New Acapella!! Leave links!!
The songs is just an acapella on a verse i wrote here's the link and enjoy :thumbup:
the song: http://www.soundclick.com/fotrill links: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2631670 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2631701 |
this shit was dope, quite a few quotable lines, and the closin bar was nasty- track is spoken wordish, kinda reminds me of the acca on the bis 2000 b.c album-
"my 5 fingers said to my dick... ima beat that ass"- "should say peace out, but yall blow like a sneeze, clasp ya dome, squeeze ya teeth out- ya show ya peice out, leave my knees 6 feet in ya feces leak out like a pcp drout" haha i like the way you write, keep droppin |
pretty dope, I like your flow, the only thing thats a downfall on this was that you can't keep your flow going. You always pause then do that blah blah blah and then pause, try and keep a steady flow man. but it's pretty dope, you have a pretty funny style to the way you write lol. the beans line was funny lol.
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why u doin acapella? lol
its pretty good but i cant reall rate ya flow r shit..lyrics r coo, nice emotion n delivery. nice drop.. http://community.rapverse.com/showt...103#post2632103 holla back^^^^^ Feed used 1/24/06 "Hold That" |
accapellas allways easier to flow, lol.
this is good, a few nice lines that stood out making it more affective. Feed used 1/25/06 "Poetik Karma" |
yoru voice is odd
id liek to hear you rhyme to a ebat alot of quotables id like ot hear you on a track with tito flwo there wasnt a beat to follow so it was prety cool |
Pretty nice lines in there...
Can't wait to hear an actual track. Good shit. RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220491 |
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yeah those r my fav'S to lol Quote:
then peep my other tracks on soundclick :laugh: Quote:
Here's the story...i got a big ass box in my room full of rhymes and i was goin through it tryin to find some shit to record and i found this verse which i liked but forgot about and i rapped it...so i was like "this would make a tight acapella" got to the studio and tried to put it to a beat but i wasnt feelin it so i told my man to just press record and i spit it. THANX FOR THE FEED EVERYBODY |
listning......................
voice is ight................................ flow is good seems to be anyway.......................... deleivery is good................ lyrics r sikkness.........funny to .................... yeah i def i wanna hear this track...................... if this was a free your dope.....................if not it was dope anyway Feed used 1/26/06 "fresh like me" |
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LOL no it's not but thanx for the feed |
return tha fav on my fresh like me track please and thank you
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aight thats cool
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nice multis broken up through out... lacked emotion in parts... fucked with the vocabulary in this... kept the ass ending a bit too long to have no real multis in that section... Lyrically sound for the most part... would like to hear it behind a beat to see how it really flows...
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thanx for the feed
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how so? |
ok..da lyricz is str8 on hea got sum nice lines but othaz were kinda eh nahmean...flows coo...deliverys aight could've been more consistent thru out da track tho...overall dis was ok nahmean...
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