Darkmanner vs DiDiSi-Mp-Lucif
 

Battle Rules:

8 Bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Unlimited Time Limit

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-02-07 at 01:19 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

DiDiSi-Mp-Lucif has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-07 01:19 PM.

-grabs mic-
aiight imma get warmed up wit sum multis and wind it down to punchlines
-spits-

my "piston throats" "mystic tones" "rips this clones" "skin from bones".
a "crimson cold" "liquid flows", "listen, foes" "risk thier souls".
ill "battle this dickhead", "shatter his written"s in a "matter of minutes".
"infallible vision" leaves u "faggots in fission", none "forshadow my mission".
my rhymes are "second to none", i "sever ya young" "veteren lungs",
leave ya breathless, death spits from my "venemous tounge",

-stops-
aiight lets try some punchlines...
-spits-

try listenin to mic-nificence, i indite dividends,
ur idea of tight writtens -blow- like nitro glycerin,
u'd have to dig n scrape for weed, even if u were down wit puffs, (p. diddy)
cause, see, u couldnt pull hoes if u were in a garden club, (hos)
a whack n frail fat male, ur train of thought on a track... needs rails,
and u couldnt touch my rhymes... even if i rapped in braile,
u couldnt spit hot shit in a scat flick, lets pull apart the factors,
darkness gimmicks, actor or rappa? heres proof* i eat dark manner..

http://www.chocolat.com/browseproducts/Manner-Dark-Chocolate-Covered-Hazelnut-Wafer-(case-of-12-wafers).html

* = the "fuck u imma prove it" line about me in the thread we were in on lyrical lounge

-throws mic down-
aiight.. mm okay since its like my first battle here
can i get some tips on what i need to elevate?

Darkmanner has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-07 01:53 PM.

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..........have a win on the house :thumbup:

Voted For: Darkmanner

D.M because his was easier to read.
werd.

uppin this shiiit........................................

This was feedback posted for Darkmanner
 

w.............T..............F !!

you have no idea how little i care about text battling...lighten up poetic lol

Voted For: Darkmanner

AAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAH

Voted For: DiDiSi-Mp-Lucif

That verse was nice...seriously.
But since Darkmanner never posted a verse, I can't really explain why you won, it's obvious.

Voted For: Darkmanner

ur lines were so much better...alls he did was nothing atleast urs was original

Voted For: DiDiSi-Mp-Lucif

Obviously voting for you, I dont understand why Dark Mannner would give you the win?>
But whatever,,,

This was feedback posted for DiDiSi-Mp-Lucif
 

Okay well this is gay! I think you won im not sure!

Voted For: DiDiSi-Mp-Lucif

flow: did
punches: did ( decent )
multie: did ( decent )
wordplay: did
diss: did

did won this bottomline

while toss this battle cuz he knew he couldnt fuck with him