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Mimesis vs 9th Degree
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10-50 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting THESE ARE THE ONLY PEOPLE WHO CAN VOTE ON THIS.. 1. Socrates 2. Doomsday 3. Nostradamus 4. Jack The Ripper 5. Soul Rebel 6. SPuL aka Reckless 7. Daubs 8. DaTrusHurtz 9. Hotshh! ..WE ONLY NEEDED 9 PEOPLE, SO THAT'S IT. Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 08-09-05 at 04:26 AM Must drop verse in 240 minutes after check in. |
9th Degree has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-05 12:53 AM.
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I'm the text janitor, so all the trash will get ripped in a sentence
Takin' this in a clean sweep, 'cuz it's my job to get rid of the Mesis This vet is, forcin' his processor, but his drops make Degree snore It's so effortless, I'll smash this mouse even when I keybored You'll leave torn, shredded to a point beyond repair Straight up be mowed down so fast that you're fuckin' lawn gets scared Got this rare, battle on our hands, and you can say you doubt But keep that chip on your shoulder, I'll feel Frito Lay you out Without a doubt, you got no game, past lovers say you soft Wear the pants in relationships, girls don't want you to take 'em off Your following is like pirated music, you proceed to spar And even after you get burned we all c-d/r Ye be scarred, from parental abuse, I'ma beat ya ass, son Mum's the word, so I won't blatently express that you don't have one I've opened up shop, you'll get carted away in a heap Think your disscounts as good? I hope you kept the receipt Blah, g'luck Mim. :thumbup: |
Mimesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-05 01:52 AM.
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Alright,
I think I'm going to start out with some personal shit.. and then just rip this fag.. Fuck your played nameplays and elemantry ass style kid.. Check it out, Right now hes in his prime.. He won King Of Rapverse.. just wrecking dudes While I took a break for 6 months.. and STILL have more respect then you Everything said from you sucks.. so now I'll just fucking mess with your raps Lead to victory? Fuck kid, YOU FOLLOW ME TO EVERY SITE I REGISTER AT Dont try wrecking the facts.. from RM to Bboys.. shit, aint nobody faking But I'll keep telling you where.. cause I can use that boost in the rankings Let's just take your IMs.. BigPaul148: You know any good sites?.. just waiting for that.. Because every fucking time we talk.. it's you asking me where to elevate at Ima rape your raps.. take that suspension as a warning for what you past said Cause when I say I'Macreep.. it's cause this time I'ma leave your ass dead I fucking blast heads.. just beat you with my raps until you fucking see letters Man, it's my Konquest to beat you.. ..and I ain't talking how I mod the league better Time to see if I can test your "dopeness".. Stepping to me, man.. I'll leave your brain straight rattled.. Thinkin I'd come with garbage.. man, you gotta find your own way to this battle Saddled on greatness, droppin bombs so its no surprise your crouched there Cause I'm always fucking gro'in.. while you're just keeping your mouth there Out here youre nothing.. wack punches, gay style, shit i hammer the best kids And I would rip your wordplay.. but elemantarys still use it as grammar lessons You aint even testing me.. you're just gay as fuck, just say your a whore kid Cause a faggot would be bundle of sticks.. so where the fuck is your rain forest? I'll leave you in pain for this.. aint on my level.. you just gonna be talkin and lose Man, you're trailing me so far.. lewis and clark decided to start walkin with you Ain't nobody jocking this dude.. you did win a tourney, and ill take a peak, see Now you're so fucking washed up whales hopped off the endangered species Cats is waiting to see me.. while youre just a fag, you think you the best, dyke I'll come with so many hard blows.. your girlfriend will compare it to your sex life I'm the best, why? cause i always going for the win.. while you just park it Plus, 9th aint bringing the gold so much.. Midas saved the fucking stock market As I target your raps.. I harvest the facts.. even your sex life is past and gone Cause this faggot is so addicted to gay anal.. he gets horny at the crack of dawn 9th raps we yawn.. I won't even dress up for this.. hes already spouting cries Cause I'm either gonna put knock him on the decor the fucking patio outside Shout and whine.. but why question my skill? i wont make you wait for an answer Dude winds up on the floor so much people mistake him for a Jamaican dancer Take your stand bitch.. ill knock your shit down, cause all im seein's a lame Fags got so much garbage Bruin.. hockey gave up another season in shame Ya still keyin the same shit.. but your always rejected.. never one to concur 9th gets shown the door so much.. Home Depot is now his number one sponsor Just watch yourself.. I'm beating your ass.. and now you best watch your neck kid With my fists lodged so far in your face you now get free continental breakfasts F this.. but I did hear your audios.. nice shit man, i see your game is moving Such Radio material.. directors are begging you to help remake the movie De-toothing this retard.. but thanks for the call, even though you just talking bull Cause nobody will see you as any less of man.. that just aint humanly possible Watch this whole spit.. 9th's full of shit.. just a wannabe, but whats worse is I can swear that you suck.. but I refuse to just randomly cuss in my verses The worst bitch.. seriously, dont step to me.. ive already wrecked your place Your spits are hard pressed.. while mine are pressed hard against your face Just a waste of concepts.. I already beat your fag shit.. dont you see im right Fuck, I've beaten the apple of your eye into enough cider to feed this site Shut.. the.. fuck.. up. |
Lol. No beef or anything yo. My battle verses just look better when I post them like I'm mad.
