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Wicked One vs String9487
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20 bars max No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 09-07-04 at 02:56 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 03:00 PM.
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String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 03:00 PM.
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Fuck tha verses you write...
I'll murder you and return ya to tha earth like tha circle of life... You've failed my expectations, and tested my patience... But never elevated to my level, you were left in desperation... This is a 'diss-appointment' you showed up late for... You fake whore, my punchlines don't just crush rhymes, they break boards... I'll take your soul too,kick you in tha sides while niggas hold you... Leave you bent outta shape lookin more like an Oval... Bitch don't move, my lyrics make you still,I am texts truth... I'm so damn ill I could sneeze on tha keyboard and bless you... I'm tha vet who has yet to lose 2 back to back... Fuck droppin keys,if you joined tha 'hip-hop police' you couldn't battle rap... This kid will crack and split in half like tha rest of my enemies... He will remember me as tha man who made him look like a pair of parentheses... You couldn't flex on me if you used more steroids than olympic teams... Your scripts are weak and slept on cuz your dope...in ya dreams... Lyrically your 'ass-backwards', just a confused troubled youth... To be forward wit four letter words your K-C-A-W... Son its true this cat is really wack, you'll never blow up... And your middle lacks and filling, I can see thru you, you have no guts... |
STRING IS IN THE BUILDING
eh yo i'll load the clip n bust it n spit them things at u bigger than the chicken nuggets its too late fam, u too lame man i'll send ya body bustin thru the wall like the kool-aid man dog u been bitch slapped, so get back before i click-clack, big mac's at ya 6-pack ya shits wack, what' this whore gon do? u garbage even "open" mic "closed" the door on u i could get drunk n drop n still b hotter than u uze a bitch, stop rappin switch to pottery dude when i get on a track, like T.I. ya music is "trapt" abusin ya raps, fuck that put 2 in ya back u losin the facts, u shoulda declined this match my punches knock ya posture like ya spine's detached wicked thinkin hes' hot, he livin a fable my rhymes always on like digital cable u aint winnin nuttin, ready to lose the tally u from brooklyn? u gon make Fab wanna move to Cali wicked couldn't beat me if he put 4 verses down cuz im takin niggas to school like Board vs Brown me for him in a battle, thats an evident switch im about to evict RAPVERSE's resident BITCH! HAAAAA |
Voted For: Wicked One
u had sum aiight lyrics mayn it was koo so did string but wicked had this on me cuzz he had more hmm how do i put it more since in his rhymes Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Wicked One
lol .. whata battle ima have to give this one to my boi WickedOne...my boi came fire...lmao Wicked one damn you boi you had a sick verse... you .. had some sick ,decent punchlines... some were hitten hard ..and breakin his jaw... but some where just light punches giving him bruses..lol..naa'mean... multies were good .. some of them were alittle off at times... personals were there but i really wasnt feelin it that much... structure was alittle off some lines were alittle streteched but it still mad your verse okay to read... overall you had a nice and well rounded verse 8.5/10 String9487 damn son you surprised me alot..when we first battled you came weak ass hell....but here you came mad hard playa..but im sorry you cam alittle short..punchline were decent some hitten hard.. but some just feel off...multies were decent.... personals were decent ...overall you had another well rounded verse... but Wicked took this one sorry... vote-wicked return the favor me vs troop thankz |
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i voted for wicked cuzz he had better punches and his punches where decent he had sum ill rhymes mayn
string u was nice to u had sum nice punches but overrall i think wicked got my vote |
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