Unfinished:The Pay Back-Delinquint
 

http://s2.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=D...6D2817B794778C9
^go here and tell me whatchu think bout it

holla back

the beginning was alright...and the hook i like but your flow is kinda basic...and the beat drowns your voice out alot..but it's ok kiddo..alright drop

return the fav
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=151711

ight thanks for the feed uppin more

just a word of advice... start peepin other songs in the forum and leave feedback on at least two or phenom gonna shut this thread down.... ez Ima peep this and edit the thread later.