I still can't believe you only went 16 lines.. I went 50 I think.. |
This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
i cant vote???? no one trusts my judgin skills???? :( lmao, but wow at the line difference......... good job mim
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Your following is like pirated music, you proceed to spar
And even after you get burned we all c-d/r and I fucking blast heads.. just beat you with my raps until you fucking see letters Man, it's my Konquest to beat you.. ..and I ain't talking how I mod the league better were the best lines of the battle (or the hardest i laughed in it) and also the "crack of dawn" and the "Bruin" line also were pretty great but not as good as that personal to me........ |
This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
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This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
Ill Verse Son Shit Was Dope Good Battle Tho.........
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Voted For: Mimesis
9th: I'm the text janitor, so all the trash will get ripped in a sentence Takin' this in a clean sweep, 'cuz it's my job to get rid of the Mesis -Nah. Woulda worked better if the rhymescheme locked up more but even still it was a reach. This vet is, forcin' his processor, but his drops make Degree snore It's so effortless, I'll smash this mouse even when I keybored - Ha, you know where this came fomr, lol. Woulda hit harder for me if I didn't mold on it, but its still pretty solid. You'll leave torn, shredded to a point beyond repair Straight up be mowed down so fast that you're fuckin' lawn gets scared - nah. It's "okay" but a reach. Seems liek you're dry on material so far man. Specially since there's only beed 1 bit of nameplay so far and everything else has been 'generics' Got this rare, battle on our hands, and you can say you doubt But keep that chip on your shoulder, I'll feel Frito Lay you out - Hm, another one. Didn't work then and there for the same reason it dosent' work here and now. Tha's not wordplay, that's textplay. No on in life would pronounce "Frito" as "freetoo" they pronounce it as "Free toe" so the wordplay just isn't there. Also, where's any personals?? Without a doubt, you got no game, past lovers say you soft Wear the pants in relationships, girls don't want you to take 'em off - again, a generic. no personals at all. Not really any impact, just seems nice whne you say it. Your following is like pirated music, you proceed to spar And even after you get burned we all c-d/r How is his following like pirated music? Who spars with mirated music? Forced. Coulda nailed this WAY harder. Ye be scarred, from parental abuse, I'ma beat ya ass, son Mum's the word, so I won't blatently express that you don't have one - He dosent' have an ass?? No man. Once againm not personal and jsut plain weak. He dosen't have an ass??...cmon man...really I've opened up shop, you'll get carted away in a heap Think your disscounts as good? I hope you kept the receipt - nice, but once again not personal in the least. Aside from the pseudo-wordplay in the second bar, this whole verse seemed canned liek something you had waiting for ages and I'd have legitimately thoguht so if I dind't see some of those lines before they got here. Why'd you only go 16 lines in a 50 line battle? Mime: Right now hes in his prime.. He won King Of Rapverse.. just wrecking dudes While I took a break for 6 months.. and STILL have more respect then you - LOL, good opener. Set the whole plate up on this one. Everything said from you sucks.. so now I'll just fucking mess with your raps Lead to victory? Fuck kid, YOU FOLLOW ME TO EVERY SITE I REGISTER AT - wow, lol. Keeping up the steam so far . I hate the fact that you A: announced how your verse was gonna evolve, and B: segmented it. Dont try wrecking the facts.. from RM to Bboys.. shit, aint nobody faking But I'll keep telling you where.. cause I can use that boost in the rankings - not bad. kinda funny. Let's just take your IMs.. BigPaul148: You know any good sites?.. just waiting for that.. Because every fucking time we talk.. it's you asking me where to elevate at - now you're jsut going for the jugular, lol. I can tell ou werent' too jolly about this battle. Pretty hard hittin line. Ima rape your raps.. take that suspension as a warning for what you past said Cause when I say I'Macreep.. it's cause this time I'ma leave your ass dead - maybe I missed osmething, but I didn't get it. I fucking blast heads.. just beat you with my raps until you fucking see letters Man, it's my Konquest to beat you.. ..and I ain't talking how I mod the league better - not bad. The deliv was there but the concept it self wans't like "wow, he kileld him". Wasnt that calibur of an event to really get a heavy impat from. Time to see if I can test your "dopeness".. Stepping to me, man.. I'll leave your brain straight rattled.. Thinkin I'd come with garbage.. man, you gotta find your own way to this battle - ahahh good one. this battle's already over but I'll keep on reading anyway, lol Saddled on greatness, droppin bombs so its no surprise your crouched there Cause I'm always fucking gro'in.. while you're just keeping your mouth there - LOOKS nice but it dosen't work. Textplay and soooooooooooooooooooooooooo close to being a great line. Out here youre nothing.. wack punches, gay style, shit i hammer the best kids And I would rip your wordplay.. but elemantarys still use it as grammar lessons - eh. Again with the event thing. You aint even testing me.. you're just gay as fuck, just