First rap..need help..
 

OK guys, I know Im retarded for posting here, but this is where the best are and figured it would be an easy task. I ahve 2 friends who battle every week and who hoenstly kick ass. Im looking to write one myself bc I suck so bad, never done it. Im doing ti strictly for the humor factor. I just want one I can memorize and apout out..completely random and retarded topics are fine. If anyone is willing to help please post here

If you have AIM give me the name or put it in your profile

also i want it to be like making fun of me..im white..yes..and how retard i msut look/sound trying to do this...complete humor factor

check PMs realist

ok, ill help you as well, if you want?

yo man i need help man
i need to learn how to alevate
what ever thet means

Dawg you need to elevate at spellin.
Just practice and read a lot of other battles and open mics and over time you'll elevate.

By the way....elevate means improve

lame thats all i can say lol

lol reven is funny - your sheer existence is humourous to me... who writes a rap degrading their own race and personality? i mean cmon

Hey, thats white people for you ;)

naw jus joking, I think its lame using hip hop as an excuse to make yourself mor funny. its an insult.

^ hey, im white! good that you were joking about that

but yeah, it sucks - its insulting to everyone, including himself

lmfao ^