last minute thing i was supposed to have it off..
ill post tonight.
sorry for the inconveniance.

Cam on Phrantiko! Post...

Cmon Now..He's only had OVER A WEEK to post...let's cut the man a break...........................:rolleyes: ...................:p

hmmm im thinking phrantik maybe out of this round unless he gets to me by today.

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yo deacon.. i had a rough weekend, and if i do post it wont be until later tonight. so i myself say give sand the win. i should have worte early this week, knowing id have to work all weekend.
sorry for the no show.. ill win the next tourny for ya.

aww, Tiki!..cant you just write somethin real quick??

Its a shame to have you out of the contest..

ps- i called you Tiki..short for Tiki Tiki Tembo of course. hope you dont mind.

Oh yeah peep that "CYMONE (Brown eyes)" thread in PS when you get a min..Kapone said somethin in there about you and me that i found kind of humerous.

Alright Sand moves to next round....Im leaving this open for an ALL Viewers critique...............

oh yay for you babe