say your a whore kid Cause a faggot would be bundle of sticks.. so where the fuck is your rain forest? - lol pretty good one. Nice use of the imagery, but youre punkin out on the rhymescheme. I'll leave you in pain for this.. aint on my level.. you just gonna be talkin and lose Man, you're trailing me so far.. lewis and clark decided to start walkin with you lol, good line, but you're straight up FORCING the rhymescheme now jsut to get to the concept. Easy to tell since the first line makes virtually no sense, so you nac see its' all for the punches rhyme scheme. Ain't nobody jocking this dude.. you did win a tourney, and ill take a peak, see Now you're so fucking washed up whales hopped off the endangered species - not bad. Not great but not bad. Cats is waiting to see me.. while youre just a fag, you think you the best, dyke I'll come with so many hard blows.. your girlfriend will compare it to your sex life - nice try but you essentially made him look better by saying this. I'm the best, why? cause i always going for the win.. while you just park it Plus, 9th aint bringing the gold so much.. Midas saved the fucking stock market - maybe its' a refference to some shit I never found out here or something but it falls flat. As I target your raps.. I harvest the facts.. even your sex life is past and gone Cause this faggot is so addicted to gay anal.. he gets horny at the crack of dawn lol, good one. 9th raps we yawn.. I won't even dress up for this.. hes already spouting cries Cause I'm either gonna put knock him on the decor the fucking patio outside say what?? Doing the same thing with the rhymescheme agian. Text signature. Shout and whine.. but why question my skill? i wont make you wait for an answer Dude winds up on the floor so much people mistake him for a Jamaican dancer - heh, not bad. Not one of these lines in the second chunk of this is parsonal at all so esentialyl it's all jsut a show of ability. Take your stand bitch.. ill knock your shit down, cause all im seein's a lame Fags got so much garbage Bruin.. hockey gave up another season in shame - AHH you fuck, this line went limp as hel lbut coulda been fuckin killer. Also, shoulda used a boston wordplay in it, woulda been an easy kill. Ya still keyin the same shit.. but your always rejected.. never one to concur 9th gets shown the door so much.. Home Depot is now his number one sponsor - lol pretty good.As I said before, not personal, but good lines no doubt. Just watch yourself.. I'm beating your ass.. and now you best watch your neck kid With my fists lodged so far in your face you now get free continental breakfasts - eh, pretty hard reach on this one. Seems liek you're jsut burning off some extra liens you had laying around. F this.. but I did hear your audios.. nice shit man, i see your game is moving Such Radio material.. directors are begging you to help remake the movie lol, good one. I'm gonna bet not many people will get this, lol. De-toothing this retard.. but thanks for the call, even though you just talking bull Cause nobody will see you as any less of man.. that just aint humanly possible - waste of space. shoulda left this one on the bench. Also, youre straight up abusing the rhythm for the rhymecheme now man. Watch this whole spit.. 9th's full of shit.. just a wannabe, but whats worse is I can swear that you suck.. but I refuse to just randomly cuss in my verses - I got it but it was boring. Still not personal, jsut aimed. The worst bitch.. seriously, dont step to me.. ive already wrecked your place Your spits are hard pressed.. while mine are pressed hard against your face not bad. BOOOOOOOOO for the single syl scheme. Just a waste of concepts.. I already beat your fag shit.. dont you see im right Fuck, I've beaten the apple of your eye into enough cider to feed this site - Creative at the least. People don't eat cider though so some mongoloids somewhere are gonna say it was great but in reality it missed. For a closer you dropped the ball on this one, but it's still strnog enough to have killed him about 36-40 lines ago. I hate doing line by line breakdowns but figured I would anywho. Pretty clear who my ote is going for and why for both technique and execution, but both yall should be ashamed for fucking the flows up so bad AND the arid wasteland that was your personals. You guys should def strive for better than that since all them miscellanous generics you put out could have easily been flipepd to personals and make for a way harder hitting verse like "DAMMMNNN SON!! WHY YOU STYILL A MEMBER OF THE SITE!! HE KILLED YOU!!" By sheer volume alone 9th couldnt' have won this unless the other verse @ 50 liens was straight assage. With that said, Vote: Mimesis. |
This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
i cant vote therefore i wont even break anything down or say who i think won....but god damn mim you wrote a novel....9th you had some good punches, that keybored line was wack as fuck though, and mim you had some good punches, it was just too damn long.....since im not on the voters list i wont go into any further detail....so checkin polls
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This was feedback posted for Mimesis
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This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
shizzle, epic battle for both........wish 9th woulda done more though
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This was feedback posted for Mimesis
wow 50 lines against 16? i wonder who's gonna win lol... dope battle
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