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Auspicious vs. ILLunatic
12-16 lines
Im spittin first no feeding no bullshit you should know the rules by now spit when your on |
Aight....
I'm bout ta be out so.. I'll drop around 12c Good luck |
This kid sux ...* like.. DAMN*...
aight.. Ya styles gay, punches aint good, n' niether are you made every thread in the execs forum.... ...................n' hes not even the leader of that crew ya thru, you can play n' whine, try to play off my rhymes but how you gon' be a lunatic? you cant even drop crazy lines im quick to withstand, hes retarded, n' this bitch is my fan? talk about fat.. he ate to many doughboys, n' transformed in the michelan man ! damn.. i got this to stop his constant responses but to be honest.. blah blah, im gay, wack- - why read his verse ^^ thats the whole synopsis.. you cant top this.. write sum shit? naw, he aint even on my margin Retarded, stupid, illiterate <--- he was guilty on all charges i got more personals on him, n' i know nuthin about this queer Elite dont want you, n' i personally dont know why frontlines allowed u here thats weird, hes persistant, i mean shit he's lost every match he's spit in dont get it twisted, He aint ILL, nor a luntatic.. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . So that pretty much sums up his existance |
This bitch droppin personals, like they actually hurt my feelings
As i drop a punch.......... ......its like steppin on a rat, cuz you hear Thug Whyte squeeling "Fucka user title"?.............. why cuz you got nothin witty to say Ya rhymes flow in the shittiest way........ ....Ya sad cuz no one shows love to you, not even on valentines day Auspicous... he's not favorable, hes like a ghost, he hasn't been seen He hasn't been straight up and clean............ .......bitch looks back to the days, see's conflict and has a liquid dream Bitch wanna IM me, challange me to a battle, like he believes he dope I believe it??? nope, his popularity fallin downhill like an avalanch slope Shit, this kids fallin faster then the twin towers, and no one bothers to care Not even worth the stare, his natural flows hideous enough to give a scare No time to prevent, just regret, the time ya spent writtin just ta get bent Its like an eviction, you forgot to pay ya rent, now you homless in a tent ^Wack i kno, i'm not scared to admit it, but kid ya style and image dont fit it Only way it would flow is if i shit it, ya not a rapper...so stop the game and quit it Bitch you gonna end up like your father, locked up and behind some unhealthy bars You jealous over wealthy stars......... ....................... shouldn't of challenged me, its your fault that i delt the cards |
ILLunatic...... why u gonna be a bitch an not drop on our battle from like 3 weeks ago...... cuz u know i whooped your ass....c'mon don't be a puss find the thread an drop a fuckin verse i want that win.....
aight.... |
^Who the fuck is you????
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Virtuoso you got a battle with illmatic
Not me... so step the fuck of up off my dick Get your facts straight.... |
uppin
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lol my bad.... the names are close...... again my bad..... now im uppin this battle..............
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Yea.. Yea.. Yea.. ....................... Blah.. props to auspicious |
uhh no votes.. but thanks corn flake
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Breakdown..
Auspicious: Nice verese In my opinion you started off slow, then you came very good With personals. Structure was real good. An easy read. Your best line “why read his verse ^^ thats the whole synopsis.. you cant top this.. write sum shit? naw, he aint even on my margin Retarded, stupid, illiterate <--- he was guilty on all charges” There were some more quotable however this is what caught my eyes The most.. Nicely done. Breakdown.. ILLunatic : Your verse wasn’t hard hitting not really any quotable I think you can Do better,, I guess you was being lazy. At any rate Your best line “believe it??? nope, his popularity fallin downhill like an avalanch slope” That was pare… Over all Auspicious wins Due to better personals Please vote on my battle honest votes..it’s being slept on http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...727#post1184727 |
Wow! Aus. U couldve came harder But I think u still got this...Ill Dropped some dope shit,
Punches- Both Used played lines nothing really to creative humerous or special, although Aus. Thru More creative punches than ill...Better worded..Just Harder hitting all around Personals- Aus. Had more shit directed towards Ill Than Ill had towards Aus., But Ill U had a couple of Humerous Lines in there, The Thug Whyte SHit is kinda played on Aus. tho.. Flow- Both Came descent , kept it on track w./ there structure, Tie Structure- Tie , Both structures Were similar... Over it came down to Aus. Punches being more creative and humerous and his personals were better directed and nicer..... Good battle Tho V/ Auspicious |
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Aus and Ill came nicely.....seen much better from Aus though...and ILL came good and had a few decent punches here and there..
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lmao...funny...nice punch..your opener was good also Quote:
^nice hit...and decent personal.. Opener - Auspicious Closer - Auspicious Punches - Auspicious (had witty hard hitting ones) Personals - Tie Structure - Auspicious Vocab - Illunatic Vote - Auspicious, for having a hard hitting verse....nice personals...Ill had good personals....but he had kinda weak attempts at hard punches... Please Help Kill One Of These Battles: ~RaPiDfIrE~ vs. Machavelli (3-1) ~RaPiDfIrE~ vs. ven0m (4-0) |
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