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G Deuce 05-16-05 06:57 PM

Wickedclown vs L.I.
 

Battle Rules:

-[pSa]-DYNASTY vs Degree
Text Battle

10 line max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 05-19-05 at 06:57 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 05-16-05 07:13 PM

L.I. has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-16-05 07:13 PM.

System 05-18-05 05:17 PM

Wickedclown has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-18-05 05:17 PM.

L.I.3 05-18-05 09:14 PM

I'll school you in text or basketball, yah in for a sonning
Cause his punches r like air ball's the way they hit nothing
Even his girl abused him, by the end ill have my fun
Cuz I'll smack a bitch while you just get slapped by one
This ugly fuck is gon call it quits, who cares, fine
Cuz this kid recedes more than his fucking hairline
Cut the crap, lets talk verses and how much he missed me
Wick flips my punches so much, my structure got dizzy
He has no chance at winning it, so give it all your worth b
L.I. dropped dead gorgeous in this battle, Wick stopped after the 4th D

Wickedclown 05-18-05 10:29 PM

haha look...

everyone says "oh my god LIs so ownage at text"
switch the quote around and drown like all the rest *bitch*
faggot used to be known for sonnin cats right and left
now ya ass is broke tryin to Drive hard like Unicef
leavin ya chin cleft, boilin u like radioactive compounds
in the game ya just a bus boy rydin greyhounds
gettin shit crackin in here and i aint talkin bout ya voice
ya crew fucked up, this kid cant rap they made tha wrong choice
ths 'emcees indistructible' even had his 'jersey retired'
used to spit meaningful lyrics now ya leavin me uninspired

Grave Digger 05-18-05 10:48 PM

Voted For: L.I.

L.I.
I'll school you in text or basketball, yah in for a sonning
Cause his punches r like air ball's the way they hit nothing
ok, not hard, but ok 5/10
Even his girl abused him, by the end ill have my fun
Cuz I'll smack a bitch while you just get slapped by one
haha, nice 7/10
This ugly fuck is gon call it quits, who cares, fine
Cuz this kid recedes more than his fucking hairline
NO! played 0/10
Cut the crap, lets talk verses and how much he missed me
Wick flips my punches so much, my structure got dizzy
good, kinda played though, 6/10
He has no chance at winning it, so give it all your worth b
L.I. dropped dead gorgeous in this battle, Wick stopped after the 4th D
ok lol, nice, 8/10
overall = 28/50
Nice lines, but some were played, closer was nice, bitch slap line was good, I know you didn't try against this guy your hardest though, but overall it was good, and stayed solid

Wicked Clown:
everyone says "oh my god LIs so ownage at text"
switch the quote around and drown like all the rest *bitch*
your just saying "I wanna drown you" 2/10
faggot used to be known for sonnin cats right and left
now ya ass is broke tryin to Drive hard like Unicef
you suprised me, this was ok, but not good, 5/10
leavin ya chin cleft, boilin u like radioactive compounds
in the game ya just a bus boy rydin greyhounds
not good man, 2/10
gettin shit crackin in here and i aint talkin bout ya voice
ya crew fucked up, this kid cant rap they made tha wrong choice
um, no! 1/10
ths 'emcees indistructible' even had his 'jersey retired'
used to spit meaningful lyrics now ya leavin me uninspired
blah, 2/10
overall = 12/50
meh, you had one ok line, weren't consistent, your personals were all in your set-ups, shoulda made punches out of them, that's what made you lose in my eyes

v/ L.I.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Wickedclown 05-18-05 10:50 PM

lmao jack the ripper who has beef with me... hmmmmm wow... ok hate vote to be deleted

...Voke... 05-18-05 11:03 PM

Voted For: Wickedclown

L.I.
I'll school you in text or basketball, yah in for a sonning
Cause his punches r like air ball's the way they hit nothing
you should know this is played boooooo!
Even his girl abused him, by the end ill have my fun
Cuz I'll smack a bitch while you just get slapped by one
meh...ok
This ugly fuck is gon call it quits, who cares, fine
Cuz this kid recedes more than his fucking hairline
PLLLLAAAAAAYYYYYED like a PS2
Cut the crap, lets talk verses and how much he missed me
Wick flips my punches so much, my structure got dizzy
ight
He has no chance at winning it, so give it all your worth b
L.I. dropped dead gorgeous in this battle, Wick stopped after the 4th D
ha ha ha ha ah ha aha NO......

