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dw VS carsonjetX2
2 min max
all rules spit by thursday night.....gud luk dawg! |
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/dwmusic.htm
^^there it is....beat continues at end didnt realise til i'd uploaded so wen i stop it stops alrite....cudnt be bothered uploadin again! carson nice verse man.....pz heres the lyrics - i jus thought i'd post em up: Snap ya leg at the joint like im cloning bone... U only elevated as a kid but now ya grown… Carsonjet u nothing but a fake ass vet… Bout to battle me dw will leave u in regret… So insignificant its hard to find ya… Bitch u cudnt be ill imported chicken from china… Only beatin opposition spittin 10 at a time… Once surpassin those lines bitch u can’t rhyme… Im like a needle in a haystack..i stand out from the rest… Carson ur wack but u spittin wiv the best… U starin in the eyes of defeat… Man I Stand up ya coffin like u dead on ya feet… You Known on this site 4 the way that u moan… Bitch I cudnt get ya message if u left it on a answer phone… Beatin me? U shudnt even think it… Weld ur barz together n u still cudnt link it… Carson n me its like the mis-match from heaven… Leave u in more shock than America September 11… Cos im as ill as they come…U’ve won battles by the tone.. But the only reason is cos peeps cum in ya bum…. uppin! |
dw
Not bad, certainly not lyrics wise. But ur delivery was kind of choppy. The beat did not compliment ur voice very well.. An above all that, it sounded like u had a cold.. ..Maybe it's the mic, cause i also heared u breathin in it. ..So fix that, or hold it further away from ur mouth. Not bad overall but also the quality was not optimal. CarsonJet Your rich ass probably has better equipment, Cause ur quality was alot better.. ..The singin as intro..a no-no..didnt came out right. But ur delivery after that made up for it. A few blanks, but overall ur delivery & the quality gave u the upper hand. Ok lyric wise. But its audio.. vote CarsonJet |
I thought the flow was good on both verses, Carson's Quality was a little better then DW's. Tho They were both easy to understand so that was good. This battle was pretty close. but i'll have to say my vote goes to DW cause his punches seemed to hit harder in my POV. S'all good.....good battle
Vote = DW |
i gotta say DW takes this one, he had harder punches, an that what won the battle for him,
carson had a wicked intro, he had better delivery, DW had the punhes, an just nabbed the flow |
Hmmm...Wicked battle. Can't wait till I can get my mic and reach this audio.
Carson - Good delivery, ok punches, none that really made me go "ohhhh" tho. Good quality. Good flow. The intro was good, I really like that DW- Another great flow, I noticed some pauses tho...kinda made me puzzled. Carson's quality was a bit better. Great delivery. Ok punches...a lil better than Carson's actually. lol, close as hell battle to tell the truth. Both had great audio's...man i luv dis place. Anyways, Imma go with Carson here. DW did have harder punches...but they didn't blow Carson's out of the water which is why punches didn't decide this battle. Also, Carson had great creativity in that opener of his...and that really gave him the extra push he needed to win. v/- Carson. Great battle guys, i really liked it. Keep doin this kinda stuff. |
carson
you had some good emotion in that audi nice overall lyrics and nice lil flow you had there you could of raised the intensity a lil though cuz its a battle,so show some aggresion ________________________________________ dw ok man you had a nice approach but kinda came choppy be a lil more expressional when spitting lyrics and shit your coming up,so dont let shit bring you down ______________________________________ overall carson got this for better quality/music factor and performance vote Carson but not by much ___________________________________ hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109339 |
Carsonjet, dawg you sound like you spittin with ya momz in the next room. Get tough with that shit. You need a mad up in your delivery, cause ya rhymes may be a lil outdated and reminicent to after school specials (don't be a fool..stay in school!). Concept was nice, if you woulda took your time and memorized that,instead of reading it to the beat, you woulda came out better
Same for d-dub, but he came a lil bit tuffa, so that made the difference for me...Some of the punches are corny, but...nice effort Vote=dw. |
yea.. this was a good battle by both cats..
Jet your emotion was ok, your punches were bout the same, your flow was good, lyrics were pretty good, the beat was nice, quality was nice, but like it said: show more aggression or w/e.. .................................................. ....................................... dw your emotion was eh, your punches were alrite, your flow was ok, the lyrics were alrite, your beat was ok, quality was eh, show some more aggression.. .................................................. ....................................... this was an ok battle from both cats, but ima have to go with jet on this cause he came a lil harder than dw did, it was like 8/10 to 7.5/10.. peace.. vote - carsonjetx2 |
Jet:
u came wit nice quality...i enjoyed listening....nice flow connected wit nice lyrics... yo beat showed emotion...not that agressive but cool..good to undastand...all in all u came up wit cool delivery... DW: mhh the quality was not that good...u came up wit nice punches...good to undastand..i liked yo verse as well....but i think u got less emotion than carsonjet n so it sounded a bit absent... cool battle.....my vote goes to CarsonJet Please look at my battles, the links are the white ones.....everybody sleeps on 'em.... peace! |
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