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DaTrusHurtz 08-27-06 09:11 PM

Group A: Untold (2-2) vs. SlayEddie (0-0)
 


It's week 5 bitches. Only 3 more weeks until playoffs begin. A couple good punches will help you secure a good seeding for the playoffs. If you fuck around, you might find yourself not being in the playoffs.

Battler #1: Untold
Battler #2: SlayEddie

Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET)
5 Links in check-in due Sunday afternoon (6:30 pm ET)

Here are a few rules that you SHOULD know already but if not, now you do:
- Feeding IS allowed. Each person will have the chance to feed if they want to. You will not be penalized for feeding.
- If you sway, you WILL be DQ'ed. There are no second chances.. sway and lose. Don't do it and you wont be DQ'ed
- Voting rules are being enforced. If you dont leave links you'll lose. Even if it's a no show win, if you dont leave links.. you lose.
- If you havent read the rules yet, do it now as there are alot of updates.

Good Luck.

Untold 08-28-06 02:45 AM

c h e c k i t .

Slay-Eddie.. 08-28-06 03:43 PM

yep............

Untold 08-30-06 11:17 PM

kid, i'm rich 'n in the news, while this guys a jerk
so i'll keep makin paper, boy.. thats just ur line of work

Slay-Eddie.. 08-31-06 12:42 AM

haha 3 days to write that huh?

look - if you keep spittin trash like that you gonn' stay behind the rear..
You gonn' need atleast three fax machines to get that paper-line to clear..
I kno you embarrased witcha chick more than often..
..When she opens wide to gargle - but the bitch jus ends up flossin..

Slay-Eddie.. 09-01-06 05:11 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234074
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234082
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234081

Slay-Eddie.. 09-01-06 05:25 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234085
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234092

*cant edit

Untold 09-01-06 11:15 PM

fax machin, right..

i'm the truth in the booth, so i spit facts just for my health
but u need a fax machine.. cause u cant process them yaself

NRG 09-02-06 01:19 AM

kid, i'm rich 'n in the news, while this guys a jerk
so i'll keep makin paper, boy.. thats just ur line of work
lol not bad
i'm the truth in the booth, so i spit facts just for my health
but u need a fax machine.. cause u cant process them yaself
lol ok feed

vs


look - if you keep spittin trash like that you gonn' stay behind the rear..
You gonn' need atleast three fax machines to get that paper-line to clear..
uhh no sorry
I kno you embarrased witcha chick more than often..
..When she opens wide to gargle - but the bitch jus ends up flossin..
ok, but not really a hit

untold came here with a decent first punch, and an ok feeded punch, slay came with nothin really, both punches didn't really hit, second punch sounded good but wasn't really directed at untold, so vote untold for havin some hitting punches.

v - Untold

Untold 09-02-06 02:30 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234074
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234082
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234086
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234085
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234092

DaTrusHurtz 09-02-06 02:44 PM

kid, i'm rich 'n in the news, while this guys a jerk
so i'll keep makin paper, boy.. thats just ur line of work
paperboy concept was dope.. i was hoping for a video game reference, but the way ya used it was good too

look - if you keep spittin trash like that you gonn' stay behind the rear..
You gonn' need atleast three fax machines to get that paper-line to clear..
nice feed here, i really liked this a lot, but try makin' ur wording more angry... by simply adding the word faggot, bitch, or whatev, you can make lines a lot better
I kno you embarrased witcha chick more than often..
..When she opens wide to gargle - but the bitch jus ends up flossin..
not dope, but I thought this was decent too

i'm the truth in the booth, so i spit facts just for my health
but u need a fax machine.. cause u cant process them yaself
better wording coulda improved this, but good feed once again

Pretty decent battle right here, y'all got the right idea on what a proper feed is. I could see it going either way, but the opener from Untold was my favorite line so I got him winnin' this. Good effort from Eddie though.

Vote - Untold

JTR 09-03-06 02:03 AM

kid, i'm rich 'n in the news, while this guys a jerk
so i'll keep makin paper, boy.. thats just ur line of work
cool concept, decent fresh punch

look - if you keep spittin trash like that you gonn' stay behind the rear..
You gonn' need atleast three fax machines to get that paper-line to clear..
lmfaooo, dope feed
I kno you embarrased witcha chick more than often..
..When she opens wide to gargle - but the bitch jus ends up flossin..
lame

i'm the truth in the booth, so i spit facts just for my health
but u need a fax machine.. cause u cant process them yaself
ok, decent

Iunno, Slay dropped a DOPE one for his first so I was like, "man he's got this" then he came with that wackness follow up and Untold came with another good punch, so I gotta give it to him for consistency

v/Untold

Aeral 09-03-06 03:28 AM

kid, i'm rich 'n in the news, while this guys a jerk
so i'll keep makin paper, boy.. thats just ur line of work
dope play

look - if you keep spittin trash like that you gonn' stay behind the rear..
You gonn' need atleast three fax machines to get that paper-line to clear..
decent ish
I kno you embarrased witcha chick more than often..
..When she opens wide to gargle - but the bitch jus ends up flossin..
i get it but its ehhh

i'm the truth in the booth, so i spit facts just for my health
but u need a fax machine.. cause u cant process them yaself
nice again man, i like this one

v- untold, he had 2 nice punches. the first was doper, eddie dropped a decent line and a half decent line, untold gets it.

Multi 09-03-06 03:53 PM

kid, i'm rich 'n in the news, while this guys a jerk
so i'll keep makin paper, boy.. thats just ur line of work
COO
i'm the truth in the booth, so i spit facts just for my health
but u need a fax machine.. cause u cant process them yaself
LMAO @ FEED

vs


look - if you keep spittin trash like that you gonn' stay behind the rear..
You gonn' need atleast three fax machines to get that paper-line to clear..
NO
I kno you embarrased witcha chick more than often..
..When she opens wide to gargle - but the bitch jus ends up flossin..
OK, NOT HARD THO



I GOT UNTOLD TAKING THIS ONE FAIRLY EASY


v/UNTIZZLE

J. Luth 09-03-06 07:15 PM

kid, i'm rich 'n in the news, while this guys a jerk
so i'll keep makin paper, boy.. thats just ur line of work
this was nice. good shit
i'm the truth in the booth, so i spit facts just for my health
but u need a fax machine.. cause u cant process them yaself
lmao niceee

vs


look - if you keep spittin trash like that you gonn' stay behind the rear..
You gonn' need atleast three fax machines to get that paper-line to clear..
ehh weak
I kno you embarrased witcha chick more than often..
..When she opens wide to gargle - but the bitch jus ends up flossin..
decent, could of been harder

Overall one sided. Untold dominated this

v/Un


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