you came wack from what i've seen this was one of your gay verse gayer than guys gettin ass raped

6.0/10

WC
everyone says "oh my god LIs so ownage at text"
switch the quote around and drown like all the rest *bitch*
personal.......ok ok
faggot used to be known for sonnin cats right and left
now ya ass is broke tryin to Drive hard like Unicef
nice meta, punch
leavin ya chin cleft, boilin u like radioactive compounds
in the game ya just a bus boy rydin greyhounds
again nice wordplay.....hmmmmm
gettin shit crackin in here and i aint talkin bout ya voice
ya crew fucked up, this kid cant rap they made tha wrong choice
this was meh..not feelin it like i was numb
ths 'emcees indistructible' even had his 'jersey retired'
used to spit meaningful lyrics now ya leavin me uninspired
was ight

you had a better overall verse with some nice wordpay


7.0/10

V/Wickedclown

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

DV8 05-18-05 11:27 PM

which 1 of you's have me blacklisted..?
honestly?...bigpapa76..? or li..? cuz thats some weak ass shit
.
daz wouldve posted this
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I'll school you in text or basketball, yah in for a sonning
Cause his punches r like air ball's the way they hit nothing
^^SIMPLE, SHORT BUT OK OPENER
Even his girl abused him, by the end ill have my fun
Cuz I'll smack a bitch while you just get slapped by one
^^EH, WEAK SHIT L.I
This ugly fuck is gon call it quits, who cares, fine
Cuz this kid recedes more than his fucking hairline
^^FILLER N REALLY WASNT FEELIN IT
Cut the crap, lets talk verses and how much he missed me
Wick flips my punches so much, my structure got dizzy
^^NICE SHIT, BEST BAR N PUNCH SO FAR
He has no chance at winning it, so give it all your worth b
L.I. dropped dead gorgeous in this battle, Wick stopped after the 4th D
^^NICE CLOSER
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WEAK AT FIRST BUT YA VERSE PICKED UP AFTERWARDS
SOME LINES HAD NO REAL PERSONAL N WERE MORE LESS
REALLY WEAK IN A SENSE, BUT OVERALL, WELL WORDED..
METAS WERE OK,..........DECENT DROP..
BUT HMM, WHERES THE PERSONALS..?
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everyone says "oh my god LIs so ownage at text"
switch the quote around and drown like all the rest *bitch*
^^NAH, SHIT WAS WORDED AWFULLY WRONG
faggot used to be known for sonnin cats right and left
now ya ass is broke tryin to Drive hard like Unicef
^^NICE BAR, IT ACUALLY HAS SUBSTANTIAL MEANING TOO
leavin ya chin cleft, boilin u like radioactive compounds
in the game ya just a bus boy rydin greyhounds
^%^PUNCH WAS WEAK.....NOT A GOOD BAR
gettin shit crackin in here and i aint talkin bout ya voice
ya crew fucked up, this kid cant rap they made tha wrong choice
^^BLAH, HELL NO,
ths 'emcees indistructible' even had his 'jersey retired'
used to spit meaningful lyrics now ya leavin me uninspired
^^WAS OK, BUT REAL WEAK FOR A CLOSER
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OVERALL I GOTTA GO WITH L.I, EVEN THOUGH I HATE VOTIN
FOR A AT THAT NEVER HAS PERSONALS..............
PZ^^ST8 UP HONEST VOTE.......

Wickedclown 05-19-05 05:42 AM

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^uppin.................... ...................

Status 05-19-05 05:49 AM

This was feedback posted for L.I.
 
ummm......sounded like you won but dont fell like posting real feedback......but checking polls

Young-Prophecy 05-19-05 02:09 PM

This was feedback posted for Wickedclown
 
Checking Polls.................................~1~

Intrepid 05-19-05 03:22 PM

uppin for the fam, ayo how did jtr's vote get dq'd when its the same exact type as voke's vote? that's bullshit.

G Deuce 05-19-05 04:52 PM

This was feedback posted for Wickedclown
 
Nice drops both of you............................and good luck in the crew battle.................

Wickedclown 05-19-05 09:25 PM

uppin................................


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